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What is love? – Chapter 23
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The Planet
“I’m going to ask Tina to live with me—full time.”
“She is living with you full time, hot stuff,” commented Alice, not looking up from her salad. “She’s that gorgeous naked blond you wake up next to every morning. Haven’t you noticed her?”
Bette just looked at Alice, expecting more of a reaction. Didn’t Alice realize what a huge step this was for her? Didn’t Alice realize that she had never, never, had asked someone to live with her, even part time? Well, of course, she knew this, Bette thought.
“Al,” she said patiently, “Tina still has a lease on an apartment which she will have to terminate. She still has to move the rest of her belongings to our house. She has to change her mailing address and that’s a huge hassle. It’s a big stepa very big step.”
Alice still had her attention focused on her salad.
“Tina may live with me,” Bette said to an seemingly uninterested Alice, “but I haven’t asked her to move in full time.”
Alice finally stopped eating the salad and looked up at Bette, “Oh, I see.”
“Well, I should hope so,” Bette said, somewhat mollified. She then turned her attention to her salad as Alice looked at her.
“Bette, you’re a piece of work.”
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Kit’s apartment
Kit’s singing job in Los Angeles was now secure enough that she had rented an apartment. It was one of those rentals called a corporate apartment which meant it was furnished. But “corporate” apartment sounded so much better than “furnished” apartment and cost more, Kit thought wryly.
Bette was stopping by for tea before she went back to the gallery and Kit always looked forward to seeing her younger sister. Kit hoped that maybe they could really begin to reconnect. And she hoped that Bette thought the same thing. She had Bette’s favorite tea—and cream, not half and half.
Bette arrived, looked through the apartment, approved it and sat down for tea. She smiled approvingly as she tasted the tea and cream
“I’m going to ask Tina to live with me—full time,” she announced for the second time that day.
“I thought she was living with you full time, baby sis.”
Bette patiently explained the apartment lease, Tina’s belongings, the mail.
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So funny, yet so SWEET!
DAMN!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. IT WAS AWESOME. THE FACT THAT BETTE WAS DECLARING IT TO EVERYONE, IS PRICELESS. I WOULD LOVE TO COME HOME LIKE THAT ON A THURSDAY NIGHT. (THE POOL MAN RETORT IS ABSOLUTELY HILARIOUS, REMINDS ME OF MY SISTER.) YOU ARE TRULY PRICELESS KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.
PEACE
I love this I can see Bette maturing fast. It was funny that all four people said the same thing. To be so smart she is not smart sometimes. You are lucky to have a M.M and M.M. picture signed. Started about 20 yrs ago, Still have my ticket to Nolan Ryans seventh No Hitter Was a B’day present.. Thanks
hahahaha, when I read the last few paragraphes, I have to smile. How cute and obtuse-but-still-cute Bette is!
awww aww awwww, there you go again with the sugar… gosh, bette is just so darn cute, like a little kid. She might be trying to mature in this relationship, but she still is a wee baby right now. Just hope that you will continue this story to their proposal and much much more after that.
great chapter!
The last part was so cute. “CAN IT BE ME?”… &Thanks for not making a drama with the pool guy thing…hahaha
Keep posting!you’re doing a great job!
great chapter!
The last part was so cute. “CAN IT BE ME?”… &Thanks for not making a drama with the pool guy thing…hahaha
Keep posting!you’re doing a great job!
That was sooo cute i loved it poor Bette the commitment was already a done deal but 10 outta 10 for her very sweet efforts…loved it
Sweet. Nothing more to be said.
B is maturing quite nicely, nice chapter…
that was a very sweet chapter…poor bette. post soon
Bette is so funny and cute and sweet and now she is growning, love her. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Not sure if I ever commented, but have always looked for this story. Poor Bette, she is like Dana in this story, the last to know. I liked your joke where Bette wants to be the one to propose. Maybe she should have done it right then and there before the others thought they are already “married”.Great story. Thanks for sharing your time and creativity.
you are so rocking girl. bette is all over herself. still cant see the forest cuz of the trees. so dang cute. really love your story. you write it so well. thanks.
I really love the dynamics in this story, plank headed bette really gets a chuckle…pls continue…
Ok this is priceless stuff Bette can be so clueless I’m tempted to say sometimes but it seems more like all the time. It’s good to see she’s letting some of those barriers down, thanks Pancha
Bette for sure is a piece of work..lol..techgal said everything our baby Bette is growing..lol..cant wait for the propose..im glad Bette have that in mind..great as always post soon thanks :o)
BP is growing! Wonderful chapter!
Thanks!
that could be a dissaster, thankfully bette really loves tina and it was important to her to approach the commitment issue…i’m glad they didn’t fight…of course we can expect problems in their relationship since it’s so new for bette and she growing slowly but if they are honest with each other and wotk together on these issues, they will be fine…thank you
STRIKE 3!..u’re OUT!..haha..so cute..well at least Bette has the idea of proposing in her head!..post soon
this chapter rocked!! my heart skipped a beat with every other paragraph!
awwwww..they are juz toooo Sweet. Well…lifetime is really sumthin. They might not get that in S3. but definitely in FF….and in your story,they will get that lifetime chance? :)
Glad Bette took it well, Think it’s sweet she wants to be the one to propose and Tina agreed. Thanks a bunch
very sweet!
0-4 but at least it worked out in the end.
I love your story. More Please!!!!
Bette is so multilayered …and she’s funny without trying …very cute chapter Pancha, very cute.
Thanks, i laughed so hard and for so long!!!
Sometimes these stories are hard and bring on tears. But today these tears were of joy. Thanks again.