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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 21
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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 21
Last time..
Bette’s blood ran cold, as she closed her eyes tightly shut awaiting the inevitable sickening crash she will feel, as the prehistoric looking creature’s solid 20 inch long horn slices through the flimsy metal around them like a can opener.
“Teeeeeeee” She screamed in terror
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Bette’s desperate scream pierced through the air, startling the charging Rhino. She can hear, even if she can’t see well. This thing, she realizes, is a hideous impostor. In utter disgust, she turns away and ambles toward the bush.
Tina slowly released her hands from the steering wheel, watching the patches of sweat slowly evaporate in the heat, and putting the gears back into neutral, turned towards the terrified brunette. “Bette” she whispered touching her arm gently. “Well, it’s not exactly what I had in mind, but you seem to have scared our friend away!” Tina let out a nervous laugh. “Baby you can open your eyes now!” She prompted.
Bette slowly opened her eyes, squinting against the sun. She turned to face Tina, a look of fear still shadowing her graceful fingers. “what happened T?” She enquired in confusion. “I thought for a minute there that neither of us would make it back to LA!” she said, failing miserably to make light of their deadly situation.
“She ran off!” Tina replied. The chances were that she would veer off before she hit us anyway, Tina explained “It’s unusual for a Rhino to actually ram her mate, but I had the car ready to reverse out of her way just in case. Luckily for both of us, we didn’t need to find out. Your scream startled her and she ran off!”
“But you knew what you were doing..right?” Asked Bette not entirely convinced.
“Bette, I know how scary that must have been for you, but I DO know what I’m doing. We were never in any real danger.”
Bette arched her eyebrow, non to convinced by the confidence in Tina’s voice. She thought once again about her impending departure, and wondered how she would cope knowing that Tina was out here on her own. “T? You will be careful while I am gone won’t you” she asked tears filling her eyes and threatening to spill over her lashes.
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sayin bye is really, really hard. Bette should have been the one to turn back, T was being the sentimental one, and I liked that. Now she’s gonna run off to apologize to B (unless she “walks” into some unforeseen drama, being in the jungle and all….and then knowing how u like cliffies…hmmm). Ok so u didn’t give a date as 2 ur next post,….soooo maybe we’ll get 1 or 2 in another hour >>>>”hint, hint” LMAO!!!!
OMG Awesome T… Sad but awesome. I am home for a while resting. I know i am getting old when body parts start to fall off. ROFL… J/K. So glad to read your post. I think I missed one tho. Trying to catch up K. Later dude.
Hi TB. Love this story.
I guess Bette can’t help being an a**. Never let the sun go down with anger. Let them meet halfway?
you old softie you. ;) that was sweet. even the melt down. we understand where that came from. you know its ok to post more than once a day. (hint hint). did you have fun.
Damn that Bette and her type A persoanlity. I hope she’s feeling pretty shitty right now, she deserves to and I hope she thinks better of it and turns around and says a proper goodbye. Well done Ms tbsaver, great chapter as always :)
Yeah Tina go say good bye to Bette and tell her what you feel right now. Post soon, thanks!
Have you been taking lessons from “Flairforthedramatic?” Why must you leave us hang like this? You must know we can’t wait to read your next post. And just exactly how did Tina think Bette WOULD react? I guess you’ll have T just miss Bette before she gets on her plane. Oh, the agony.
Tina want get far,because Bette will turn back. Can’t leave your lover in angry. Love this story thanks
There went my heart again. Tina better make it to that damn airport…please post soon
K
Excellent chapter, I hope T gets to B in time to say bye or see you later. Love this.
I found it interesting that Tina would choose such a fragile time in their relationship to make a stand about saying good-bye. Emotions are raw for both of them, now is the time for reassurance and communication.
Very cute that Bette took Tina’s pillowcase.
Great chapter thanks for posting on Sunday as promised!!!! (if I remember correctly the last time one promised to post on a sunday and it took a month …|-)….;-> ) I know I can be a s**t.
Maybe the next chapter will be posted tomorrow… you have gotten very good with the cliff hangers & drama :-[
Anything you write on this adventure is welcome.
Glad you made it back out of hiding hope you had a great time!
Post soon… PLEASE
WTF bette needs to stop acting like she is a fucking diva!!!
And T if you make tina chase bette she is spineless!!! Bette needs to come back to tina.
And does tina drive a land rover also??
maybe she should have something different and they could have sex at the airport before she takes off??
Alright thats it for me I’m sleepy and sore
Woo-hoo, go Tina! Get your woman!!