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Coming Back – Chapter 16
Previously
He continues harder and harder. Shane is crying so hard, she tries to scream, but nothing, no sounds is coming out of her mouth. After a while, he stops, Shane thinks he’s got enough but she’s wrong. He turns her and penetrates her in the *****. He still puts a hand on her mouth to keep her from screaming. She’s crying so hard. She looks at the sidewalk to get someone’s attention, but it seems that no one notice her, they all pass by the alley without seeing a thing. Jeff keeps penetrating her harder and harder in the *****, blood leaks out.
Jeff : YEAH! YOU LIKE IT! I’M SURE YOU DO YOU LIKE IT MOTHERFUCKING ***** !!
He keeps ***** her.
On the sidewalk, Carmen is coming back from the little store that she had to go, she walks in front of the alley.
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Carmen enters the Planet. She never saw Shane. In the Planet, she goes at the counter and calls Marina who’s in the kitchen.
Carmen : Marina!
Marina comes at the counter.
Marina : So you’re back.
Carmen : Yep !
Marina : You remember the guy who, I told you, looks familiar ?
Carmen : Yeah ?
Marina : He was waiting for Shane.
Carmen : Really.
Marina : Yeah.. they talk then Shane gave him some money and they left.
Carmen : Shane came here ?
Marina : Yeah, two minutes after you left.
Carmen : Ha.. (disappointed)
Marina : Still.. that guy.. I don’t know.. He doesn’t look really nice if you understand what I mean.
IN THE MEANTIME IN THE ALLEY
Jeff gets his ***** out of Shane’s *****. He takes her by the shoulders and turn her to look into her eyes. Shane is still crying. She’s mostly half-conscious and her face is full of scratches because her face was scrubbing against the brick wall.
Jeff : (arrogant) So.. Did you like it ?
Shane : Mmmff.
He shakes her as much as her head hits the wall at every move.
Jeff : Next time you better have money on you or it’s gonna be worst! DO YOU UNDERSTAND THAT?
Shane’s head is moving in all ways. He still holds her on a shoulder but instead of putting her on the ground, he take a swing and pushes her really hard in the face making her, practically instantly a black eye. Shane puts her two hands in her face, she realises that her face and hands are full of blood. In the meantime, he takes her by the shoulder and pushes her in a pile of garbage bags. After, he search in Shane’s bag and find a fifty dollar bill.
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Great Job! Post Soon
Great, Great job! Please post soon, don’t make us wait so long, it’s killin’ me. lol
Hey there! Thank you for “Coming Back”. This is a really really nice chapter. Shit,I was beginnig to think that there wouldn’t be anymore really interesting stories here to read. I’m glad to see that I was proven wrong. Hope to see you back here soon…
Great job, now let’s see how she’ll manage every emotions and how she’ll react.
this is great , good job i love ur work post soon please
That was awesome. I really like your story and I hope you won´t let us a wait too long, for tha next chapter.