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    Out of Control chapter 12

    She continued to the doorway of the open bedroom, braced herself then went in. She picked up a broken picture frame lying on the floor making a mental note to replace it. She took great care in adverting her eye from the middle of the room. When she finally looked up at the bed her eyes filled with tears. How much more will they have to endure? She walked over to it then started wildly tearing the sheet off the mattresses. She couldn’t stand the sight of the sheets, the comforter, the pillows, none of it. When she was done her chest was heaving and she felt released. She sat on the bed and slowly pulled herself together. When she got her head together she pulled fresh sheet from the closet and made the bed. With the bed made and everything picked up she prepared herself for a much needed shower.

    Refreshed she made her way back to the kitchen searching the cabinets. They were almost bare. What was Bette eating? There were no food cartons to be seen. There was nothing from fast food restaurants or anything of TV dinner variety. She did notice an empty liquor and beer bottles in the trash can. ‘Dear God. Bette what have you been doing to yourself?’

    Tina went into the living room sat on the couch. Her mind was working in overdrive to catch with everything that has happened. She wanted Bette back in her life. She needed her. Everyone had been affected by Bette and Tina. Until now she hadn’t really thought about everyone else. She also realized that with reconciliation with Bette they could all come together again just as they had in the hospital waiting room. Tina flinched looked up and was shocked to see the sun had gone down. She looked at her watch to see three hours had gone by. Right then she decided what she wanted to do. She got up and started her journey back to Bette.

    When Tina returned to the hospital she knew what she had to do. She had to tell Bette about the baby before it was too late. If she kept from her any longer it could cause irreversible damage to process of rebuilding their relationship. First she had to talk to the good doctor.

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    Comments

    1. i’m glad you liked my advise… see just take your time… we are not going anywhere… love this story… love how bette knew… see the readers here are great… they always come through for us… thanks…

    2. thanks amanda – we do try and come thru for you guys especially since you guys come thru for us with your time in giving us great stories. what can i say other than i love how you are writing this. bette knew and didnt freak and itll be hard but good, right? thanks for posting so much.

    3. awwww….that was beautiful! tina had nothing to worry about. i’m guessing bette is trying to change? will tina confront bette about her suspicions on the car accident? thx for the update.

    4. you write so much I can’t keep up. I love it! I am so very glad that Bette is ok with the baby and didn’t lose it. your journey for our girls is wonderful…thanks. post in 2 minutes please.

    5. So glad that Bette knew about the baby, some baby can really kick. and keep the other person awake. Thanks for giving us such a beautiful chapter. . Hey If any of you live in TEXAS vote tomorrow No for prop 2.Its worded so badly,more will vote yes because they can’t understand it. Vote NO/I know I live in a red state.but cant help it thanks

    6. Whoa! I just finish reading the other chapter 11 and I see your posted again great I just can’t keep up too LOL! Thanks for update so quick I Love it Please continue Thanks!!!

    7. that was simpy great..im gald Bette made it easy to Tina..now the most important is Bettes healthy and soon she will be able to go home and enjoy the pregnancy with Tina..the CAC dosent give a shit to Bette..she deserve better but they will have time to think about it..and maybe Peggy could help..cant wait for more thanks :o)

    8. Glad to be of help Ja lk, you guys write for us everyday and we love and appreciate it so very very much. Love this story and how you have them interacting. The doctor is wonderful with them, wish all were like that. Happy that Bette knew about the baby and is not freaking out about it. If they will just let their love carry them through this, they will be okay. The love that these women share makes me so hopeful for my own life. One day. Post soon please. Thanks.

    9. don’t under estimate Bette Porter, that woman is one of a kind….and sooo cute with her pouts and kiddy voice….awww I bet she sounded like a little angelica…get my drift ;-)

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