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    Coming Back – Chapter 12

    Story written on September 3, 2005 by CraZyClo.
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    Revelations…


    Previously


    As Shane falls asleep, Jenny, lying on her hospital bed, breathes her last breathe. The electrocardiogram line becomes flat, a “beeeeep” sound emerges from Jenny’s room. Marina hold Jenny’s hand, and kisses it; her tears are falling and falling. She realises what’s going on, and takes a deep breathe and screams


    Marina : NNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooo.

     

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    JENNY AND SHANE’S HOUSE – MORNING

    10:30AM


     

    Shane wakes up and realizes she was sleeping in Jenny’s room. She looks at the room, and a tear fell from her eye. She goes in the kitchen and take the bottle of water. She goes in the bathroom opens the pharmacy door and takes some “Tylenol”. As she was going in the living room, she noticed the answering machine red light flashing. She goes to it and press “Play”.

     

    Answering machine : You have ONE new message at 3:07AM Hi Shane it’s Marina, I guess you’re not there (sniff), even if I hate you now, you deserve to know that that Jenny’s. (sniff).. hum.. she’s dead. I’ll try to call you back for more details. Bye. Beeeep.

     

    Shane stays stunned, tears are falling on her cheeks. She barely walks to the couch, and falls on it. She cries and cries there for hours, she’s sobbing and screaming. Then she gets up, grabs one of the cushion and threw it through the house. She take the other one and screams in it. After, she takes it and throw it on the wall, candles, books and other stuff fall on the floor, there’s broken glass everywhere. The phone starts ringing, but instead of walking to it, she walks to her bedroom and slam the door.

     

     

    3:37PM


    The phone is ringing again, but this time Shane decides to answer for the first time in an hundred calls.

     

    Shane : Hello?

    Carmen : Shane?

    Shane : Hum.. yeah?

    Carmen : Hi baby it’s me.

    Shane : Hi. How are you?

    Carmen : Not that bad, you?

    Shane : Hum.. um.

    Carmen : Where were you? I’ve try to call you maybe a hundred times, but there were no answer.

    Shane : (lying) I was sleeping.

    Carmen : Hum.. kay. (silence) Hum.. Marina called me last night.

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    1. Well I found some money and went and bought more “PUFFS”, a wise decision I’m sure. I loved the way that Marina gave Shane the news. Carmen’s response to Shane’s revelation was classic. I feel big time drama coming on. Excellent chapter,I’ll see you soon…

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