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No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 25
The next morning Sara found herself alone for the first time in a few days. It was calming and frightening at the same time. She wanted to try and think of all the things in life she would be missing out on, but after of few minutes she realized there was nothing. Perhaps it was that thought that was the depressing part. Her face began to droop in sadness as she realized that maybe death was the best thing to ever happen to her. A slight knock on the door snapped her back to her sad reality.
Bette: Can I come in?
The stunning brunette peeked her head in Sara’s room hoping the discomfort she was feeling didn’t show to plainly on her face.
Sara: Of course.
Bette walked hesitantly into the room looking for a place to sit. Sara patted the side of the bed.
Sara: Come sit next to me.
Bette took a deep breath and made her way over to Sara.
The silence that followed was deafening.
Bette spoke first.
Bette: So what’s new?
Sara looked around raising her hands in the air.
Sara: Um, not a whole lot. I’m currently debating the pro’s and con’s of buying the new iPod.
Bette dropped her head in defeat.
Bette: I’m sorry.
Sara placed her hand lovingly on the small of Bette’s back.
Sara: Bette, it’s fine.
Bette stood up quickly ready to beg for forgiveness.
Sara: I know this must be hard to watch.
Bette spoke softly.
Bette: You have no idea
Sara: I kind of do.
Bette: Oh god.
Bette placed her hand over mouth hoping to keep the stupid comments to a minimum.
Bette: No, I didn’t mean it like that
Sara: I know Bette. It’s fine. It’s not easy for me to sit here and watch everyone wait for me die.
Bette: It’s not like that.
Sara: Really? Because I think it is.
Her words stung with bitterness.
Sara: I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to snap.
Bette: This is ridiculous Sara. We keep going back and forth apologizing for things we have no control over. Let’s change the subject please.
Bette’s eyes pleaded with Sara and like always, she won.
Sara: I need to tell you something.
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FLAIR!!!! You’ve re-materialized on the earth plane!!! So glad you’re back…You’ve been missed in the worst way! And I see you haven’t lost your touch…already got a scarey phone call happening. So glad you’re well and life is good!
YAY!!! Girl, I’m só glad you are back with your story, seriously! Always loved your writing, adored the characters. Can’t wait for a next chapter!
i love this story!! please continue writing! ive missed it
thank the heavens ur back flair missed ya!! alice good lord help us!
Welcome back!! You were deeply missed.
I missed your posts so much.Welcome back!!!Can’t wait for what’s next..
But I swear, someday there’ll be a celebration throughout Oz (aka…the L-Word fan fic site) That’s all to do with YOU! Considering all the comments, I believe this is a celebration…Welcome Back!!!
Welcome back. Misses you and your story Thanks for coming back
Welcome back Miss Flair. So nice to read you again. My eyes was tickling when I saw your name and they enjoy what they red. I’m happy that you find love. Enjoy it and please continue to post.
Flair! So good to see you again! Glad things are going well for you and even gladder you got through your trials. Missed you and this story tons!
Welcome back missed this story but its always worth waiting for looking forward to more when you get around to it tho!lol great chapter thanks
i couldn’t believe when i saw your next chapter, i’m so happy you are back…i’m happy that B&T are moving together…i hope there won’t be too much drama…thanks for posting, i missed your story
Welcome back, Flair. Missed you! This is very fine storytelling, don’t ever doubt it and please keep it going!!! Dragon
rach – good to hear things are on the mend. so glad that bridget is making ya happy. can feel it, rach.
thanks for posting. it was quite a surprise to find this. you havent lost your touch. when you can is great. did you get the show???
Hey it’s time for me to go to bed but I see your posted OMG! I need to read it OMG! welcome back Flair we Missed you! I’ll know alot of you Fanfiction happy to read your Awesome and Beautiful writing Story Whoa! I’m happy to see your back! it’s been a while Thank you for posted again PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE and THANKS!!
When i saw your username the other night I knew you were coming back to us.I am so glad you posted.Congrats on what good is coming to you.Can’t wait for your next post.
So glad your back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! post soon
Welcome back Flair. Your writing has been missed…this story has been missed. Thanks.
OMG nice to hear from you……. loved it can’t wait for your next post
Welcome back Flair – glad things are going well for you. I’ve missed your posts.
Welcome Back. So glad you’re back. I missed these ladies. Alice and Alex still priceless. Loved it!!!
Welcome back Flair,
You have been missed, I am glad to hear things are improving and I will be awaiting your posts whenever you have a chance. Keep up the great work!
Of course we forgive you as long as you continue this fantabulous story. ;)
hi flair,
thank you for coming back, you’re worth for waiting.
Hope you could continue this excellent story.
Welcome back! I’m so glad to see you here again! I was also pleased to hear that life has been treating you well lately. I pray that things will continue to go that way. Kiitos for continuing your story.
yipee! ur back!:) i woke up in the middle of the night wondering why i cannot sleep.. little did i know there was a gift online here:) see everything happens for a reason! seriously!!
welcome back flair. definitely missed ur story. hope everything works out for the best and oh, i love the song u referred to in ur note!
Take care and post soon!
Welcome back and keep posting.
You’re back!!! Yey!!!!! Love your story soooooo much!!
welcome back flair! thanx for posting a short but sweet chapter! now keep it going!
ahh, you’re finally back miss flair. next time maybe you’d like to check the format… it does act up from time to time i’m sure. good things are looking up for ya and have missed you and your post.
Hey Flair,
Girl you and your wonderful story have been missed.
I’m grinning like a fool coz your absence has been for all the right reasons. Happy to hear that you have found a special gal to hold you tight and be there through life.
SO back to the story:
Another terrific installment as Sara shares her innermost and unspoken fears and thoughts with Bette.
This is a testament to both women as they face this final journey with love and bravery.
AS for Alice, trust her to lighten the mood and make everyone smile. Alex and Alice are like a proverbial married couple with all the bitching and bickering.
Having Tina admit to Bette that she had heard Bette’s declaration demonstrates the depth of love on both sides.
As always this is beautifully and simply described by your wonderful writing.
Please post soon.
Your Loyal Fan.
‘holy fucking shit’…yes, that were my exact words seein ur story posted when loggin on. And I did say it loud and inside the labs and i think the looks i got for it said enuff…*LOL* I am SO happy u posted again..i cant even put it into words. So Im reading through the chappy and it just feels right..like all the banter and tender moments and all..your very own way of writing..its right there again. *sighs* Feels good! Yea..so whenever u can post and thats fine enough by me. :-)
welcomw back! can’t wait for the next
Yes .. I was so excited to see your post this morning I almost commented first and then read. Thanks for coming back from the land of the dead. I love how you throw the monkey wrench in at the end. Now peace for the ones we love. Thanks
Glad your back missed your story post again soon!!!!
God! welcome back!
im dying while waiting for ur post
thank goodness you are back! i have missed you!
What a wonderful surprise this morning! So glad to see you back and that you are happy..any new show? As for the story…nothing has changed. You are amazing, the writing is amazing and I look forward to many more chapters. OH..who cares about the formatting..you are back!!!!
Yay Flair is back!!!!!!!!!! You have no idea how this story has been missed!!!!!!! I would go back and read all of your past chapters and sigh, then say “how long b4 Flair comes back” I sure hope that life gives u a break, we all need that at one time or another!!!! POST SOON!!!!!!!
yay welcome back flair i missed you. Im glad everything with you is a lot better and i wish you all the happiness in the world.
You´re back!!!! OMG!!!
That´s really great…
What a great day! :) we have this story back and a writer of it sounds really happy person.”TBC… ” is so promising today. CU Flair :)
OMG!!!! Flair’s back! Thank you for returning to this story. You have a true gift sweetie. I am also glad to hear that you have found love. This gives me hope. please post soon.
dear God woman..i almost call the S.W.A.T to go after you..lol..im glad you back and hope you life have peace from now on..later baby and please find time to us again :o))
Glad your back, I missed you and your story.
Welcome back and I’m happy for you and Bridget.
Bette’s cellphone always seems to be the death knell of trouble….she needs to lose it – permanently!
In my first message to you i told you how i hated to feel exposed so i never commented, but i think i will make an exception. So……. whose girlfriend has the best and most creative writing style on this site? Mine does! I’ve always loved your writing racey. Obviously. But what I love even more is being able to picture you writing it and knowing where all the hysterical one-liners come from. Convince myself to sleep with myself and the new iPod, love it baby. Farkin loves it. And I am so privileged and lucky to know that I can make you feel as worthy as you are.
Yours (A.K.A. Rachel’s),
Bridget
P.S. – JBanks just told me that if I were to fight crime my calling card would be to leave blue dasani water bottle caps in my wake as they are strewn all over the apartment. and that’s why she’s my roommate…..
yay you’re back the withdrawl symptoms will stop now – glad things are going well for you – fabulous installment shall be bouncing in my chair waiting for the next.
Welcome back Flair!!! i missed you and your story. so gald to see bridget is makin you happy. hope everything is well with you and have a great day.
Love this story so good to see the gang together. love that B&T will be movin in together . take care thanks
welcome back,Rachel..!!!!!! we truly missed you. really really great that you could post..! pls do write another one soon!
I missed you, this story, I had to reread the first chapters all over…..twice!! The comments are almost as long as the story today, if that doesn’t get the blood pumping to write more…let us know what does…THANK YOU for posting…Cheers to sunny days!!!
I never gave up on you, I just figured you needed more time or maybe your life was getting ahead of you. Either way your back and now my life is complete LOL Thanks for coming back flair!
Welcome back. U were missed. See u haven’t lost your flair for the cliddhanger. Things can only get better. That line is the Kiss of Death (not Sara’s). The peace dies.
SO GLAD YOU’RE BACK! And glad to hear you’re life is getting back in control. I just love this story, though I’m not sure if I’m looking forward to the next chapter or two, it’s going to be a tough day for everyone.
Glade your back hope everything is good. As for the story, I have missed the drama you bring to this fanfic site and I am looking forward to futur chapters.
So good to have you and your beautiful story back …you both have been greatly missed. Congrats on finding love Rachel…it will make all of life’s bumps and bruises much easier to handle
Good to see you back Flair. Alice and Alex is funny and crazy, cute and sweet about Bette and Tina, and well still sad for Sara and I hope that phone call is Sara’s sister calling. Ok post soon please, thanks!