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Snippets of Bliss
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”Isn’t Tina coming?” Dana asked.
”She had to work late tonight, so she was going to come right from work,” Bette responded. ”I was actually surprised she wanted to come out tonight.”
”Well, I’m glad she decided to come out,” Alice replied. ”Halloween is like the High Holidays for gay folk. She wouldn’t want to miss her first opportunity to make a splash at one of the biggest events of the year.”
”I have to say Alice, don’t tease her about the whip you found,” Bette said. ”I think she was really embarrassed about it.”
”Oh yeah, I forgot about that,” Alice said as she tapped Dana’s arm to remind her. ”Remember, I told you that night when we left their house right after Tina moved in. She was so easy to bug, I couldn’t resist.”
”Yeah, well my point is I would like you to try to resist tonight,” Bette asked. ”If I thought you’d forgotten I never would have brought it up.”
”Is she going to be pretty late?” Shane inquired as one of many women who had caught her eye that evening ambled by the table.
”Over here Shane,” Alice snapped her fingers to the left of Shane to regain her attention.
”She should be here right away, she said she’d just change at work,” Bette replied.
Alice’s gaze was over Bette’s shoulder, and her jaw dropped open.
”Ah, Bette, I don’t think Tina is as sensitive to teasing as you think she is,” Alice finally managed to stammer out.
With that statement, all four sets of eyes turned to see Tina saunter confidently into the Planet, dressed head to toe in black leather; knee high spike-heeled boots, mini-skirt, and skin-tight tank topped off with a form fitting black leather jacket. Her hair hung loosely around her shoulders, and they couldn’t help but be drawn to the shade of blazing red lipstick Tina wore. In her left hand, she held the whip.
Bette stood to greet Tina’s approach and was shocked at how much taller she was in the boots.
”Now I know why you were being so mysterious with what you were wearing tonight,” Bette said quietly. ”That outfit could bring me to my knees.”
”That’ll be later baby,” Tina whispered back with a smile. ”We’re going to have a little fun tonight.”
The server approached the table to take their drink order.
”I’ll have a marguerita with an extra shot please,” Tina requested when it was her turn to order.
”Starting off with doubles?” Bette asked of Tina, and then placed her own order. ”I’ll have a mineral water with a twist of lime.”
”I worked a 13-hour day today, and don’t have to be in tomorrow until an 11 o’clock meeting,” Tina said by way of explanation. ”I’m going to party with my girlfriend.”
With that she stood from her chair and uncoiled her whip, letting the end move over the floor as she brought it between Bette’s legs and dragged the length of it over her inner thigh.
”Sweet Jesus,” Alice said under her breath. Shane simply sat there grinning at Tina’s boldness, while Dana remained distracted by the women she perceived as unapproachable.
”I see they’ve set up a dance floor for the evening,” Tina said with a smile. ”Would you care to join me?”
Bette stood and let Tina lead her to the dance floor, which was already teeming with activity.
Tina pulled Bette into her and hung onto the whip handle with both hands behind the small of Bette’s back.
”You do know how to make an entrance, don’t you?” Bette asked with a smile.
”The best defence is a good offence babe,” Tina replied. ”I anticipated Alice might want to tease me about having found this when I moved in, so I thought I would dress to diffuse the situation.
”Brilliant as usual,” Bette commented. ”Is it any wonder I love you?”
”No wonder at all,” Tina replied.
The evening unfolded in a relatively predictable way, with Tina once again gaining ground in the eyes of not only Bette, but Bette’s hard to impress friends.
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That was great. Love it!
Love this! That vision of Tina in my mind with the black leather and whip….damn. Good job.
omg! visual picture in my head of Tina in leather, mmm :p
give that whip another destination eh ;)
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH Tina. That would definitly bring Bette to her knees along with a 1/2 dozen other women. Home tonight should be very interesting. Can’t wait.
Hey JKS I’m still catching up too LOL! that was so great I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!
My Bette all in black with her cape with the red lining. It so hot in her. Tina in leather, Shit sweating very badly here. First you throw in the toe thing and then the rest. Double cold shower.. thanks
JKS,
Such a delight to read and enjoy.
I know that you have planned to keep this serial as stand alone chapters however this one is begging for more.
We need to know what happens when Bette and Tina get home. I am sure that between the outfits and whip that much fun will be had.
I am drooling in anticipation at the merest flicker of what might be.
You write so magnificently as to capture me in your spell. I am a fly stuck to your web. In this trance states I desire only one thing: the next chapter.
The interweaving of all the gals with the reminisce of the whip brilliant links the two story threads.
I am in awe of you.
Thank you for this bounteous gift and all the effort in entails.
Please continue as I will be here.
Your Loyal Fan.
now that was a visual… WOW… please we need to know more about that night…
I could so picture Tina in leather…SEXY….THANKS…PLEASE POST SOON
Yummy! Tina sounds sooo sexy, even more so than she already is. Hopefully Bette will be on her knees when they get home like Tina said *hint hint* lol Loved it and can’t wait for more
jks – geez. “that thing with your toes.” “its just kind of distracting.” ya think. im distracted enough for the both of them.
“ah, bette, i dont think tina is as sensititive to teasing as you think she is.” “tina saunter confidently into the planet…” “that outfit could bring me to my knees.” wtf. is she superwoman. im on my knees and its only a visual.
“with that she stood from her chair and uncoiled her whip, letting the end move over the floor as she brought it between bettes legs and dragged the length of it over her inner thigh.” “sweet jesus” oh gawd. that was it for me.
thanks a bunch sweetie.
Oh Wow!!!!!!!, what a HOT sexy night this is going to be. Tina And Bette dressed all in black. Wish they would let them dress like that on the show for a costume party. What ratings!!!!!
Wow is right!! Love both their costumes but especially Tina’s…black leather, whip and all. Teaser (Tina) and the Teasee (Bette??)?! More please. Thanks, JKS.
Snippets is a wonderful concept, and you delivered it brilliantly.
The casual touching that may or may not have deliberate intention and the playful banter draws us in immediately. The seductive turn that their conversation takes has that undercurrent of sensuality of a new relationship.
I guess Alice, or anyone else for that matter, will think Tina is an easy target going forward…now will they!
Loved how you gave us just enough details to make it scintillating. Less is more, as they say.
Can’t wait to see more Snippets.
“Sweet Jesus,” Alice said under her breath.
Now, with all of that action going on whips, confidence and all. Why is Dana still without a clue? Continuing to remain distracted by unapproachable women. LOL!! I could picture that exact scene. I’m digging snippets…
Fins,
I like the toe action, or more, the not even realizing that she was doing it. What a fun chapter…it’s always a pleasure to see you pop up with a new story!
that was a great chapter, jks. You just keep writing them and we will be here to read them.
JKS, Thanks this was fun! I’m all in favor of Tina with a whip!
Yeha JKS is back with a awesome chapter. Damn they are so hot and tonight at home will be more hot and interesting to. Ok post soon, thanks!
I am on my knees :)
I concur SWEET JESUS.Awsome as usual.
JKS that was awsome. i wish tina would wear that outfit on the show lmao
Nothing like a little confident kickass Tina to make me… I mean Bette come to her knees.
High Holidays indeed. :) Great writing as usual. Thanks.
JKS,
Thank you for this brilliant and beautiful continuation.
More comments after digesting it in full.
Now thats a Tina I’d like to see more of….
Good story!
“The thing with the toes” … Your attention to detail is my favourite skill of yours. You keep it simple but it resonates deep into ones conscious mind. It reminds the body of such subtle enchanting memories of pleasure, or perhaps those one dreams of.
Again with that intro you duplicate for me the ability to make time slow with your enactment, is it deliberate ? You are one of the few I know who have this ability.
Thank you.
“Tina saunter confidently into the Planet” I’ll say…
Yay, you’re back and you haven’t missed a beat. Must be the swimmer in you. :-)
JKS
I can’t tell if my computer screen melted or if my contact lenses evaporated from the heat….
I knew I’d like this series as much as your previous story:)sorry for the late comment
you just know those two so damn well. nice work. i was just reading this story with you don’t know me of tracy bonham on the background. what a coincidence.
yo JKS!!!!!!welcome back with more brilliant story……..this is a great one i have to say. cute*
Is it just me or did it suddenly get hot in here ?
Thank god i’m not at work – Tina in leathers with a whip — Bette in her outfit was enough but OH MY !!
Excellent and agree about the toes thing was really subtle.
GO TINA!!
Amazing start to a wonderful new series. I’m eager to see what Bette, Tina & the Gang adventures you plan on taking us on.
And if they’re all as steamy & suggestive as this one, then I guess we’re all in for a really good ride.
Please post soon
awesome- loved it!
Tina…and a whip. Meow! I’m feeling like a bad reader who needs a bit of punishment.