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    Coming Back – Chapter 12

    Shane : Yeah.

    Carmen : Yeah.. hum.. cause of.. well.. you know.

    Shane : Yeah Jenny.

    Carmen : I’m sorry baby.

    Shane : Can we talk about something else, please.

    Carmen : Of course.

    Shane : How was your night yesterday? Do you like it there?

    Carmen : It was awesome, the staff is nice the customers are great. It’s a really nice place you should come to see it, it’s so huge.

    Shane : (trying to be happy) Cool.

    Carmen : and the mixing tables, oh my god! It’s.. It’s like a gift from heaven. Never in a life you can dream of something like that WOW!

    Shane : Awesome, I’m happy that you enjoy working there.

    Carmen : I don’t just enjoy.. I LOVE working there and the audio system!!

    Shane : Powerful?

    Carmen : Extremely!

    Shane : Nice.

    Carmen : Hum.. I’m sorry baby, but I have to get prepared, I have a diner with a couple of people for the club.

    Shane : Okay.

    Carmen : I’ll be back in two days.

    Shane : You’re not suppose to be back in three?

    Carmen : Yeah, but with the funerals

    Shane : The funerals?

    Carmen : Yeah hum.. Marina told me it’s gonna be in two to four days, she doesn’t know yet So I’ll come back as soon as I can.

    Shane : Perfect.

    Carmen : I miss you baby.

    Shane : Me too.

    Carmen : I’ll try to call you, okay?

    Shane : Yep.

    Carmen : Bye baby, I love you.

    Shane : Yeah, me too, Bye.


    Shane hangs up the phone, and go back to her bed.

     

     

    TWO DAYS LATER


    JENNY AND SHANE’S HOUSE – AFTERNOON


     

    Carmen comes back from Santa Monica. She parks her car in the driveway and enters in the house. The house is totally upside-down, it’s look like as if a tornado have passed in here. There’s full of stuff on the floor, broken glass, candles, books, papers. Shane is sitting on the couch with a bottle of beer in her hands, the TV is on “Cartoon Channel” and Shane is laughing really loud. She is drunk.


    Carmen : What the ***** happened in here?


    Shane turns her head to look who’s talking.


    Carmen : What did you do?


    Shane starts laughing at the cartoons again. Carmen drops her stuff in the lobby and joins Shane on the couch.


    Carmen : Baby? What happened in here?

    Shane : Hum..um. (rising the shoulders)

    Carmen : Are you drunk? (aggressive)

    Shane : No (starts laughing again).. mmm.. zzmaybe a zzllittle.

    Carmen : “Maybe a little” (upset)

    Shane : ..a zzllittle too mucthzzz.


    (silence)


    Carmen : It smells weird in here of course bottles of beers Have you taken a shower ?

    Shane : (looks at Carmen by the corner of her eyes) umm.mm

    Carmen : (takes Shane’s arm to take her to the shower) Let’s go c’mon.


    Shane barely gets up. Carmen tries to hold her as much as she can, but the task is harder that she thought.


    Carmen : Where’s Marina? Isn’t she supposed to be here?

    Shane : Zzzwee Znoo zhe’s gone.

    Carmen : Where? I mean .. why?

    Shane : Zwee got za littlez fight.

    Carmen : (upset) What did you do?

    Shane : I wwwas talking to Zenny , zand zhe heard me.

    Carmen : (upset) But what did you said?

    Shane : (unconsciously) ZzzI love Zenny.

    Carmen : WHAT?

    Shane : Humm.mmmm


    Carmen, upset, leaves Shane there, grabs her stuff and slams the door.


    Shane : Baby?

     


     

    To Be Continued

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    Comments

    1. Well I found some money and went and bought more “PUFFS”, a wise decision I’m sure. I loved the way that Marina gave Shane the news. Carmen’s response to Shane’s revelation was classic. I feel big time drama coming on. Excellent chapter,I’ll see you soon…

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