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Scarred Souls…Part 1
Story written on November 30, 2005 by PreciousThings.
Shane climbs in the drivers seat with Carmen beside her and Jenny sitting behind her.
Carmen: Wow, what a day! Angelica’s such a beautiful baby and it was nice to see Bette so happy. She was just beaming!
They all smiled at the thought.
Jenny: yea
Shane starts the car and pulls off.
Carmen oblivious to what’s been going on with Jenny and what happened in the bathroom the night before…”did you have a good time last night Jenny?”
Jenny smiles a kind of forced smile which Shane pick up on while glances back at her in the rearview mirror “yea, the concert was great”
Shane jumps in and tried to turn the attention off of Jenny as she feels that’s Jenny’s a little uncomfortable “I think Bette and Tina are going to be amazing parents. Don’t you?” she smiles a little at Carmen.
Shane notices Jenny’s tension lessen when Carmen turns back to the front.
Carmen: “oh yea, they’re gonna be great!” she notices the eerie silence and that Shane seems to be watching Jenny in the mirror. She doesn’t know what’s going on but doesn’t think to much of it either.
Shane: so, where to? I mean, is anyone hungry or anything?
Jenny: nah, I’m fine.
After a moment Carmen breaks the silence..”I’m actually pretty tired, do you think you could drop me off at home?”
Shane: yea, of course.
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Carmen get out of the car and smiles brightly at Shane and then to Jenny. “Thanks for the lift, I’ll drop by this afternoon and maybe we could go visit Bette, Tina and the baby”
Jenny smiles a soft, sweet smile “yea, we should”
Jenny climbs into the passenger seat beside Shane and Carmen closes the door for her. “bye guys”
Shane and Jenny: “bye”
Shane and Jenny ride the rest of the way home in silence.
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Shane walks into the house behind Jenny and drops her keys on the coffee table. Back in the house Shane breaks the quiet tension between Jenny and everything else. She gently takes Jenny’s hand in hers and speaks softly “come on Jen lets go look after those cuts.”
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wow…poor Jenny …great start please continue!!!
hey kool start its pretty good for your first! i like the way you describe jenny and shane cant wait to see wat happens next! plz update soon!!!
Great start… pelase continue….. :)
I loved it and you keep on keepin’ on. I want to see how the relationship between Shane and Jenny blossoms and I also want to see how you tie Carmen into the story. So please continue, you got my vote. LYLAS ;)
Jenny/Shane rocks always. Keep writting