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    Alice and Dana – How to get back the love of their life? Chapter 20

    “Hey” said a slowly voice behind her. Alice smiles, her tension just get away at the sound and look of Dana “Hey” she answers turning over. They stay here looking at each other, just like that.

    Alice is looking, well analysing Dana’s outfit. Dana wears black trousers that highlight perfectly her legs. Alice wonders how’s her ***** has to be in it, she smiles. Dana also wears a dressy top, letting free her shoulders. (Mmmh she’s so beautiful. I can’t stop smiling, I’m too happy. God she’s gonna think I crazy, here smiling for no reason)

    But Dana is smiling too. She ever loved Alice’s look and tonight, for some reason, Alice appears for her most beautiful than never, she just the most beautiful woman she ever seen. Alice wears a black dress with those floaty skirts. She also had a showel to cover her shoulders. Her hair (thanks to Shane) are brushed in a 60th years look, cool ad funny at the same time. Dana bites her bottom lip smiling (she’s so wonderful. I can’t believe she’s here and she gives me a second chance. I know how lucky I am for that and I will make sort out for you Alice. I’m here with you and forever. I will never let you again, never)

    “You are beautiful” just said Dana

    “Thanks, I have to say you’re quite good” said still smiling Alice

    “Quite good?” asks disapointed Dana

    “Yeah” Alice comes closer to Dana “and so hot” she kisses softly her cheek. Dana blushes, it seems that her body’temperature had grown of 10 degrees in a second.

    “Shall we enter?” proposed Alice

    Dana put Alice’s arms under hers and placed a hand on hers “Of course”.

    As they entered in the restaurant, called by the way “la nuit enchante” they know that this night is one of the most important of their whole life life. “Bonsoir Mesdames, Can I take your things and show you the table” said the receptionist. Alice takes off her showel as she doesn’t need it here. Dana looks again at her with this look that said “God I’m with the most beautiful woman in the world and she’s here for me”. The recepcionist looks Dana then Alice who’s smiling. He smiles thinking that for those two its an important night so if he can help he will do it. He shows Alice and Dana the table proposing them a cup of Champagne or ros (that sweet french vine) offered by the restaurant meanwhile they choose what they whant to eat. They accepted the Chanpagne and the recepcionist leaves them alone. Its weired but at the moment he leaves Alice and Dana felt nervious. Not knowing what to do or say. Like a first, first date. Alice feels her stomach filled up by some thing heavy. The tension is really high in this moment. She doesn’t know what to do when she heard Joan’s voice in her head.

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    1. I can’t believe you leave us in this mess. For two weeks at that. Just teasing. great chapter Alice and Dana both needs to grow up a wee bit more in the I love you department,with each other. God.Gabby, Alice lost her mind.. Enjoy your trip. and do a lot of sightseeing and have fun with your brother, thanks

    2. This is 1 Kick ass storie…SWT Post as always but honestly I expect nothing less, you being a superb writer and all…You will be missed…Looking forward to your return&future posting…DUN ever stop…Thnx 4 writing…

    3. Hi that was great as usual. I loved Joan doing the pretend dinner and getting Alice all ready. Even though i knew this was coming i still cant believe Alice/Gabby. I hope Joan can work her magic and help Dana/Alice get back together. Thanks for this.

    4. I can’t believe that you did that, and just for two weeks, that was evil, lol. But I agree that Alice has work to do with her issues, ’cause they are part of the reason of Dana’s leaving. BTW I don’t hate Lara it’s only that for me is an uninteresting character, at least you give her some humanity, lol.

    5. OMG….i’ve just caught up with your story and I have to say that I’m totally enjoying it. Love love love the character of Joan….great idea for introducing her. Great story keep up the great writing…..nice way to leave it hanging with Gabby in the picture, totally did not expect that one!!

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