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And it Started With a Phone Call Chapter 26
"Would you like to dance," Tina asked Bette as she finished off her drink.
"Lead on babe," Bette rose from the table and followed Tina to the floor for their first dance.
Tina turned to pull Bette into her as the song transitioned from a bass heavy dance beat to a slow sensual guitar based rhythm. Tina placed her right hand on Bette’s hip and took Bette’s right hand in her left to lead. Once again, Bette found herself in a most unusual position. She was being expected to follow someone else’s intent. Tina read Bette’s consternation over the situation, and spoke to reassure her.
"I taught all my younger cousins to dance," Tina said. "I don’t know how to do anything but lead."
This explanation appeared to appease Bette’s need for control as she let her hand relax into Tina’s and she placed her left arm around her shoulder as they started to move fluidly around the floor. The few that had been dancing left once the slow song started, but the two that remained were already in a world of their own. Tina moved her outstretched hand to the small of Bette’s back and pulled her in so that a ribbon of skin on each of them, barely visible above the waistlines of their respective jeans, would brush in intimate contact as they moved. Tina’s hand crept under the loose flowing fabric of Bette’s delicate top and rested skin to skin, invisible to those around them.
"What are you doing?" Bette inquired with a smile, knowing full well what Tina was hopeful of achieving.
"I just wanted to feel the heat coming directly from your body," Tina replied. "Is that alright?"
"Yeah, it’s alright."
Bette knew what was in store when Tina leaned in to whisper to her.
"The moment we walk into your house," Tina spoke with a defined cadence. "I’m going to close the door, lean you up against it and politely ask your permission to do what I wish I could do right now."
Bette closed her eyes as they continued to move together across the dance floor, oblivious as to what went on around them.
"What do you wish you could do," Bette asked, harnessing her ability to speak in order to make the inquiry.
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(32 votes, average: 4.88 out of 5)
OMG! that was so sweet at the end. was the first I love you? very nice JKS. pls don’t disappear for long I love this story.
i’m an avid reader of this story. Will be waitin till your next installment!! wish you well in what ever you’re dealin with now. hope everything will be fine soon~
Damn….I need someone to help me close my mouth -_-
jks, I’m loving your style.
thanks for the nice, and I mean, really nice chapter. Hopefully you’ll able to return soon. Take care!
This is really a great story, I like how Tina was nervous about losing Bette’s attention at the bar, but it was never even an option for Bette to allow that to happen. I hope they shower together next…and do some laundry. Those sheets must be a mess.
Great story great chapter i will be waiting for your return and the next installment!!!
WHOA! that was so Amazing OMG! I Love it LOL! Great really so sweet Story Hey I hope that everything it’s good for your what ever REASON I hope everything is Fine take your Time we are here for your Amazing Story Thanks Have a Great Day.
Another great chapter… I am absolutley in love with your stories. No one can even come close to your writing.. I can’t wait for the next chapter!!
great chapter JKS. hope everything works out ok. i will be her waiting when u return. tc hun
Prayers for your well being.
Thanks for this beautifully romantic, erotic, sensual, loving chapter.
Great chapter–I just finally started breathing again–and I hope you’ll be back soon!
Swim!! No!! You’re gettin’ out of the pool!?! Okay. Guess I’ll just lay back and patiently float while awaiting your return.
Every syllable of this story that I drink in is utterly delicious. And I’m not sure how, but it just keeps getting better and better!!
Hope everything is okay…and you can dive back in soon. I wish you the best!! I may be shrivelled like a prune when you get back, but I’ll be here. Go take care of life!
You are doing a fine job. “I love you” a sentiment that should be a cliché, yet it manages to maintain an eternal gravitas elemental to our instincts. We value the delicate, an irony not lost on those whom realise life is too often robust and indelicate in its random flux. However if love is an illusion, it is one we all see, there is a comfort in that at least. Thank you, a pleasure.
A story brilliant with color of life, lust and love.
Beautiful.
Hope you are able to get everything settled to your satisfaction. Eagerly waiting your return.
This is fast becoming one of my favorite stories. I’ll never look at a mango in the same way again. Thank you for sharing this great atory with us. Hope all works out well for you, and I’ll be looking forward to your return.
This is a great story. I hope things work out and u return soon. I gotta say I’ll wait. Take care!
thankyou, that was a beautiful chapter the way you finished it was just perfect, hope you will be alright and will post again soon.
JKS, we will be here waiting. Hope you get everything in order and that it is all ok. Take care and come back to us as soon as you can.
I have to take some time off from posting this story… and I hope you’ll still be with me when I am able to return. Don’t worry, we’ll be waiting >right here< ;-)
Yoweeeeee!! That was Spectacular!! I really really really hope everything works out for the best with you cause patience definitely isn’t one of my strengths and waiting for you to write again just might have me beating my keyboad to near death…but I’ll definitely be here.
Smooth, sexy, sensually perfect.
Just love this story, I’m telling you it gives me goose bumps. Don’t know if I would have survived the night at the bar, probably would have left much sooner. Now I have to wonder what I’ll be thinking about next time I have a mango a go go, damn. Don’t worry will be here when you get back to us. Life/work go on regardless, like we shouldn’t be working instead of reading this, but this is definitly more fun.
Awesome!! That was a great chapter – the way you built the tension was amazing – please keep writing. Hope you get things sorted soon – for you and us readers!
I’m gonna throw a pillow on the floor so I can BOW BEFORE YOU!!!! I belive you are the Queen on fan fiction!!! Girl that was amazing!!! I’ve read every single chapter a least twice and they still give me goosebumps. You truly have a gift!! Keep at it and I can’t wait for more!!! WOW!!!
“…truly fucked beyond their wildest dreams.”
Oh that’s hot lol I can’t wait till you come back and deliver another amazing chapter!!
Finally caught up with my reading. Amazing chapter….didn’t want it to end. Love your writing. So smooth and natural. Please come back soon.
I have been following this story from the beginning and loving how it is developing. This and your previous stories have inspired me to join the fanfic authors nest. Keep up the excellent work!
wow, great and hot! chapter
looking forward to your updating :)
thanx jks, hope you will be able to join the writing again. all the best.
You’ve left us all with plenty of great chapters to enjoy re-reading while we await your return! Hope everything is OK and life gets back to normal soon. Thanks for writing.
jks. hope all gets sorted out. you are fantastic. i obviously loved this chappy and await your return. be safe.
K
So perfect and HOT. I hope all works out well for you in life. Love this, can’t wait for more.
wow! what a way to ‘pause’!! hope u continue soon.. thanks for sharing this story. iam really hooked to ur writing and love the way u write the ‘verbal foreplay’. :)
U burnd up my computer i need a new one!!!!! post soon!!!!!!!!
just found your story and read all 26 chapers- absolutely wonderful sexy as hell and very very romantic. I think you have written the beginning of these two as I hoped or imagined it – have a good break and will look for you upon your return.
Damn so fuckin hot and awesome. They are so amazing together, love it. Ok post soon, thanks!