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And it Started With a Phone Call Chapter 19
Bette walked alone through the doors of the Planet. She thought Tina had been right behind her on the way here, but a short wait in the parking lot did nothing to encourage her arrival so they could walk in together. She spotted Alice and Dana as soon as she entered, but made her way to the counter to order breakfast and a coffee before joining them.
"Morning," she said with the widest grin Alice could remember seeing for some time.
"What’s got you in such a cheery mood this morning?" Alice asked.
As if in answer to Alice’s question, it was just at that moment that Tina pulled open the front door of the caf and strode confidently across the room toward them. Alice noticed immediately that Tina was wearing one of Bette’s precious suits.
"Oh Jesus, Bette, you’re already trading clothes with her?" Alice asked as she caught Bette’s gaze once again.
"She stayed over last night," Bette continued smiling. "It was last minute, so I offered her my closet this morning."
"Out of one closet and into another hey?" Alice giggled at her own joke and tapped Dana lightly on the arm as if to alert her to her humour. "I have to say Bette, she does make that suit look mighty fine."
"She’s ***** hot," Bette said quietly as Tina approached the table.
Dana and Alice rolled their eyes at each other at this last comment from Bette before Tina spoke.
"Hi everyone," she addressed them all, but her eyes were fixed squarely on Bette, still standing beside her as she spoke.
"I didn’t order you anything," Bette said. "What can I get for you?"
"I can get it, Bette," Tina said. "You don’t have to clothe and feed me." She reached and touched Bette’s arm as she spoke. "I’ll get yours while I’m up there. Give me your receipt." She reached out her hand as she spoke her last command, and walked to the counter to place her order as Bette took a seat at the table.
"Work week sleepovers already, Bette?" Alice started in right away. "You’re breaking all your rules for this girl, aren’t you."
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(28 votes, average: 4.79 out of 5)
Romances, advances, charms are in the air. Hmm… it just gets better. loved this.
Your writing is nothing short of sheer perfection! And the last few chapters have been so romantic! The somatic responses your writing elicits make this story just oh so pleasurable. It’s virtually a paradise of sensuality. Thank you so much.
K
Wonderful chapter. I love when it’s sweet and happy, just can’t get enough.
Romance full tilt, wonderful. Your poise in writing this story, makes it so captivating and contemporary. A pleasure, thank you.
Thank you for allowing me to dwell in their lives. The day-to-day details are not mudane. They are so soul-satisfying!
nt just a *sigh* but a *contented sigh*. that was wonderful. yuor writing is so expressive and thoughful. i love mundane. where would we be without mundane. its the cement of life. thanks ever so much.
I love to see the romance of this new budding couple…
Whenever I read this story I always have this big smile across my face. It’s just so romantic and beautiful. I love it! And the whip- hot!! Can’t wait to see all these plans Bette has
I would say that love is in the air!!! Please continue soon.
Nice and sweet, it is going to be great to see as Aretha would say “Who’s zooming who”. It is great to see Bette willing to be open and ungarded about her feelings for Tina. Please post again soon.
It’s the stolen glances, the knowing smiles and the light touches that make the ordinary take on an extra ordinary sweetness. It’s their playful sexual innuendo that is making their senses even more tuned into each other.
I’m getting the feeling that Alice is either jealous or simply just doesn’t know when to stay out of other people’s business. Glad Bette put her in her place.
ahh plans…I like the sound of that ;-) Wonderfully written as always. Thanks.
That was a fantastic chapter. I love the banter between those two, and then when you add Alice, well just awesome. Can’t wait till dinner tonight
awesome- loving it!
Okay, you know I’ve loved your writing from the very beginning, before your fancy award icon and all. But I need to have a reality check here! Unless your Dana secretly won a jock scholarship to Harvard, went, got smart, met Bette and Tina and then somehow tragically suffered some brain damage, I cannot imagine the following comment coming from her mouth:
“‘It’s such a treat to watch the captains of industry sway their power over the masses,’ Dana replied, facetiously.”
Do I have a point, or do I have a point?
I’m still a die-hard fan and love every word you write! xxoo M.
Well written chapter..I especially liked all the foreshadowing.
Always a pleasure to read. Thanks.
Seems like we have two Ladies that are going to walk on air all day. Romance is in full bloom/ thanks
Loved this. Can’t wait for their plans to be put into action!!
I love the romance and “mundane” (as you put it) thanks and post soon
Ah this is gonna be good and some hot Bette and Tina coming next.
this was wonderful. it’s awesome to read B&T relationship to grow into something much deeper than either one of them have even experienced. Kiitos!
nuthin is mundane when it comes to Bette and Tina.. you are awesome..!
Bette definitely is a charmer. can’t wait to see her efforts to charm Tina. thanks for update.