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A new and different B & T beginning CH. 22
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Bette: “Alice……..thats none of your business”
Alice: “The ***** it is……..if you two are involved, I wanna know about it !!!!”
Shane: “Chill Al……..Bette has been through a lot and Im sure Tina has as well……..so carm down Alice”
Bette: “I can fight my own battles, Shane……..but thanks……..and Alice, chill girl”
Alice: “Alright, alright……..Ill keep quiet…..for now anyway………Tina, do you need some help?”
The doorbell rang again.
Tina: “Year Alice….why dont you get the door, while I check on Charlot……..its proberly the delivery guy with our dinner”
Shane: “I ordered pizza for us……..so let me get it”
A few minutes later Shane came back with both pizzan and chinese. “Lets eat you guys”, Shane said.
Dana and Alice found some plates and set the table. Tina came out with Charlot, who saw Dana and ran ove to give her a big hug.
Dana: (picking up Charlot) “Hows my big girl doing…..”
Charlot: “Great…….Bette has a big tub, aunt Dana”
Dana: (smiling) “Thats nice……..so you had a good swim in it, I guess”
Charlot: “Yes………it is big”
Tina just looked at Dana and Charlot smiling. She didnt see Bette anywhere, so she went looking for her, while the gang was in the livingroom with Charlot.
Tina found Bette in the bedroom sitting on her bed, with her eyes closed. Tina went over to Bette and sat beside her. As Tina sat on the bed, Bette opened her eyes and looked at Tina.
Bette: “Hey Tee……..what are you doing in here!!!!”
Tina: “Came looking for you, Bette………..you ok?” (while Tina stroked Bettes face and put her hair back behind her ears)
Bette: “Tired and hungry”
Tina: “Dinners here…….so lets join the others”
Tina stood up and helped Bette to her feet. Tina had her hands around Bettes waist and leaned in for a kiss. Bette returned Tinas kiss and used her healthy arm to reach around Tinas neck to pull her in closer and deepen the kiss.
Alice: (smiling) “I knew it….you two were getting it off” (while looking at Tina and Bette) “…….dinners here, if you two lovebirds have time”
Tina: “Be right there, Alice!!!!!……..come on babe…..lets join the others”
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Bette is scared cuzz this is all new to her she d never been in a serious relationship and when she finally fall in love that one is someone like Tina and has a daughter it is to much for her BUT she will be fine after all this is B&T..and about Alice no comment..lol..great chapter as always
Ahh it is nice to see that all is not wrong in their world and that some good and normal times can be had too. I do sleep good now you just scared me. Venter i spænding på dit næste kapitel, det er altid en god dag når der kommer et fra dig.
Great chapter as always. I hope you’ll post another really soon. I can’t get enough of it.
If you have never loved someone ,so much that she takes your breath away.your heart races and you miss them when theyare not by your side. Bette has never felt that way,we would be afraid too Thanks
7 pages nice!!!!!! I hate cliff hangers so stop it !!!!!!lol
just catching up on many chapters. great as always Trolle. You make B&T a great couple. cant wait for them to move in together. have a perfect family.
Great chapter. Than again, all of your chapters are wonderful. I’m with Bette&TinaForever, why is Bette still sleeping? Trolle, you are good. Got me hanging again!!
God, I’m so sorry for having missed to comment your 3 last chapters ! The fact is that I became a bit lost with the increase amount of stories’ updates in this great site…
But now I’m back and there was a big positive point : this way I was able to read your three last chapters without any interruption !
So I decided to comment them here…
Ch.20 : Well, well ! “Your” Melvin was even worst then the one in the show ! Too bad his late apologizes came only thanks to Kit’s pressure…
I fully understand Bette’s concern about the possibility to change her career : working with your best friend is such a precious thing, above all when you love your job too. But of course it would be great for her future little family to not have anymore worries about the dangerous parts of this job. Not an easy choice at all !
… Now are you sure this more than awful finale can it simply be called a cliffhanger ?? That was pretty shoking ! (lol)
Ch.21 : Wow, what a thriller here ! I must say this “vilain” part was perfect for Candace. God, you made me suffer a lot for Tina… Then, to place our Bette in such a terrible situation over the balcony what too much for my deep acrophobia !! (lol) However, I suddenly got a view of Bette costumed in Zorro here and, well, that wasn’t bad at all ! (lol)
Thanks for this great piece of action movie ! That’s quite rare in this site, so it’s a delight to have very different stories like this one.
Finally… how I hate those doorbells !!
Ch.22 : How cute can be our so-called mighty Bette feeling so insecure ! A bit afraid by happiness ? Cheer up, you’ll be accustomed by it very soon – I hope !
I’m happy to see how easy became Tina and Lara’s relationship, that’s really nice – above all for Bette.
Now… I shouldn’t read other comments, because I wasn’t upset by Bette’s long sleep … and now I am ! Grrrr….
I really enjoy your story a lot ! Thank you so much, Trolle, that’s a pretty good job !
Great chapter, and I love how comfortable Tina is around Bette’s friends and in her home. Tina even recognized that Bette was perhaps feeling a little insecure or not really at eaze with them being ther and offered to sleep in the guest room. I think that Bette will easily overcome her fears because she really loves Tina and her daughter and do not want to loose them. Yes, now everyone else has me worried why she is still sleeping. Maybe it is just a bad reaction to the medication.
I totally disagree with Therese_Belivet about your Melvin. She needs to give you a chance to expand your story and let your characters evolve. Please post again soon.
Hej Trolle. Så fik jeg endelig læst dit kapitel.. og det er rigtig godt. Dejligt med lidt familiehygge og jeg synes nu ikke det er så sært at Bette er træt. Hun har været igennem en masse.
Great chapter.. I will go to the next one….
Ah what a nice chapter. Funny that Bette is scare but glad that we know she scare sometime. Post soon, thanks!