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Masked Feelings CH #9
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Alice was in the shower when the phone rang. The machine picked up the call.
“Hey, it’s me. What happened? You promised to call me when you got done. Call me back when you get this, I’m at home.”
When Alice stepped out, the phone rang again. Alice hurriedly put on a robe and answered it.
Alice – Hello?
Tina – Hi, Alice. I thought I would call and see how you’re doing.
Alice – Probably a good thing you did cause I’m about to go out of my mind.
Tina – Is it Dana again? When I walked out on the patio Friday, things with you and Dana seemed a little intense. Like I interrupted something.
Alice – Oh, its definitely about Dana. You wouldn’t happen to be free for a little while, would you?
Tina – If you need to talk, I’ll make the time. How about if I come over there, in say, an hour.
Alice – That sounds great.
Tina – It’s a plan then. I’ll see you later. Bye.
Alice – Bye.
Alice saw the new message and listened to it. She decided that she better call her back.
Gina – Hello.
Alice – Hi, I am so sorry that I never called back. It took me long than I thought.
Gina – Well you still could have called.
Alice – I could barely keep my eyes open. I ended up crashing on the couch.
Gina – I really wanted to see you.
Alice – I know, I’m sorry.
Gina – Well, I guess I can’t be mad. You must have worked like a dog to get all that work done. So…. are you doing anything this morning?
Alice – Tina is coming over in a little bit.
Gina – Well, I guess if your busy I won’t see you til I get back.
Alice – Where are you going?
Gina – I have an assignment in Houston. I’ll be gone for a couple days. So I guess you’ll have to do without me til I get back.
Alice – Sorry, if I had known I would have called you last night.
Gina – I only found out this morning that I had to go. So don’t worry about it. Well, I better go pack. I’ll call you later.
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OMG!!!! What the hell?!? Jesus Lara is just freakin sick. I mean jeez if I was Alice, I would have kick her ass if she had lets me go. Its a real good story though please keep writing. I wanna find out what happens to Alice and if Dana finds out.
woah! brteyes, babe, you are unbelievable! you’re right i am a little upset with you, but i know you’ll make things better. what goes on in your head? that was some sick s**t you had lara put alice through. alice has to fight like hell to get to dana, and hopefully dana will be able to meet her halfway. thx for the update.
I must hand it to you, I certainly did not see that coming. Dana’s gonna kill Lara isn’t she? ;)
Pao, lol. In a more serious issue, the rape between two women is rarely writing, maybe because is difficult, nothing pleasant and not politically correct. Well I hope that Dana know who Lara is, and give her what she deserves.
Wow I did not see the psycho, blood-licking, rapist Lara coming…great story though. And can’t wait to see Alice expose Lara to Dana…that should be fun! Update soon!
Hmm..this was a tad creepy, but I liked it. I want to see where this is gonna go. Nice Job. Can’t wait to Dana finds out….
holding my comments, but hoping you’ll be able to update soon – you do know you’re killing me…
oh no poor alice I just hope that dana finds out soon
woah! this Lara is so sick, blood licking bloody sick. ur wtiting’s good. I’m gonna have to keep reading, sorry I found this fic late. But, still, just in case u were to check, I want to say that ur awesome:)