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    What is love? – Chapter 23

    Story written on October 28, 2005 by pancha305.
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    Bette has a proposal for Tina.

    “No, T. But it will become an anniversary,” said Bette confidently as she whisked away the plates and began rooting around in the refrigerator to find the dessert she had purchased.

    “I’m going to the bathroom; be right back,” Tina called as she jumped up and went into the bathroom in the guestroom which was closer than their bedroom.

    Bette heard her and came back to an empty table and frowned. She put the desserts down just as Tina walked out of the guest room. Bette froze but Tina apparently had not seen the roses. Maybe she hadn’t turned on the light in the bedroom; just went straight to the bathroom. Bette relaxed and they began eating cheesecake with fresh blueberries on top.

    “What are those roses doing in the guestroom?” Tina asked as she took another bite of cheesecake.

    “Goddammit!” Bette put down her dessert fork and scowled at the table.

    “Are they for me?” Tina asked tentatively.

    “No, they’re for the guy that’s going to clean the swimming pool tomorrow morning.”

    “Well, Bette, you don’t have to snap at me.”

    “Oh, baby, you’re right. I’m sorry.” Bette stood up. “Stay here; I’ll be right back.”

    Bette walked into the bedroom to retrieve the flowers and the envelope. She took some deep breaths and told herself that she had to calm down so she could make the next few minutes very special for Tina.

    Tina had absolutely no idea what was going on, but she knew she had to be very accepting because Bette had worked hard on this surprise, whatever it was.

    Bette came back in the room carrying the flowers, which were breathtaking, and was also carrying an envelope which Tina hadn’t noticed.

    “For you. I love you,” Bette said as she set the roses on the table and handed the envelope to Tina. Tina started to open it and looked at Bette for confirmation. Bette nodded her head. Tina completed opening the envelope and pulled out..U.S. Post Office change-of-address cards. Tina looked at the cards and wrinkled her brow, partially blinking her eyes. Bette recognized this instantly as the Tina-look when she was unsure how to handle a situation.

    “I want you to live with me.full time,” Bette explained.

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    2. DAMN!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. IT WAS AWESOME. THE FACT THAT BETTE WAS DECLARING IT TO EVERYONE, IS PRICELESS. I WOULD LOVE TO COME HOME LIKE THAT ON A THURSDAY NIGHT. (THE POOL MAN RETORT IS ABSOLUTELY HILARIOUS, REMINDS ME OF MY SISTER.) YOU ARE TRULY PRICELESS KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.

      PEACE

    3. I love this I can see Bette maturing fast. It was funny that all four people said the same thing. To be so smart she is not smart sometimes. You are lucky to have a M.M and M.M. picture signed. Started about 20 yrs ago, Still have my ticket to Nolan Ryans seventh No Hitter Was a B’day present.. Thanks

    5. awww aww awwww, there you go again with the sugar… gosh, bette is just so darn cute, like a little kid. She might be trying to mature in this relationship, but she still is a wee baby right now. Just hope that you will continue this story to their proposal and much much more after that.

    6. great chapter!
      The last part was so cute. “CAN IT BE ME?”… &Thanks for not making a drama with the pool guy thing…hahaha
      Keep posting!you’re doing a great job!

    7. great chapter!
      The last part was so cute. “CAN IT BE ME?”… &Thanks for not making a drama with the pool guy thing…hahaha
      Keep posting!you’re doing a great job!

    13. Not sure if I ever commented, but have always looked for this story. Poor Bette, she is like Dana in this story, the last to know. I liked your joke where Bette wants to be the one to propose. Maybe she should have done it right then and there before the others thought they are already “married”.Great story. Thanks for sharing your time and creativity.

    14. you are so rocking girl. bette is all over herself. still cant see the forest cuz of the trees. so dang cute. really love your story. you write it so well. thanks.

    16. Ok this is priceless stuff Bette can be so clueless I’m tempted to say sometimes but it seems more like all the time. It’s good to see she’s letting some of those barriers down, thanks Pancha

    17. Bette for sure is a piece of work..lol..techgal said everything our baby Bette is growing..lol..cant wait for the propose..im glad Bette have that in mind..great as always post soon thanks :o)

    19. that could be a dissaster, thankfully bette really loves tina and it was important to her to approach the commitment issue…i’m glad they didn’t fight…of course we can expect problems in their relationship since it’s so new for bette and she growing slowly but if they are honest with each other and wotk together on these issues, they will be fine…thank you

    22. awwwww..they are juz toooo Sweet. Well…lifetime is really sumthin. They might not get that in S3. but definitely in FF….and in your story,they will get that lifetime chance? :)

    28. Thanks, i laughed so hard and for so long!!!

      Sometimes these stories are hard and bring on tears. But today these tears were of joy. Thanks again.

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