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Coming Back – Chapter 16
Jeff : God dawm *****, you’re a ***** liar.
He takes another swing and kicks her on the sides.
INSIDE THE PLANET
Marina and Carmen are about to leave the Planet. Carmen is in Marina’s office waiting for her. Marina opens the door.
Marina : Do you mind if we pass in the alley ? I have a garbage bag to drop.
Carmen : No problem.
Marina : Perfect, so let’s go.
Marina grabs her purse and takes the garbage bag.
Carmen : Need any help?
Marina : No.. it’s okay, thanks.
They walk to the kitchen.
OUTSIDE THE PLANET
Jeff is still kicking Shane on every parts of her body. Suddenly, he hears a door opening. He instantly stops beating Shane and starts running to the sidewalk. Marina and Carmen come out the Planet. They see the guy running, then they look on the other side and they see Shane half-conscious in the garbage bags. Marina drops her garbage bag and runs toward the guy but he’s too far ahead. Carmen runs to Shane to take a look at her. She’s half naked her pants are still down, there is blood on her legs. Her face is full of blood, scratches, bruises and tears. Her clothes is covered by blood. Carmen approaches her and puts her hands in Shane’s face.
Carmen : Oh no.. (her eyes becomes full of tears) Oh my god
Shane : (murmurs, still thinks that Jeff is there) No stop please Nooo..
Carmen : Shane it’s okay, it’s me, Carmen.
Shane : (murmur) Carmen.
Carmen : Yeah.. it’s me.. everything is okay now.
Marina comes back from the sidewalk.
Marina : I’m sorry I didn’t get him. Oh my god, Shane.
Carmen : I think he raped her.
Marina : For sure he raped her. *****.
Carmen got her attention on Shane, who’s still not moving.
Carmen : Baby, can you walk ?
Shane : Wha.t ?
Carmen : (looking at Marina) We better call an ambulance.
Shane : No please don’t call the police.
Marina : Are you crazy? Of course we’re gonna call the police!
Shane : No.. please, no.. it’s gonna be worst (sniff)
Pain is everywhere on Shane’s body. You can see it. She’s suffering Carmen try to hold her, but she’s so scared for hurting her. She passes her hands under Shane’s shoulder to try to lift her, but Shane is too heavy. Marina comes to help her. After a moment, they lift her and they bring her in Carmen’s car.
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Great Job! Post Soon
Great, Great job! Please post soon, don’t make us wait so long, it’s killin’ me. lol
Hey there! Thank you for “Coming Back”. This is a really really nice chapter. Shit,I was beginnig to think that there wouldn’t be anymore really interesting stories here to read. I’m glad to see that I was proven wrong. Hope to see you back here soon…
Great job, now let’s see how she’ll manage every emotions and how she’ll react.
this is great , good job i love ur work post soon please
That was awesome. I really like your story and I hope you won´t let us a wait too long, for tha next chapter.