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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 36
The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 36
Previously~~~~~~~~~~~~
Bette and Tina were so connected, so emotionally entwined that Bette had reached her climax simply by making love to her soul mate. They had both experienced orgasms so intense, so powerful, so breath-taking and consuming that neither understood just what had transpired between them. As Bette trembled in her girlfriend’s arms, the lovers settled quietly into the afterglow of their lovemaking, oblivious to the quiet footsteps moving away from them. The woman who’d accidentally caught them making love attempted to make her exit, shaking her head against the images she’d seen as she’d stood glued to the floor in front of a bedroom door that had never been closed.
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The lovers were quiet, the sound of their shallow breathing filling the room. Tina held on tightly to the woman in her arms; her heart so full of love that it was overflowing, slipping down her cheeks and landing in her girlfriend’s soft curls. They were pressed tightly together, skin to skin, and yet Tina still didn’t feel as if they were close enough. She couldn’t get close enough to Bette. Even if she could somehow unzip the soft caramel skin, slip inside next to her lover’s soul and embrace the essence of Bette, that still would not be close enough. Tina exhaled and kissed her girlfriend’s forehead one more time.
She opened her mouth to express her love when a loud crash, exclamation of pain, and a noisy fall echoed from downstairs.
Tina sat up and looked over to the door, her heart pounding in her chest at the realization that the door had never been closed. “What was that?”, she whispered.
Bette followed her lover’s gaze and wiped at her eyes, her fears growing exponentially. Had someone heard them? Had someone seen them? If so, who could it be?
“Oh my God. We didn’t close the door.”, Bette whispered.
An agonizing moan floated up the steps and the lovers couldn’t ignore their visitor. “Who is that?”, Bette whispered.
She and Tina shared a look before she slipped off the bed and grabbed the robe hanging on the back of her door. After tossing a worried look toward her girlfriend, she headed out of the room and down the hall as Tina’s cheeks grew crimson and she slipped her naked body under the covers.
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OCD says
Totally and completely AWESOME MTS.. I mean OMG i wondered where Kit was in the story but WOW. That was soooo GOOD!!!!!
downlow95 says
Whew! A totally unexpected surprise! Well done!
truBlue says
I didn’t even think of Kit. Good one MTS! Is Tina going to be relieved or freak out from the close call?
btownjuli says
you are so sly…i didnt even think of kit! that was a relief!
mstx says
K
Excellent chapter. Glad it was Kit and that she is cool with it. Love this, can’t wait for more. Don’t stay gone too long :)
Seahurst says
KIT!!! I didn’t think of her either! Perfect surprise…perfect!!
ChakaSB says
Whew! Good conversation with Kit. Great chapter.
marsupial says
WONDERFUL THANKS
ecstasythrumusic says
I never thought of Kit either. Loving this story.
Bronwyn says
KIT! of course! It never crossed my mind, but now it makes perfect sense lol!
Thanks for another awesome chapter :)
kasbre says
wow MTS you totally caught me by surprise. I nver thought about it being Kit. Great interaction between Kit& Bette.
Precious Shadow says
MTS, Obviously you have had that awesome experience of mutual bonding, as have I. It happened with my first love (she has since died) and has never happened since. A truly mind blowing experience and you captured it so well. Thank you for bringing back those long forgotten, beautiful memories.
moonshadow says
Thank goodness-WHEW!!! I am so glad I was wrong about who it was! So glad that you brought Kit into the pic! I love it that she is as supportive of Bette as always. Thanks, this was a fantastic post!!!!
albeez says
shouting from the treetops MTS has posted. dayum, didnt think of kit either. i so love this story. i love the whole growing up together idea. thanks for such good writing and post soon.
shades says
Wonderful chapter! So glad it was Kit. Please don’t let Tina freak out to much. Anxiously awaiting your next chapter!!!
jade23 says
you are damn good writer MTS! :) I was absolutely sure it was Vivian.. glad I was mistaken:) thanks for post.
TiBetteShipper says
*Lets out the biggest sigh of relief ever* I’m soooo happy you introduced us to Kit and that it was she that saw them!! I totally wasn’t expecting that. Awesome chapter, MTS. I feel kinda bad for Tina though, she must still be scared to death! Hehe
t-boz says
It’s great that Kit is still the Kit we love and adore. Great that the sisters are bonding, how could they not, after their shared experience. That was great.
rosie says
Such a great twist, you are tricky. Love this story.
special_ed1845 says
THe echo is back!!!
“Pregnant.”, Kit repeated.
“Pregnant?”
“Pregnant.” Kit replied
lol
I was disappointed that Bette and Tina’s voyeaur was Kit at first….but now I’m glad it was KIt. Terrific Job.
YOu get two special points.
jbealsfan says
I so didnt see that coming! Wow I really love this story, and I love you for writing it. This is the best story by far that I have ever read. Cant wait for the next post.
JBlover4life says
I wasn’t thinking of Kit at all. I forgot she wasn’t in this story. Good way to bring her into it. So now they both confided secrets with eachother. Excellent chapter. I can’t wait for more. Please post soon :)
AmandaMG says
MTS… well i’m with the others.. never thought of Kit… so glad it was her and not any of the others… hopefullt tinw will not freak out… love your story…please continue
Fa6Fa6 says
WOW i never thought of that one..
great chappy, loved the whole i’m preg convo..
tylo says
OMG!!!!! so glad it was kit post soon
robbeedee says
MTS,
You have raised the bar so high that most other authors can’t even see it and yet you always manage to raise a little bit higher each time. I am so thrilled at seeing another fine post from you.
Brilliant twist by introducing Kit at this point. At least Bette has another supporter in her family abet one which is a bit of a black sheep. Just like Aunt Karen. Acorns don’t fall far from the Oak, I guess.
This is the simplest of scenes as Bette and Kit talk but given your talent and skill it has become a living a breathing entity full of promise, emotion and much satisfaction for the readers.
Thanks you for sharing this wondrous tale with me. I am truly gratiful to be a part of this pleasure.
Your Loyal fan.
ut says
You know, I don’t know how to tell you this and hope you don’t call me a liar. Ok when I read your last chapter and about who’s at the door that accidentally saw Bette and Tina make love and I don’t even thinking that is Kit and this morning when I wake up I suddenly know who’s at the door and is Kit and I think that it’s the one who’s we not thinking about lately, and I’m glad you post this chapter and I know who is now and good way to introduce Kit to us, love it. Bette and Kit is a little bit shy and they have a good coversation and damn what a surprise Kit’s pregnant and let see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks! Good chapter!
nzgrl says
I forgot all about Kit.
Down Low says
Pink and green elephant huh? Well atleast it wasn’t red. Can I get a Skee Wee?
momo says
OMG! That was so funny MTS WHOA! Thank Gosh it’s only Kit LOL! Hey I’m still catching up Thanks for posted again I Love it Please post SOON.
nik_noodle says
brilliant :D I so didnt even think of Kit….i’d actually *blush* forgotten she existed in this story :P
Way too B&T Foucused!
trecelovinit says
That was good thinking to introduce Kit into the story like that. I never thought it would be her. Great job!!!
Traci921 says
Ok, in the last few days I have read every chapter of the Roomates and the Roomates, second dimension. I LOVE this story…and now that I am all caught up….I have no more chapters waiting for me to read. please post soon, I’m a total addict.
Change says
MTS…OMG, WHAT A CHAPTER!!…I so thought it was gonna be Janice…lol…you had me going there for a minute…spectacular chapter…what else is there to say?!…YOU ROCK MTS!!
cabqbw says
I’ve fianally gotten caught up with your series. This is great. I love your style. Please post again soon.