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The Promise
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Dash sat in the back seat of the Mini with her arms wrapped around her knees and her chin resting on top. She was scrunched up in the car as Alice pulled into Shane’s driveway. Dash looked up to see Shane’s menacing glare in the vanity mirror as she messed with her nose. Dash could see that her anger was really covering for disappointment but there was no way she would tell Shane she got into a fight over her.
<b>Dash:</b> Drop it already…I said sorry.
Alice looked over just in time to see Shane get out and slam the door shut. She limped into the house and slammed the front door.
<b>Alice:</b> Okay…what the *****?
<b>Dash:</b> Van thinks Kelly and I were fighting over something else…so she’s pissed cause I said we just were arguing.
<b>Alice:</b> So just tell her what you were fighting about Shane’s like the most understanding and…
<b>Dash:</b> Cause…he was talking ***** about Shane.
<b>Alice:</b> Ouch! So if you tell her your a rat AND she’ll be pissed at what he said.
<b>Dash:</b> Exactly!
<b>Alice:</b> I think you can tell her, she’d suprise you how well she can take things.
<b>Dash:</b> Really? You think she could take that all the kids call her Sinister Shane behind her back and think Father Joe and Van disowned her cause she and van are brother and sister and she killed their parents years ago who happen to be Father Joe’s Brother and sister-in-law? Or that they all call her a psycho ***** and homo behind her back…Its a stupid and far fetched tale, and I know she wouldn’t give a *****, but then she’d like know and always notice the whispers.
<b>Alice:</b> Yeah you’re on your own with that one buddy.
Alice climbed out the clown car and held the seat forward for Dash. They went inside to see Shane in the kitchen tossing food on the kitchen table, which was piled high with nearly everything from the fridge. Dash and Alice looked at each other and at the same time mouthed <i>”Can Shane cook?”</i>
The three women worked in silence preparing their unknown meal. Alice sat at the table doing a pathetic job in the onion chopping department. Dash sat across from her and Alice looked up with tears running down her cheeks. She watched as Dash expertly sliced through the stack of mushrooms. Alice looked around the table at the thin slices green onions, carrots and other vegetables she didn’t even know the name of.
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wow! christmas came early 4 postings in one day. great to see you back missed this story!!
wow awesome as always :) Really great to have you back!.
yeaaa!!! you’re back. it’s nice to have some of the creative bunch back. good for you
welcome back! i’ve missed this story!
WOOOHOOOHOOO!!! You’re back! I didn´t trust my eyes when i got here, thought i’m dreaming, but nooo this is real. Thank you soooo much for the new chapters. Read them twice and i get in the same mood as half a year ago when i start reading the story. It´s unbelievable how you keep up the spirit of The Promise. *kneels down and bows*
Holy moly! I nearly jumped outta my chair when I saw you posted. I’ve missed this story and Dash ,lol.love the new chapters, thank you.
wow so many updates great having you back
So fun to have for new chap to enjoy :) I’m so happy your back. Now I can go and sleep well. Hope my next fix will be sooner ~wink~
Good chapter. Alice is so funny she scare of a dog. Ok post soon please, thanks!