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Out of Control chapter 12
Tina left the hospital after the talk she had with the doctor. It was encouraging. So Tina, without reservation, left Bette in her care. Her mind was going round and round as she drove absentmindedly through the streets of
Bette is going to have to do some serious soul searching, too. She’s going to have to realize she can’t go back to the way things were. At least not right anyway. Tina held fast to the hope that she will not be able to keeping working like she once did.
When Tina stopped driving she was surprised to see she was parked in front of a househer house. ‘Whoa’, Tina thought she didn’t even remember coming here. This drive had been so ingrained into her she drove here automatically. She had not been here since she had found Bette unconscious. Before that she had not spent more than an hour since the Provocations fiasco.
Tina took a deep breath and got out of the car. It was now or never. She walked up to the front porch noticing the trampled flower bed and knocked over pots. Before unlocking the door she picked up the pot of sunflowers with care. Bette had placed a bouquet of sunflower on her doormat a few weeks ago. Tina was smiling at the thought. She knew these where the very flowers from whence they came. She put it delicately on the porch then went to unlock the door thinking, ‘you hold all the cards.’
The house was unnaturally quiet, too quiet in fact. It was almost unnerving. She walked through the house turning on light as she went. There was no real reason for the things she was doing. She was placing dishes in the sink, picking up dirty clothes, putting the cap back on the toothpaste. She avoided the bedroom for as long as could. So, much as happened in that room and currently not much happy has occurred there. When she walked down the hallway there was a hole in the wall. She touched it thinking, ‘The gurney must have hit this spot.’
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(44 votes, average: 3.73 out of 5)
i’m glad you liked my advise… see just take your time… we are not going anywhere… love this story… love how bette knew… see the readers here are great… they always come through for us… thanks…
thanks amanda – we do try and come thru for you guys especially since you guys come thru for us with your time in giving us great stories. what can i say other than i love how you are writing this. bette knew and didnt freak and itll be hard but good, right? thanks for posting so much.
awwww….that was beautiful! tina had nothing to worry about. i’m guessing bette is trying to change? will tina confront bette about her suspicions on the car accident? thx for the update.
so glad she did not flip !!!!!! Sweet!!!!!!!! post now
nice safe by bette…and the problem is solved, now they just need to gind their way back to each other
you write so much I can’t keep up. I love it! I am so very glad that Bette is ok with the baby and didn’t lose it. your journey for our girls is wonderful…thanks. post in 2 minutes please.
Good chapter. Now this is good and happy to see them like this and can’t wait to see them talk more about the baby. Post soon please, thanks!
So glad that Bette knew about the baby, some baby can really kick. and keep the other person awake. Thanks for giving us such a beautiful chapter. . Hey If any of you live in TEXAS vote tomorrow No for prop 2.Its worded so badly,more will vote yes because they can’t understand it. Vote NO/I know I live in a red state.but cant help it thanks
at least Bette is not totally wrapped up in herself again…goody..! this is getting better and better and better..!!
Whoa! I just finish reading the other chapter 11 and I see your posted again great I just can’t keep up too LOL! Thanks for update so quick I Love it Please continue Thanks!!!
that was simpy great..im gald Bette made it easy to Tina..now the most important is Bettes healthy and soon she will be able to go home and enjoy the pregnancy with Tina..the CAC dosent give a shit to Bette..she deserve better but they will have time to think about it..and maybe Peggy could help..cant wait for more thanks :o)
Glad to be of help Ja lk, you guys write for us everyday and we love and appreciate it so very very much. Love this story and how you have them interacting. The doctor is wonderful with them, wish all were like that. Happy that Bette knew about the baby and is not freaking out about it. If they will just let their love carry them through this, they will be okay. The love that these women share makes me so hopeful for my own life. One day. Post soon please. Thanks.
don’t under estimate Bette Porter, that woman is one of a kind….and sooo cute with her pouts and kiddy voice….awww I bet she sounded like a little angelica…get my drift ;-)