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Masked Feelings CH# 8
A broken-hearted Alice was back home. Slamming the door shut behind her, ” Damn it, Dana!!!”
She felt like she could actually kill someone, Lara or Dana, at this point it was a toss up. Alice needed to escape, even if it were for just a few short hours. So, she headed in to the bathroom and took a sleeping pill. Walking through the hallway, she looked at one of the pictures of Dana. She was posing with her tennis racket, a shot that was featured in one of those tennis magazine. She held the picture in her hands and sent it flying down the hall. Hitting the end table and shattering into a million little pieces.
Alice dragged her body to her room, where she crawled under the covers and pulled the blankets over her head. No dreams tonight, only nightmares. Two figures lurking in the dark, but couldn’t see their faces. They were laughing sadistically…..
The next morning
Lara propped up on one elbow, watched Dana as she slept. God, Dana I want you so bad…. You’re so ***** beautiful. Soon…We’ll be together. I’ll make you forget about her, I promise…..
She could watch her sleep for the rest of her life, but it was time for Dana to wake up and face the music. Yes, she would be devastated but Lara would be there to comfort her.
Lara snuggles up to Dana, leaving a trail of kisses from her shoulder up to her neck.
Dana – Mmmm…..Don’t stop.
Lara – I wasn’t planning to.
Dana waking up suddening, expecting to hear Alice’s voice. Oh, *****…Lara?!!!!
Dana – Whoa, Stop….. Stop.
Lara – I thought you liked that. You didn’t want me to stop last night.
Dana – What exactly did I do last night?
Lara – You don’t remember? I tried to tell you that we shouldn’t sleep together cause I thought you had too much to drink. I couldn’t resist you. You were so persuasive, Dana. Please don’t be upset…
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Alice couldn’t help but lie in bed and think about the events that unfolded before her. So many questions that she needed answered. Nothing made sense to her, nothing at all.
Knock, Knock, Knock
Alice looked through the peep hole, it was Gina. She forgot she was coming over this morning. Not wanting to see anyone, she opened the door anyway.
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(57 votes, average: 4.04 out of 5)
Don’t trust Lara, Dana! Run in the other direction! LOL.I really loved Dana’s note to Alice. It was so sweet and heartfelt. You’re doing a great job with this story. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Great update! I love how Lara’s really manipulative- it’s easier to dislike her then…I hope Alice figures what Lara and Gina have been up. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
You’ve created a very cruel Lara, which makes it easier to root for Danish. I loved how you said ‘locked away in her hope chest.’ Please post soon, but don’t torture us too much =)
oh man, Dana Get the Hell outta there!!!!, Lara’s now a crazy b**** in my book. Alice seems to have a sixth sence about ppl, hope nuthin too crazy happens heh, thanks for the post, lookin forward to your next!! oh and happy holiday!
this just gets better and better please post soon so I can see what happens next love it
Great update. Man, it’s interesting to see this side of Lara, she’s so good at manipulating poor Danish. I hope it works out. The note was such a sweet touch, nice job. Can’t wait for more!
I just the things that stands in the way of Danish, makes the eventual hookup more than good. enjoying this, Happy Thanksgiving and looking forward to the ‘major’ event soon.
haha this is great… i love that lara is evil… mwa haha. keep writing! go alice!
locked away in her hope chest = a continued hope for danish’s love to prevail… ahhh Thankfully Alice is smart enough to realize that something isn’t quite rightI can’t wait to see what evil Lara has in store for Alice.
of course i don’t like the drama brteyes! lara’s really evil and delusional if she thinks that she can stand in the way of true love. danish belong together. it’ll be weird any other way. can’t wait for the next chapter. ^ – ^
loved the note dana left for alice. it was so sweet. it looks like it was enough to push alice in the right direction. Happy Thanksgiving!