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Crumbling Down
1) Honey you’re home
Shane saunters around the kitchen shifting things around as Bette comes in. Shane acknowledges her “Hey, Bette!!”
“You’re looking quite chirpy today. Cleaning up the house. I see you done some grocery shopping. Is Carmen coming over?” says Bette teasingly. Shane blushes while carefully inspecting the laces of her all-star. “No, the house needed cleaning that’s all”. Bette shrugs “Well I just swung around to see if you wanted to come to the planet with us tonight?”
“I can’t. Jenny called she’s coming home today.” Shane says smiling as she walks over to the oven to check something inside. “I figure I’d throw her a welcome home dinner you know” she completes. Bette squirts her eyes at Shane and asks “What’s the deal between you and Jenny?” Shane searches the cabinets without focus “Uhhn What do you mean?” she answers. Bette continues looking at her inquiringly, as trying to figure out her thoughts.
Shane’s cell phone rings cutting the silence. “Aren’t you going to answer that” asks Bette. Shane stares at her, then at the screen pulsing Carmen’s name for a while and she says “its not important’. Bette lifts an eyebrow at her friend’s behavior but nods “OK if you guys want, you should meet us later.” Shane nods “We’ll see. Bye.” Bette says “later” as she lets herself out.
Shane grew restless as the sky turned dark she paced across the small living room and checked the clock frequently. Every two minutes she checked the window but no one was coming. It had been more than two months since she last saw her since that dreadful day Jenny went to rehab, she felt so alone like there was a piece missing. But that piece was coming home hopefully soon ’cause Shane was tired of waiting.
The low rumbling of an engine brings her to stand she looks out the window just as a truck is pulling up to the drive way. Shane smiles broadly and rushes to the door flinging it open just in time to see Jenny getting out of the truck. Jenny smiles running to greet her roommate, throwing her arms around Shane, who pulls her into a tight hug. And somehow in that moment Shane knew everything would be all right, she wouldn’t have to worry anymore ’cause Jenny was all right.
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(21 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
Although I really can’t get over the fact that Shane and Carmen belong together, I do like this fic tho. It’s interesting and I’m anxious to see where this is going. Good work!
I don´t know…..this story is so damn negative…don´t tkae it hard but I don´t really like it.
yeah, I know. It supose to be negative tough. It’s not meant for everyone to like. Thanks for leaving you opinion I appreciate it a lot.
This story was amazing. It was kind of negative but i loved it anyway. I really hope you continue this cause theres not many shane/jenny fics and this one was so good. I wanna know what happens to shane. Anyways good luck!!!
I’m sorry, don’t take it personal, but I can’t get with the whole Shane wanting to be with Jenny. I just think that Shane and Carmen belong together. . . . .
*I meant tight hugs,not tide… *blushes*
Well I guess I’ll make the difference;I liked it!I don’t know if Shane & Jenny will ever be an item,sleep together or something,but all the other things already exist;the broad smiles,the intense way the look each other,the tide hugs,the way they understand each other by just looking each other.And of course the fact that Shane would always be there for her.She is so relaxed,easy-going & she’s opening up because of Jenny,not Carmen.Carmen just happens to be the girl Shane’s with for now,happens to be around while Shane’s opening up.Carmen is just along for the ride,not driving,Jenny is.TaKe CaRe!