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Snippets of Bliss
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Tina’s back rested against the arm of the couch. The coiled script in her hand was the focus of her rapt attention, red pen at the ready. Bette sat cross-legged at the opposite end of the couch, only occasionally aware of Tina’s toes brushing her right thigh. She was busy perusing artists’ catalogues, hoping to make a discovery others had overlooked. Tina’s toes curled as she pulled Bette’s yoga pants from the surface of her leg, just as quickly releasing the elastic fabric, returning it to its original position hugging Bette’s body. Bette set the catalogue down.
”Are you doing that on purpose?” she asked over her reading glasses.
”Doing what, babe?” Tina responded, drawn from her task.
”That thing with your toes,” Bette said, with an eyebrow raised.
”I’m sorry, was I bothering you?” Tina asked innocently.
”It’s just kind of distracting,” Bette said as she squeezed Tina’s toes. ”You’re definitely not bothering me.”
”I’ll stop,” Tina said as she bent her knees to pull her feet away from Bette. ”I didn’t even realize I was doing anything.”
”I’m going to get a glass of water,” Bette said as she stood to go to the kitchen. ”Can I get you anything?”
”A plum would be great, thanks,” Tina responded after a pensive pause.
Bette made her way to the kitchen, poured herself a glass of water from the pitcher in the fridge and grabbed Tina a plum, washing it off under the tap before returning to the living room.
”Can I ask you something,” Bette asked as she handed Tina her snack.
”Of course, you can ask me anything,” Tine replied as she set the script down, a hint of concern lacing the edge of her words.
”Remember when you moved in and Alice found your…Halloween costume?” Bette asked, and then continued on without waiting for a reply. ”Was it really a Halloween costume?” Bette took a seat in the middle of the couch and pulled Tina’s legs back over her lap, letting her left hand run down Tina’s shin.
”Bette! Yes, it was!” Tine replied, mortified all over again at Alice’s discovery of a braided whip in one of the packing boxes. She felt however that Bette would be willing to listen to more of her explanation without the disbelieving glances that would have come from Alice. ”It was from two years ago. I went with a group of people from work and my boyfriend at the time. He was dressed as a lion and I was the lion tamer. He thought it would be cute. I thought it was lame.”
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That was great. Love it!
Love this! That vision of Tina in my mind with the black leather and whip….damn. Good job.
omg! visual picture in my head of Tina in leather, mmm :p
give that whip another destination eh ;)
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH Tina. That would definitly bring Bette to her knees along with a 1/2 dozen other women. Home tonight should be very interesting. Can’t wait.
Hey JKS I’m still catching up too LOL! that was so great I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!
My Bette all in black with her cape with the red lining. It so hot in her. Tina in leather, Shit sweating very badly here. First you throw in the toe thing and then the rest. Double cold shower.. thanks
JKS,
Such a delight to read and enjoy.
I know that you have planned to keep this serial as stand alone chapters however this one is begging for more.
We need to know what happens when Bette and Tina get home. I am sure that between the outfits and whip that much fun will be had.
I am drooling in anticipation at the merest flicker of what might be.
You write so magnificently as to capture me in your spell. I am a fly stuck to your web. In this trance states I desire only one thing: the next chapter.
The interweaving of all the gals with the reminisce of the whip brilliant links the two story threads.
I am in awe of you.
Thank you for this bounteous gift and all the effort in entails.
Please continue as I will be here.
Your Loyal Fan.
now that was a visual… WOW… please we need to know more about that night…
I could so picture Tina in leather…SEXY….THANKS…PLEASE POST SOON
Yummy! Tina sounds sooo sexy, even more so than she already is. Hopefully Bette will be on her knees when they get home like Tina said *hint hint* lol Loved it and can’t wait for more
jks – geez. “that thing with your toes.” “its just kind of distracting.” ya think. im distracted enough for the both of them.
“ah, bette, i dont think tina is as sensititive to teasing as you think she is.” “tina saunter confidently into the planet…” “that outfit could bring me to my knees.” wtf. is she superwoman. im on my knees and its only a visual.
“with that she stood from her chair and uncoiled her whip, letting the end move over the floor as she brought it between bettes legs and dragged the length of it over her inner thigh.” “sweet jesus” oh gawd. that was it for me.
thanks a bunch sweetie.
Oh Wow!!!!!!!, what a HOT sexy night this is going to be. Tina And Bette dressed all in black. Wish they would let them dress like that on the show for a costume party. What ratings!!!!!
Wow is right!! Love both their costumes but especially Tina’s…black leather, whip and all. Teaser (Tina) and the Teasee (Bette??)?! More please. Thanks, JKS.
Snippets is a wonderful concept, and you delivered it brilliantly.
The casual touching that may or may not have deliberate intention and the playful banter draws us in immediately. The seductive turn that their conversation takes has that undercurrent of sensuality of a new relationship.
I guess Alice, or anyone else for that matter, will think Tina is an easy target going forward…now will they!
Loved how you gave us just enough details to make it scintillating. Less is more, as they say.
Can’t wait to see more Snippets.
“Sweet Jesus,” Alice said under her breath.
Now, with all of that action going on whips, confidence and all. Why is Dana still without a clue? Continuing to remain distracted by unapproachable women. LOL!! I could picture that exact scene. I’m digging snippets…
Fins,
I like the toe action, or more, the not even realizing that she was doing it. What a fun chapter…it’s always a pleasure to see you pop up with a new story!
that was a great chapter, jks. You just keep writing them and we will be here to read them.
JKS, Thanks this was fun! I’m all in favor of Tina with a whip!
Yeha JKS is back with a awesome chapter. Damn they are so hot and tonight at home will be more hot and interesting to. Ok post soon, thanks!
I am on my knees :)
I concur SWEET JESUS.Awsome as usual.
JKS that was awsome. i wish tina would wear that outfit on the show lmao
Nothing like a little confident kickass Tina to make me… I mean Bette come to her knees.
High Holidays indeed. :) Great writing as usual. Thanks.
JKS,
Thank you for this brilliant and beautiful continuation.
More comments after digesting it in full.
Now thats a Tina I’d like to see more of….
Good story!
“The thing with the toes” … Your attention to detail is my favourite skill of yours. You keep it simple but it resonates deep into ones conscious mind. It reminds the body of such subtle enchanting memories of pleasure, or perhaps those one dreams of.
Again with that intro you duplicate for me the ability to make time slow with your enactment, is it deliberate ? You are one of the few I know who have this ability.
Thank you.
“Tina saunter confidently into the Planet” I’ll say…
Yay, you’re back and you haven’t missed a beat. Must be the swimmer in you. :-)
JKS
I can’t tell if my computer screen melted or if my contact lenses evaporated from the heat….
I knew I’d like this series as much as your previous story:)sorry for the late comment
you just know those two so damn well. nice work. i was just reading this story with you don’t know me of tracy bonham on the background. what a coincidence.
yo JKS!!!!!!welcome back with more brilliant story……..this is a great one i have to say. cute*
Is it just me or did it suddenly get hot in here ?
Thank god i’m not at work – Tina in leathers with a whip — Bette in her outfit was enough but OH MY !!
Excellent and agree about the toes thing was really subtle.
GO TINA!!
Amazing start to a wonderful new series. I’m eager to see what Bette, Tina & the Gang adventures you plan on taking us on.
And if they’re all as steamy & suggestive as this one, then I guess we’re all in for a really good ride.
Please post soon
awesome- loved it!
Tina…and a whip. Meow! I’m feeling like a bad reader who needs a bit of punishment.