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Masked Feelings CH #9
Each point that Lara made, hit Dana like a ton of bricks. She knew she had made a lot of mistakes, but still felt like Alice was coming around, that was until she slept with Lara.
Dana – I know I made mistakes, But I really feel like Alice’s feelings for me are there. She’s just not ready to admit to it yet.
Lara – That may be right, but I doubt she will admit anything, given you and I slept together. Take in to consideration, the slap and her last words to you. Do you really think she’ll be willing to talk to you?
Dana – I do need to try to talk to her. I can’t imagine not having her in my life, at least in some capacity.
Lara – I’m not saying don’t talk to her but she’ll need time. Isn’t she seeing someone right now?
Dana – Yeah, her name’s Gina. I don’t like her and I sure don’t trust her. She’s not right for Alice.
Lara – Unfortunately that isn’t your decision. If Alice was even considering more with you, why is she still hot and heavy with Gina? They do seem pretty happy together from what I’ve seen.
Everytime Lara came across with a new point of view, it took the wind out of Dana’s sails. She was feeling defeated and couldn’t find her feet. Lara kept yanking the rug out from under her.
Dana – I need time to think.
Lara – I understand. Dana, I know the things I said seemed rather harsh, but it’s only because I want you to see the truth. You’ll only get hurt if you pursue Alice.
Dana said nothing. Lara leaned over and hugged her.
Lara – I better get ready for work. Don’t you leave tomorrow?
Dana – Yeah, I have a lot to do, too.
Lara – Well, how about if I make a special dinner tonight to send you off.
Dana – Sounds fine.
Lara – Are you going to be ok? I was afraid all this talk would bring you down.
Dana – I just need to take it all in and think about what I want to do.
Lara – Whatever you decide to do, I know you’ll make the right decision.
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(67 votes, average: 4.01 out of 5)
OMG!!!! What the hell?!? Jesus Lara is just freakin sick. I mean jeez if I was Alice, I would have kick her ass if she had lets me go. Its a real good story though please keep writing. I wanna find out what happens to Alice and if Dana finds out.
woah! brteyes, babe, you are unbelievable! you’re right i am a little upset with you, but i know you’ll make things better. what goes on in your head? that was some sick s**t you had lara put alice through. alice has to fight like hell to get to dana, and hopefully dana will be able to meet her halfway. thx for the update.
I must hand it to you, I certainly did not see that coming. Dana’s gonna kill Lara isn’t she? ;)
Pao, lol. In a more serious issue, the rape between two women is rarely writing, maybe because is difficult, nothing pleasant and not politically correct. Well I hope that Dana know who Lara is, and give her what she deserves.
Wow I did not see the psycho, blood-licking, rapist Lara coming…great story though. And can’t wait to see Alice expose Lara to Dana…that should be fun! Update soon!
Hmm..this was a tad creepy, but I liked it. I want to see where this is gonna go. Nice Job. Can’t wait to Dana finds out….
holding my comments, but hoping you’ll be able to update soon – you do know you’re killing me…
oh no poor alice I just hope that dana finds out soon
woah! this Lara is so sick, blood licking bloody sick. ur wtiting’s good. I’m gonna have to keep reading, sorry I found this fic late. But, still, just in case u were to check, I want to say that ur awesome:)