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A new and different B & T beginning CH. 22
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Previously
Tina: “Are you ok, Bette?………I mean your shoulder and everything”
Bette: “Im going to be just fine……where is Charlot?”
Tina: “I placed her in your tub……..I hope its alright?”
Bette: (smiling) “Sure……..have you eaten yet?………because I have nothing in the fridge”
Tina: “I know………I looked………I ordered chinese…….it should be her soon”
Bette: “That sounds great”
Tina cupped Bettes face and leaned in, placing a big kiss on Bettes lips. Forcing Bette to open her mouth further, for Tinas tongue to enter her. Tina placed her hands behind Bettes neck, pulling her in closer to deepend the kiss even further.
Just then the doorbell rang…………
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Chapter 22
Bette and Tina stopped their kissing and just looked at each other.
Bette: “Now who the ***** is that?”
Tina: “Maybe the delivery man”
Bette walked out to open the door. Outside was Alice, Dana and Shane looking and wawing at her, through the glass. Bette took a deep breath and opened the door.
Bette: “Hey you guys….”
Shane/Alice/Dana: “Hey Bette”
Alice went in first and hugged her friend together with Shane and Dana
Alice: “Bette……..are you alright??”
Bette: “Im going to be fine Alice……how did you know, I was home?”
Shane: “Kit called me……so I just automatic called Lara up to hear more”
Bette: “Is Kit alright”
Shane: “Year……shes comming over later……she had to finish up something first, before we play poker”
Bette: “You wanna play poker…tonight!!!!”
Alice: “Yes ofcourse Porter” (rolling her eyes) “it is Wednesday……poker night at your house, Bette……..and besides we havent see you for ages, se bare with us, ok…”
Shane: “Year Bette……..where have you been all this time?”
Tina had been listening to their conversation and came around the corner from the bedroom. “Shes been with me, Shane”, Tina said.
Shane: “(smiling) “Hey Tina………nice to see you again”
Tina: “Hey you guys”
Alice: “Hey Tina………..guess youve had your hands full with Bette around”
Dana: “ALICE…….Tina are you alright………how are you feeling!!! “
Tina: “Fine Dana…….Im going to be fine……thanks to Bette”. (looking at Bette smiling)
Alice: “OK….hold on a minute……are you two” (pointing at Tina and Bette) “together…….what have I missed?”
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Bette is scared cuzz this is all new to her she d never been in a serious relationship and when she finally fall in love that one is someone like Tina and has a daughter it is to much for her BUT she will be fine after all this is B&T..and about Alice no comment..lol..great chapter as always
Ahh it is nice to see that all is not wrong in their world and that some good and normal times can be had too. I do sleep good now you just scared me. Venter i spænding på dit næste kapitel, det er altid en god dag når der kommer et fra dig.
Great chapter as always. I hope you’ll post another really soon. I can’t get enough of it.
If you have never loved someone ,so much that she takes your breath away.your heart races and you miss them when theyare not by your side. Bette has never felt that way,we would be afraid too Thanks
7 pages nice!!!!!! I hate cliff hangers so stop it !!!!!!lol
just catching up on many chapters. great as always Trolle. You make B&T a great couple. cant wait for them to move in together. have a perfect family.
Great chapter. Than again, all of your chapters are wonderful. I’m with Bette&TinaForever, why is Bette still sleeping? Trolle, you are good. Got me hanging again!!
God, I’m so sorry for having missed to comment your 3 last chapters ! The fact is that I became a bit lost with the increase amount of stories’ updates in this great site…
But now I’m back and there was a big positive point : this way I was able to read your three last chapters without any interruption !
So I decided to comment them here…
Ch.20 : Well, well ! “Your” Melvin was even worst then the one in the show ! Too bad his late apologizes came only thanks to Kit’s pressure…
I fully understand Bette’s concern about the possibility to change her career : working with your best friend is such a precious thing, above all when you love your job too. But of course it would be great for her future little family to not have anymore worries about the dangerous parts of this job. Not an easy choice at all !
… Now are you sure this more than awful finale can it simply be called a cliffhanger ?? That was pretty shoking ! (lol)
Ch.21 : Wow, what a thriller here ! I must say this “vilain” part was perfect for Candace. God, you made me suffer a lot for Tina… Then, to place our Bette in such a terrible situation over the balcony what too much for my deep acrophobia !! (lol) However, I suddenly got a view of Bette costumed in Zorro here and, well, that wasn’t bad at all ! (lol)
Thanks for this great piece of action movie ! That’s quite rare in this site, so it’s a delight to have very different stories like this one.
Finally… how I hate those doorbells !!
Ch.22 : How cute can be our so-called mighty Bette feeling so insecure ! A bit afraid by happiness ? Cheer up, you’ll be accustomed by it very soon – I hope !
I’m happy to see how easy became Tina and Lara’s relationship, that’s really nice – above all for Bette.
Now… I shouldn’t read other comments, because I wasn’t upset by Bette’s long sleep … and now I am ! Grrrr….
I really enjoy your story a lot ! Thank you so much, Trolle, that’s a pretty good job !
Great chapter, and I love how comfortable Tina is around Bette’s friends and in her home. Tina even recognized that Bette was perhaps feeling a little insecure or not really at eaze with them being ther and offered to sleep in the guest room. I think that Bette will easily overcome her fears because she really loves Tina and her daughter and do not want to loose them. Yes, now everyone else has me worried why she is still sleeping. Maybe it is just a bad reaction to the medication.
I totally disagree with Therese_Belivet about your Melvin. She needs to give you a chance to expand your story and let your characters evolve. Please post again soon.
Hej Trolle. Så fik jeg endelig læst dit kapitel.. og det er rigtig godt. Dejligt med lidt familiehygge og jeg synes nu ikke det er så sært at Bette er træt. Hun har været igennem en masse.
Great chapter.. I will go to the next one….
Ah what a nice chapter. Funny that Bette is scare but glad that we know she scare sometime. Post soon, thanks!