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Trouble in designer suits Ch.5
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Previously:
——–Rachel——-
I don’t know what made me say it I had spent all this time not talking about any of it and then all of a sudden I slip up and to a complete stranger. I think it was just the kindness that I saw in her eyes as I looked in them.
“Andy told me not to say anything, I should have listened. I should have listened to her a long time ago; maybe then she wouldn’t have had to bring me away. She would still be working where she loves in New York and we would be like we were before”
——–Bette——–
“Angie while you are on summer vacation for the next few weeks could you have lunch with Rachel each day.
I was shocked but what she said next made all three of us agree to the way Angie would pay her debt.
She simply sighed and as she went to leave said,
“I think my wife needs to learn to let someone in and I don’t see how anyone can not open their heart to someone as full of life and love as Angie.”
She looked back and the last thing I heard her say was..
“She used to be a lot like you, maybe You can help her find herself again.”
Rachel & Andy’s Hotel Suite
——–Andy——-
I had not gone straight back to the hotel after leaving Bette and Tina’s last night. I couldn’t face another night of trying to talk and not being able to break through the wall that Rach had built up. So instead I found a small jazz bar that let me in even though I was wearing a tracksuit. I just let the music flow over me while I drank myself into a numb state where there was no pain.
When the bar shut I went back to the hotel but requested a separate room. I had called Rachel then to let her no I was safe but needed to sleep on my own and I would come by the room in the morning.
So here I am knocking to be let into my own hotel room. As she opens the door I can see that I was probably not the only one who drank themselves into oblivion last night. But she is still so beautiful and my heart immediately goes out to her. But I cannot touch her not now. If I do then I will never say what I need to and I know I will not be able to leave her when she looks so broken.
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Very touching chapter. If you want insightful honesty, you can always get it from a child.
You gotta love children for making us see things so clearly. I like the way you write, it’s different from a lot of the stuff here. It’s always nice to read that Bette and Tina actually have a future together and are happy, as well as everyone else.
I’ve just read all the chapters you’ve written so far. The pool scene made me laugh a lot, I can imagine Bette standing in there fully clothed and totally p-ed off. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
children don’t suger coat much in life…thanks for this story, I feel myself caring about two totally different (non B/T) character, and wanting to know more…only your story telling could do that….more pls!!!
ngie
You got my heart beating 3xtimezx fast..PLEASE Post so0N..
My PC went crazy,or maybe just me. Childre are so honesty, some times they make you stop and smell the roses. They can ask questions and want a answer, They make you see the world ao differently. thanks
Ellie this story has so much potential. your writing is interesting as to how your create your characters. they are so soulful. i am curious to see both couples interact in the future. hope to read you again soon. thanks.
This chapter is amazing and touching, and let see what’s next, thanks!