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Masked Feelings CH# 8
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Lara – Take your time…. Take that first step and it will get a little easier. Please say something, Dana.
Dana – Ok, but this is going to take awhile.
Lara – I’m not going anywhere, Dane. I’m here for the long haul.
Dana – Well, it all started shortly after we broke up. I’d been spending a lot more time with Alice and I started developing these feeling for her. I’m in love with Alice, Lara…..
She went on to tell her about the Halloween party…. the cabin incident…. and every little thing after. Lara waited patiently, hanging on Dana’s every word. Trying her best not to say anything and to hide her feelings about most of the things she heard. Waiting for her to finish her story, then figuring out what she should say next.
Lara – Wow, that wsa some story. No wonder you are such a mess. I’m so sorry you’re going through this. You won’t have to go through this alone, Dana. I’ll help you figure it out.
Dana – Thank you, Lara. I do feel better talking to you.
Lara- I knew you would. I’m just glad you trust me.
Dana – I do trust you, with my life.
Lara – Hey, lets talk about this tomorrow. You look exhausted and could use the sleep.
Dana – That did take a lot out of me.
Lara – I know it did. Now, scoot off to bed. I’ll see you in the morning.
Dana gave Lara the biggest hug she could manage and went off to her bedroom. Lara on the other hand, had some thinking to do before she turned in. Lara had no idea what she was going to tell Dana. She was still too angry to think clearly. I should have known that red mark on Dana’s face was caused by you. Slapping her was your biggest mistake cause now the gloves come off. You get to see my true darkside. You have no idea what I’m capable of, Alice but you’ll find out soon. You will pay, Alice. Count on it!
Lara knew what she had to do. Alice would never be the same, NEVER!
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Alice promised to call Gina when she finished, but right now she just needed the peace and quiet. Ok, maybe not peace. She saw her bag by the door where she dropped it. Alice needed to get a couple things out of her bag. Tomorrow she would unpack the rest. She unzipped the bag and started pulling things out. Toward the top, there was an envelope with her name neatly written on the front. Dana’s handwriting. Alice stared at the envelope in her hand, contemplating on whether to open it. Curiousity won out. She pulled the card out and read it, taking in every word.
Dear Alice,
I tried to think of a gift that would really convey what I feel for you. Alice, you are the only woman that I dream about. Like a star, you’re always out of my reach. But knowing that your there, I never quit wishing you were mine. In honor of the love I feel for you, Dear Alice, I have had a star registered in your name. Now when I look at the stars, I’ll always see you. I’ll wish upon that star and hope that someday you will love me at least half as much as I love you. You are my shining star and will be forever.
Love Always, Dana
And there goes Dana, tugging at Alice’s heart again. She was more confused then she ever was before. What is going on with you, Dana? These romantic gestures are so sweet and appear to be genuine. You profess your love for me and yet I catch you in bed with Lara. Something is off here, but I can’t put my finger on it.
Alice would put her card with the earrings, locked away in her hope chest.
TBC
I will try to write more over the holiday but might not have time. This next chapter is a going to be a big one, as in something major will happen. It will definitely work my brain, lol. Keep looking for it. Thanks for reading. Comments are always welcomed and appreciated.
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Don’t trust Lara, Dana! Run in the other direction! LOL.I really loved Dana’s note to Alice. It was so sweet and heartfelt. You’re doing a great job with this story. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Great update! I love how Lara’s really manipulative- it’s easier to dislike her then…I hope Alice figures what Lara and Gina have been up. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
You’ve created a very cruel Lara, which makes it easier to root for Danish. I loved how you said ‘locked away in her hope chest.’ Please post soon, but don’t torture us too much =)
oh man, Dana Get the Hell outta there!!!!, Lara’s now a crazy b**** in my book. Alice seems to have a sixth sence about ppl, hope nuthin too crazy happens heh, thanks for the post, lookin forward to your next!! oh and happy holiday!
this just gets better and better please post soon so I can see what happens next love it
Great update. Man, it’s interesting to see this side of Lara, she’s so good at manipulating poor Danish. I hope it works out. The note was such a sweet touch, nice job. Can’t wait for more!
I just the things that stands in the way of Danish, makes the eventual hookup more than good. enjoying this, Happy Thanksgiving and looking forward to the ‘major’ event soon.
haha this is great… i love that lara is evil… mwa haha. keep writing! go alice!
locked away in her hope chest = a continued hope for danish’s love to prevail… ahhh Thankfully Alice is smart enough to realize that something isn’t quite rightI can’t wait to see what evil Lara has in store for Alice.
of course i don’t like the drama brteyes! lara’s really evil and delusional if she thinks that she can stand in the way of true love. danish belong together. it’ll be weird any other way. can’t wait for the next chapter. ^ – ^
loved the note dana left for alice. it was so sweet. it looks like it was enough to push alice in the right direction. Happy Thanksgiving!