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Scarred Souls…Part 1
Story written on November 30, 2005 by PreciousThings.
Jenny tries to blow it off and protest, “it’s ok. they’re not that bad, they’ll be fine.”
Shane: “they’re pretty deep Jenny, we should at least check and make sure they’re clean so they don’t get infected.”
Jenny bites on her lip a bit then nods unsurely and lets Shane lead her to the bathroom.
Shane grabs some antiseptic from the medicine cabinet and a clean cloth then turns to Jenny who’s trying to gently pull down her jeans. She bites down on her lip more as the denim pulls her skin in a few places where it had stuck to the fresh cuts then she sits nervously on the side of the tub. She looks up at Shane with a quietly and pained look on her face coupled with a certain childlike innocence. Her eyes begin to tearup as Shane kneels in front of her. Shane looks up at Jenny with concern and her eyes fall soft and gentle when she sees the hurt in Jenny’s eyes.
Shane: “lets get these cleaned up and we’ll go have a beer or some of that tea you like or something ok?”
Jenny nods and bites on her lip some trying to keep her emotions contained as Shane cleans the cuts.
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They walk into the living room.
Shane: “sit down and I’ll grab us something to drink from the kitchen. what would you like?
Jenny: “umm I’ll have whatever you’re having”
Shane: “okay, I’ll be right back”
Jenny sits on the floor in front of the sofa and leans against it. Shane returns with a six pack of Dos Equis ands one to Jenny and sits on the floor leaning against a chair. She takes a swig of her beer and silently watches Jenny take a sip of hers and bite at her lips as she looks down.
Shane softens again: “Jen, do you know what happened?”
Jenny looks up puzzled: “huh?”
Shane: “the thing we talked about the other night outside the club…did you remember something? Is that what triggered you last night?”
Jenny takes a long slow sip of her beer before answering in almost a whisper, “yea, I guess so.”
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wow…poor Jenny …great start please continue!!!
hey kool start its pretty good for your first! i like the way you describe jenny and shane cant wait to see wat happens next! plz update soon!!!
Great start… pelase continue….. :)
I loved it and you keep on keepin’ on. I want to see how the relationship between Shane and Jenny blossoms and I also want to see how you tie Carmen into the story. So please continue, you got my vote. LYLAS ;)
Jenny/Shane rocks always. Keep writting