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    Snippets of Bliss

    Story written on October 4, 2005 by justkeepswimming.
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    Connection. Chapter 4 of 5

    (Bette’s Point of View)

    "Oh my God," I woke up to the sound of my own voice. I felt Tina’s hands pushing my thighs apart as her tongue gently woke me further, stroking with a feather light touch. Then she took a small piece of skin between her teeth and bit me before I heard her voice.

     

    "I’m not waiting until Saturday, if that’s okay with you."

     

    Well. What do you say to that. I did what any self-respecting woman would do when faced with the prospect of having Tina Kennard licking at her inner thighs. I tangled my fingers in her hair to encourage her her to carry on with the task at hand. So to speak.

     

    She kissed back and forth repeatedly, moving from one thigh to the other, slowly ascending to her ultimate destination. I could feel the moisture accumulating as she teased me, but she kept me from moving by holding my pelvis down with her hands.

     

    She stopped kissing me and for a moment I felt nothing except her hands holding me down. Then she did it. I felt her tongue run over me in one long stroke, finishing by repeatedly moving up and down over my *****. I heard her lapping up all the moisture she was creating from her actions and then I felt her pause again. Her voice was barely audible because she kept her head between my legs as she spoke.

     

    "I’m never going this long without making love to you again," she began. "It makes me so wet to taste you."

     

    The sensation of her hot breath between my legs continued to drive me forward, and the vibrations created by her voice tickled at me further. She started doing that thing that drives me so wildmoving back and forth over me as if she’s French kissing me, sucking my tender flesh into her mouth one moment and then thrusting her tongue inside me the next. I can’t keep myself from trying to grasp at her when I feel her hot tongue curl to pull more liquid desire from me.

     

    Oh my ***** God, she just moaned into me. What she does to mewhat the ***** kept us from this for two ***** months? Have I lost my mind? I reach down with both hands on my shins and pull them up to spread my legs wider for her.

     

    "That’s better," I hear her say as I separate my legs further. The subtle movements of her head begin again, accompanied by the not-so-subtle sensations created by her tongue.

     

    "This part of you is so soft," she pauses to say, before making contact again, slightly removed from where I would prefer she make contact.

     

    I feel the tip of her tongue just beneath my *****, stroking up and down as she finally relents and glides her fingers inside me. ‘Surely to god it hasn’t been so long that she forgot where my ***** is located?’ I think to myself.

     

    "Do you want to come hard and fast or can I keep teasing you?" she asks.

     

    ‘Okay, so she hasn’t forgotten, she’s prolonging my agony,’ I think.

     

    "Don’t tease too long please Tee." I don’t want to sound like I’m begging, but really at this point, I’m not far from it. As the words leave me, I feel her tongue rapidly flick over my engorged flesh. She definitely hasn’t forgotten anything.

     

    Fingers inside me, her tongue and lips are ***** magic against me. Her hands now otherwise occupied, she’s not able to hold me down as I come. I’ve released my own shins, and my hips rise up and into her face as my heels push into the bed and toes grip at the fitted sheet.

     

    "Okay, okay, stop, I have to ask you to stop," I plead as the tenderness becomes too much for me, even as the end of my ***** continues to shake me to my core.

     

    I feel her get up from the bed, my eyes still closed as I recover.

     

    "Where are you going?"

     

    "I have to leave in half an hour," she said apologetically. "Location visit, remember? I’ll be back by three o’clock tomorrow afternoon."

     

    You’ll be back, and I’ll be ready for you.

     

    tbc

     

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    2. Wow! This was great! I am so glad that these two finally got the chance to connect. I hope there’s lots more of that in store for them. I am really enjoying your story. I have been reading, but not getting the chance to comment. I hope it will be a little longer than 5 chapters though. Looking forward to more! post soon.

    5. Bette wondering if Tina forgot where the ‘important’ parts were was funny.

      Throw the alarm clock out of the window, wake me up that way every morning.

      If that’s the preview, then Bette needs to make sure she takes some extra vitamins and pays Tina back in spades!

    7. “Oh my God” amen to that.

      “im not waiting until saturday, if thats okay with you.” no please prolong my agony.

      “surely to god it hasnt been so long that she forgot where my clit is located.” k try not having your jaw hitting the floor while laughing. not a pretty sight.

      holy hot dayum. im ready.

      jks. you are soooo good. *bows down* thanks

    9. Yes, the ol’timers in the crowd got the reference!

      As for storylines…I would really like to see your take on Tina’s coming out. I don’t know anyone who didn’t agonize a bit, cry a bit, listen to Janice Ian for hours on end (oops, dating myself again!) Not everyone in her life could have been supportive of this somewhat drastic change. I know you’d prefer to do “bliss”, but angst makes the bliss that much more blissfull, no?

    13. Hubba, hubba, baby! Bette may be against a quickie, but I’m glad to see Tina’s got other plans.

      As for stories…like someone said, T’s coming out would be a good one. B&T deciding that T will quit her job to do the mommy thing. (Although if she was on Xanax, I’m not sure that counts as ‘bliss’.) Ummm…had to be issues within the relationship during a 7 year period.

      Oh…I know…didn’t they do a ceremony at some point? Bachelorette party? Honeymoon? Lots of material to mine there.

    14. This was so damn hot!!! JKS, won’t you reconsider about ending snippets? I love this soooo much…and I’m sure other readers would agree. I like slacker’s suggestion on the commitment ceremony and all. But, I will read wherever you take us. Thank you!

    15. Fins, wowzy, dowzy! Super chapter, Nice alarm clock!!! Poor Bette has to wait a whole day and a half to get her Tina back!!! Oh the planning she will do.

    17. Funny and Hot! I am so glad u posted this little chapter. And as far as ideas for your snippets, you don’t need any help, your writting is amazing but if all else fails writ NC17 chapters..lol. Thanks a bunch

    18. Wont we all…. be waiting for her i mean!!!lol ok that was HOT i dont always comment but i do love your writting and am always happy to see a post from you! have to agree with you too about Ayns “Reflection” story it was one of the best looking forward to more from “Snippits of Bliss” too!

    20. AKA Just Once
      Ms Swim you have got my complete and total attention! What a way to wake up in the morning, indeed.

      And yes, I to am also not too young to get the “anyone, anyone” reference. Fun Movie!

      Thanks for writing and sharing. Love the Snippets!!!!!!!

    21. Damn, JKS you can’t even warn a girl?! You just got straight down to it didn’t you? (Pun intended) LOL Man I can’t think of any better way to wake up in the morning. Excellent job. F*ckin’ hot!!

    24. OMG, now that’s a WAKE UP call, or would you classify that as a bedtime snack, see that Tina had to should we say “Eat and run.” ha ha :o) Can harldy wait for her return. I hope that they don’t have anything planned for Sunday, because they will probably need a day to recouperate.

    28. **Swallows hard while squinting at the monitor in an effort to focus** Um…you’re killing me here JKS. I should have known you were going to knock me out with this. I’m so glad you didn’t make the length any longer because it already felt like a blissful eternity. Had it been one sentence longer, I would be on a stretcher being hauled off to who knows where.

      ‘Surely to god it hasn’t been so long that she forgot where my clit is located?’ I think to myself. LOL!!! (I wasn’t ready to laugh when I read this because I was trying to catch my breath from what I’d read up until that point. You forced me to snicker though. Loved it)

      Can I mention that one of the best love scenes I’ve read lately was by you, titled “Snippets of Bliss, ch. 4 of 5 “?

    30. Really – em just wow. That just seemed like making love not just sex. Love the humour too.
      Ideas for future. Well they must have had arguments so what about them – plus the making up bit;-)

    33. Thanks luv, i think this gives me a great idea to suprise my girlie when I get in this morning.. hope she reacts as well as Bette….love your writting… whens the next installment?

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