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    uh oh…/chapter 1

    +milk

    the lights pumped through the club and followed carmen as she approched Shane. Shane smiled and looked toward the stage.

    carmen: Whats going on?
    Shane:no clue

    the music stopped and a women stepped on stage

    woman:ladies and um, a few gentleman (laughs)
    please welcome the combined talents of rythem dream

    A mixture of beats and rythem guitar fills the club and a tall black man jumps on stage followed by a much smaller white girl the guy wore a black tank top with white pants witha white bandana hiding the front of his corn rows and somewhat square blue sunglasses
    he rapped and the girl cut in to sing
    She wore jeans with a white tank top under a sweat jacket that hung off her shoulders her short messy hair was held down underneath a blue hat that cast a shadow over her right eye

    Shane looked at carmen and saw her smiling, shane assumed she was just enjoying the music.
    The song ended and the girl handed the microphone to someon behing her and hops off stage and disapears

    carmen:i have to use the bathroom, be right back
    shane:okay

    carmen walked toward the bathroom but turned as soon as she saw the girl that was on stage she walks up behind her and puts her arms around her

    carmen:pretty fly for a white girl
    she turns around to look at the latina) :carmen de la pica morales what are you doing here?
    carmen: cris townsend i was going to ask you the same question
    cris:well obviosly you already know my answer, whats your?
    carmen: im here with my…..girlfriend (carmen points toward the bar)
    cris:cool. ***** I have to go we should get together later this week. Do you still live with your mom?
    carmen nods quietly
    carmen:yeah you should come over whenever
    cris:ok bye
    cris leans in to kiss carmens cheek but purposely misses and kisses her neck and carmen shivers but smiles
    cris leaves the club

    +planet

    alice:did you see the hottie onstage at milk last night? geez
    dana:which one are you referring to?
    alice gives her a glare
    shane:guys chill
    carmen:so you guys saw cris too?
    shane/alice/dana:cris?
    carmen looks overwhelmed
    carmen:yea cris and todd
    shane:you never told me you knew them
    carmen:i went to school with them.   carmen lies


    alice:really wanna hook me up? alice jokes
    dana looks upset
    carmen smiles):well she doesnt do ‘relationships’  carmen says
    as she looks at shane who laughs

    +carmens house
    (the doorbell rings)

    carmen opens the door and is surprised to see  cris standing there and she smiles

    carmen:Hi, come in
    cris:k
    carmen:im glad you came
    cris:yeah?
    carmen nods
    cris:where is everyone? its so quiet!
    carmen:in mexico they are visiting my aunt
    cris:we are….alone?
    carmen:(laughs)yep, dont get any ideas
    cris: i cant help it
    cris gets closer to carmen and carmen doesnt move, leaving almost no space between them cris rests her forehead agianst carmens.
    cris:(completely relaxed) you still make my heart race
    carmen laughs nervously
    cris:do you remember what happened the last time we were alone?
    carmen:(closes her eyes and smiles bigger) the night you left(carmens smile quickly wanes)
    cris:why did i leave agian?
    carmen:cant remember, something about new york and todd…tou chose todd over me
    cris:…becuase im an idiot
    carmen:yes
    cris:childish
    carmen:definatly
    cris:its inconceivable how stupid i was, and now i cant even tell you how i feel
    carmen:why?
    cris:i dont know it feels like your somewhere else
    carmen:im not
    cris:i came back becuase i missed you
    carmen:(looks up at cris)you did
    cris nods
    carmen:why did you leave?
    cris:(pauses)….for me, should i leave?
    carmen:no
    cris:how long should i stay?
    carmen:mmm, how much time do you need?

    to be continued…






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