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the return of Love’s Calling – 9 : Pink Looks Good on You
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Bette
stopped off at the gourmet market to pick up some items and then headed over to
Tina’s place. Soon the two were off to their afternoon outing. Bette maneuvered
her way through the West Hollywood traffic and turned to exit for the scenic
route of the Pacific Coast.
Tina tried to absorb the beauty of the landscape, but had great difficulty
breaking her gaze from Bette. Every now and then, Bette would glance to find
Tina looking at her. Tina would then blush each time their eyes met, causing
Bette’s heart to melt and a smile to appear on each woman’s face.
Bette: (looking at Tina) “Are you hungry?”
Tina: (lost in those brown eyes of one Miss Bette Porter) “You know, I kind of
am”
Bette: (smiling) “Good. I know the perfect place.”
Tina: (with a curious expression) “Where we going?”
Bette: (a sly smile) “I’d rather surprise you, Tina.”
Tina: (loving her name escape Bette’s lips and faking a pout) “oh okay”
Bette: (taking in Tina’s adorable expression) “You know, that’s an impressive
pout you’ve got.”
Tina: (pouting even more and getting excited) “So, you’ll tell me where we’re
going?”
Bette: (laughing) “Ahno. But I promise it will be a nice surprise.”
Tina: (laughing) “AlrightI’ll be patient.”
Bette: (looking at Tina and feeling so much coursing through her heart) “so
will I Tina, so will I.”
Bette thinks to herself ‘for this one, I will wait as long as I have to.’
Meanwhile Tina is lost in her thoughts ‘God, I hope she can be as patient as I
need her to be.’
Bette: (pulling into a parking spot) “Well, here we are”
Tina: (almost laughing) “I love this beach!”
Bette: (smiling) “You come here often?”
Tina: (thinking she had just been there earlier to reflect about one Miss Bette
Porter and now she returns with her) “Yesyou have no idea.”
Bette: “Well, let’s unload our stuff and head out there. Shall we?”
Tina: (exiting the car) “Sounds like a plan.”
Bette opens her trunk and is pulling out a picnic basket, a blanket and an
umbrella.
Tina: (reaching out) “Here, let me help you.”
Bette: (handing her the umbrella) “Thanks.”
The two walk unto the beach, which busy with activity. The waves are gently
crashing into the shore, the conversations echoing across the sand and the sun
shining its rays brightly upon everything in its path.
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my heart is beating right along with Tina’s . I can’t wait to see what the note reads. This was a wonderful chapter. Love the chemistry between them. thank you……and post soon.
Ooh! My heart is beating hard too…only I think it left my chest and is threatening to jump out of my throat! I’m loving this story ya’ll! Thanks!!!!
Do you think we’ll ever see Bette and Tina’s courtship on the show?
Thanks for these romantic moments!
God..you are keeping my heart in a state. Thanks for this wonderful chapter and the one before
“The envelope reads “Tina” in perfect penmanship. Tina opens it and…”
And you’re teasing us again! We’re going to start pouting like Tina any second now…
What a beautiful day for Bette and Tina and they are so cute together. Ok what is say in the note, post soon please. Thanks!
OMG! Whoa! it’s getting better that was so Beautiful it’s really Awesome Thanks for posted again I’m really Enjoy reading it and it’s funny and Loving Story that was really wonderful writing You make MY day SO Beautiful night! I Love it so much you still have that great funny writing ability! that’s was I’m talking about Thank you BTaddict Hey I’m still remember the other Story the Banana Split that was so funny! Hey I just still remember I Love that Story OK! PLS. continue Thanks!
sweet!
I want more.
Ah come on, whats the note say. This is so sweet, day at the beach, Bette being patient,Tina kissing her, OMG Bette has got to be dying. Thank You.
Bette is so sweet,Just wish that this had been that way in the show. That the love would shine on them all the time. Thing can’t be perfect all the time… thanks
Thanks Heart for wanting to post a twofer and thanks Soul for letting her! So I see your computers have been affected by the sweetness of this story too. Are we being compensated as well? Maybe if we all go to the same shop they’ll give us a group discount! LOL Excellent chapter guys, per usual. *Sigh* I love the emotions coursing through these two. Thank you!!!
Heartandsoul, I Still keep coming along for the ride once more, and the story is enjoyful as usual.
Thank you for bring it back
*aaahhhhh sigh* thats exactly what i did when i finished reading this. thanks for hearing my begging. its not a pretty sight to see tho. ;) poor tina is in so deep and doesnt even know it. bette is flying so high and she doesnt care how far shes falling. this is just sooo good. thanks for sharing this with us. soon please.
“She had been waiting to kiss those sweet lips all afternoon…and now it was finally happening.”
My goodness, this new beautiful chapter of yours is such a model of fine build-up… That’s exactly how a simple kiss becomes more intense and exciting than any NC-17 scene ! At least for me it worked this way and no doubt I blushed as much as our shy Tina here…
What a delicate and adorable writing ! I love it – a lot.
As I loved the double appearances of the rose : how deeply romantic… awww, I knew I should have go to bed before to check the updates a last time ! I’m already such an incurable night bird and now it’s quite impossible to feel asleep for a good while, I’m afraid ! (*large smile*)
By the way, I lightly laughed reading “Her heart is beating so quickly; she places her hand on her chest, as if to slow its pace”, because that’s something I’m used to do so often ! That’s nice…
Well, very talented ladies, please accept once more all the sincere and grateful thanks for your pretty adorable B&T beginning. From the very bottom of your new addicted reader’s heart ! ^_^
… now I’ll try to sleep a while – endly ! – hoping to discover an update when I’ll wake up. Hmmm… one can dream, no ? (*wink*) I’m SO badly curious about this note ! If only I could read it over Tina’s shoulder… (*sigh !*) Well, like Bette I’ll be patient, that’s all !
ahhh, so sweat, i luv this story