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And it Started With a Phone Call Chapter 26
"Drop to my knees and tongue ***** you to ecstasy," Tina finished her comment and moved in to bite lightly just below Bette’s earlobe and then placed what appeared to be a quick and innocent kiss on her lips as they continued to glide across the floor.
Bette removed her hand from Tina’s and linked both her arms behind Tina’s neck as they swayed. Tina’s hands met in the small of Bette’s back. It was Bette’s turn to speak.
"Are you trying to get me to make out with you right here?"
"I’m just setting the table for what will inevitably be a gourmet meal," Tina said.
"I’m not sure if you’re aware of this, but I’m not one for public displays of affection," Bette said.
"We’re just dancing," Tina replied as she stroked the skin on Bette’s back.
"And talking," Bette said.
"We’re a heartbeat from having ***** standing up," Tina laughed, but continued to sway her hips against Bette’s. The song ended and they moved apart. This time, Bette led Tina back to the table, not noticing there were several women with their eyes on them as they walked purposefully across the room.
"Thank you for that demonstration," Alice said as they sat down. "This is the first time in my life I’ve had an indication why some religions don’t permit dancing."
"We weren’t doing anything," Bette pointedly stated.
"The whole room was watching you two, whether you were aware of it or not," Alice informed them. "You might as well have been out there with a branding iron for each other, because no one who just saw that display is likely to approach either one of you."
‘Mission accomplished,’ Tina thought to herself. She glanced over at Bette, who didn’t seem remotely concerned that she’d been designated as belonging to her.
"How’s the job search going, Alice," Tina asked.
Alice was a little taken aback that Tina remembered she had been looking for something more permanent than the freelance jobs on which she’d been barely subsisting.
"I have another interview this week," Alice replied, happy to talk about herself. "It’s actually perfect, because it would be half time in an editorial department, so I could still write just as much as I presently do."
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(32 votes, average: 4.88 out of 5)
OMG! that was so sweet at the end. was the first I love you? very nice JKS. pls don’t disappear for long I love this story.
i’m an avid reader of this story. Will be waitin till your next installment!! wish you well in what ever you’re dealin with now. hope everything will be fine soon~
Damn….I need someone to help me close my mouth -_-
jks, I’m loving your style.
thanks for the nice, and I mean, really nice chapter. Hopefully you’ll able to return soon. Take care!
This is really a great story, I like how Tina was nervous about losing Bette’s attention at the bar, but it was never even an option for Bette to allow that to happen. I hope they shower together next…and do some laundry. Those sheets must be a mess.
Great story great chapter i will be waiting for your return and the next installment!!!
WHOA! that was so Amazing OMG! I Love it LOL! Great really so sweet Story Hey I hope that everything it’s good for your what ever REASON I hope everything is Fine take your Time we are here for your Amazing Story Thanks Have a Great Day.
Another great chapter… I am absolutley in love with your stories. No one can even come close to your writing.. I can’t wait for the next chapter!!
great chapter JKS. hope everything works out ok. i will be her waiting when u return. tc hun
Prayers for your well being.
Thanks for this beautifully romantic, erotic, sensual, loving chapter.
Great chapter–I just finally started breathing again–and I hope you’ll be back soon!
Swim!! No!! You’re gettin’ out of the pool!?! Okay. Guess I’ll just lay back and patiently float while awaiting your return.
Every syllable of this story that I drink in is utterly delicious. And I’m not sure how, but it just keeps getting better and better!!
Hope everything is okay…and you can dive back in soon. I wish you the best!! I may be shrivelled like a prune when you get back, but I’ll be here. Go take care of life!
You are doing a fine job. “I love you” a sentiment that should be a cliché, yet it manages to maintain an eternal gravitas elemental to our instincts. We value the delicate, an irony not lost on those whom realise life is too often robust and indelicate in its random flux. However if love is an illusion, it is one we all see, there is a comfort in that at least. Thank you, a pleasure.
A story brilliant with color of life, lust and love.
Beautiful.
Hope you are able to get everything settled to your satisfaction. Eagerly waiting your return.
This is fast becoming one of my favorite stories. I’ll never look at a mango in the same way again. Thank you for sharing this great atory with us. Hope all works out well for you, and I’ll be looking forward to your return.
This is a great story. I hope things work out and u return soon. I gotta say I’ll wait. Take care!
thankyou, that was a beautiful chapter the way you finished it was just perfect, hope you will be alright and will post again soon.
JKS, we will be here waiting. Hope you get everything in order and that it is all ok. Take care and come back to us as soon as you can.
I have to take some time off from posting this story… and I hope you’ll still be with me when I am able to return. Don’t worry, we’ll be waiting >right here< ;-)
Yoweeeeee!! That was Spectacular!! I really really really hope everything works out for the best with you cause patience definitely isn’t one of my strengths and waiting for you to write again just might have me beating my keyboad to near death…but I’ll definitely be here.
Smooth, sexy, sensually perfect.
Just love this story, I’m telling you it gives me goose bumps. Don’t know if I would have survived the night at the bar, probably would have left much sooner. Now I have to wonder what I’ll be thinking about next time I have a mango a go go, damn. Don’t worry will be here when you get back to us. Life/work go on regardless, like we shouldn’t be working instead of reading this, but this is definitly more fun.
Awesome!! That was a great chapter – the way you built the tension was amazing – please keep writing. Hope you get things sorted soon – for you and us readers!
I’m gonna throw a pillow on the floor so I can BOW BEFORE YOU!!!! I belive you are the Queen on fan fiction!!! Girl that was amazing!!! I’ve read every single chapter a least twice and they still give me goosebumps. You truly have a gift!! Keep at it and I can’t wait for more!!! WOW!!!
“…truly fucked beyond their wildest dreams.”
Oh that’s hot lol I can’t wait till you come back and deliver another amazing chapter!!
Finally caught up with my reading. Amazing chapter….didn’t want it to end. Love your writing. So smooth and natural. Please come back soon.
I have been following this story from the beginning and loving how it is developing. This and your previous stories have inspired me to join the fanfic authors nest. Keep up the excellent work!
wow, great and hot! chapter
looking forward to your updating :)
thanx jks, hope you will be able to join the writing again. all the best.
You’ve left us all with plenty of great chapters to enjoy re-reading while we await your return! Hope everything is OK and life gets back to normal soon. Thanks for writing.
jks. hope all gets sorted out. you are fantastic. i obviously loved this chappy and await your return. be safe.
K
So perfect and HOT. I hope all works out well for you in life. Love this, can’t wait for more.
wow! what a way to ‘pause’!! hope u continue soon.. thanks for sharing this story. iam really hooked to ur writing and love the way u write the ‘verbal foreplay’. :)
U burnd up my computer i need a new one!!!!! post soon!!!!!!!!
just found your story and read all 26 chapers- absolutely wonderful sexy as hell and very very romantic. I think you have written the beginning of these two as I hoped or imagined it – have a good break and will look for you upon your return.
Damn so fuckin hot and awesome. They are so amazing together, love it. Ok post soon, thanks!