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Cruise on the Big Sea Chapter 5
Previously:
Bette turns to leave then looks back and gives Tina that killer Bette Porter smile before turning the corner. When she finally turns the corner she runs right into Lexie and a very drunk Kristin, knocking Kristin to the ground.
Bette: ” I am so sorry! Are you alright?”
Kristin:” Why do I always end up on the floor on this ***** boat?”
Bette and Lexie begin to laugh as they help Kristin to her feet.
Bette: “Good night Ladies”
Kristin: “What the ***** ever!”
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Lexie and Kristin make their to the door of their room where Tina has just changed into her PJs. Kristin falls onto the bed and passes out before Lexie could get the door shut. Tina is shocked by how drunk Kristin is.
Tina: “What the ***** happened to her?”
Lexie: “I have no idea. She was sitting on the floor right by the elevator. I think she was lost or something. I couldn’t help but laugh. Then we came around the corner and Bette knocked her down.”
Tina: “Bette did what? Is she alright?”
Lexie: “Damn Tina…Bette is fine. What is going on there?”
Tina: “I don’t know Lex…she is so wonderful and she is the most beautiful woman I have ever laid eyes on.”
Kristin lifts her head…”I thought I was the most beautiful woman you have ever laid your eyes on?”
Tina: “Of course you are Kris!….Anyway, she is absolutly wonderful.”
Lexie: “And, she seems to really like you alot. What do think want out of this?”
Tina: “I have no agenda with her, Lexie. I’m just here for a nice relaxing week. If I spend a nice time lady then so be it!”
Lexie: “Well, as long as you are happy then I’m cool. She seems really great. Very smart and even more beautiful.
Lexie puts on her PJs and climbs into bed with Tina since Kristin is all over the other bed. Oh well! They turn out the lights and Tina goes to sleep and dreams all night of nothing but Bette and the beach. A combo that sounds better than chocolate chips and ice cream.
The Next Morning************
Everyone wakes in their respected rooms which is weird considering half of them end up in other peoples rooms even when they are back home. The sun is shining through the smal round window in the room occupied by Alice, Dana, and Bette. Dana is now singing “Come To My Window” in the shower as Bette and Alice get dressed and laugh their asses off at the off key sounds coming from the bathroom.
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(33 votes, average: 3.91 out of 5)
humm i see jealous??? but can you blame her?..lol..jus hold Kris horses…hope they have a great time together any now each other better..can wait for next chapter. :o)
Rated R because of your name?? Nipples, that is so funny!! Good chapter and I love the suspence. Kristin needs to chill.
Is someone jealous? Bette is so fake.wow that is an understatementOf the year. like this Thanks
Oh man some one jealous and that would be Kristin, is she have the hots for Tina or something. Post soon please, thanks!
such drama……jealousy, back biting, bitching and whining and all those hot women……get in, sit down, shut up and hold on…..woohoo, gonna be a great story.
i spy with my little eye, something green. and it begins with k. hehe. great chappy, post soon.
If Kris is following the story as we are that are reading, she’ll know that this wont be about her and Tina, but B&T…..snap out of it Kristin; Tina aint feeling you like that….LOL
Great chapter Nip. Post again soon please.
What’s with Kristen. Their is no getting in between B&T. Always love the banter between Bette and Alice. Still too cute, thanks for posting and looking forward to the sightseeing.
Kristin is definitely jealous….does she and Tina have some history? I added you to my favorite authors today. I don’t want to miss one chapter. Kiitos!
K, so Kris is there to add some tension to the mix? hmmm. I wonder if she is jealous of Tina or Bette.
this was a great chapter. pls post soon.
Kris a little jealous? nice chapter post soon…make love all week..now that sounds fun!
Muhahahaha, I was right… Kris does have the hotts 4 Tina, ooooooo I smell drama or maybe not if someone want 2 be the bigger person (Kris). Hint, hint!!
what the heack?!?! goodness someones a lil pissy lol well i cant wait for your next update!! love the story!! thanx for sharing it with us!!
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hmm… it sounds like someone is Jealous of Bette? Interesting. I suppose Kris was going to make her move on Tina on this cruise then along came Bette?
great story Nipps. just got caught up on all your chapters. me thinks Kris is jealous. B&T rock
I´m with smile12345 on this one…does Kristin have the hots for Tina…is she jealous. Keep posting this is getting interesting.
Does Kristin have the hots for Tina?!!?!?! Anyways, I love Kristin, she seems awesome!
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Sounds like someone is jealous. Not good. Excellent chapter. ;)
Another good chapter keep them coming. What is kristens problem hopefully we will find out soon!!!
All caught up on this story and it’s great. Is Kris secretly liking Tina and
getting jealous, this could get intresting. please post soon
uh oh.. kris doesnt like bette, i wonder if it’s cuz she’s jealous that Tina found someone or it’s cuz she has the hots for Tina, or maybe she just didn’t LIKE Bette for who she is..
you girl better post more than a chapter a day, or make these longer.. i’m hooked and i need more.. like RIGHT NOW..