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    A Night in the D — Chapter 16

    Story written on December 17, 2005 by luvrgirl.
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    Now stop.

    As it turned out, Bette would be reminded that submission was not her forte.

     

    And Tina would chide herself for all thoughts of forever.

     

    In fact, Tina would wonder whether she’d actually lost her mind for a moment, in that chair, in her first flush of control. Because the woman was just so incredibly beautiful? Was that it?

     

    While Bette would speculate to Alice that being fucked with your clothes on in an armless chair in a cheap hotel was disproportionately hotter than she’d expected, or bothered experiencing, and was thus a strange mind blower. Ecstasy, your own jeans inside of you. Go figure.

     

    But don’t make a thing of it.

     

    Both women would back out of later what they were diving headlong into now. It was inevitable. When and how and who first would be an issue. Who next. And why. Someone said but slow down, but how could they? When everything was racing to a screaming halt anyway.

     

    And why should they? When it wouldn’t matter, not in the end. Unless regret was richer than loss, which it wasn’t. Which they both knew. Because the airport would open, and someone would check out.

    And she would check out.

     

    And Tina would go back to work, in the same mediocre hotel below Bette’s usual standards, caressing and cursing the memory, with Bette thinking of her longingly and scoffing at the entire episode. Sometimes in the same moment.

     

    Everything would go back to normal because a great ***** doesn’t change lives, even if it felt like it could, to both of them. It was the charge between them, this shared knowledge. This grinding and reaching and clawing and dying for something larger and more lasting than a moment could ever be. They were both smart, and savvy, and relished intensity, and knew it when it was bearing down on them. Knew to get out of the way or be rolled up in it, which they both were.

     

    But it didn’t mean it wasn’t going to end. It didn’t mean they could go on ***** like, yeah, no tomorrow. When there would be one.

     

    As Bette hung supported by Tina’s gaze, she saw in her eyes that it was all going to crash down around them. But right now she hadn’t even seen the chick’s body, and she wasn’t about to think her way into a premature grave.

    And Tina knew. She knew. As she slipped her hand from Bette’s center, reaching to pull her skirt past her thighs, her other hand tightened in Bette’s hair, drawing her closer, close enough to whisper.

     

    “I don’t care if you hurt me.”

     

    The words came out quickly, and though Bette tried to pull back, to face their source, Tina held her tighter, and spoke even more softly against her cheek. “I know you’ll leave. I know it will hurt. I know we won’t know what the ***** we’ve done after we do this.” She choked on the last word.

     

    “But don’t kill it, Bette, don’t.” She paused in her plea. “You don’t have to.”

     

    Bette returned silence for the longest time. Long enough that Tina finally began to move away, until she felt Bette reach for her hand and slide it once again between her legs. Her voice was low and firm, the certainty disarming

     

    “Harder,” she said.

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    4. They could go roll in the snow and cool off.but they will never forget this. Bette is going to take Tina to LA and woo her in a different way. To treat her like the lady she is. and Tina will love her forever thanks

    5. It’s so bittersweet. Both are searching for a way to savage and rescue this encounter before it self-destructs. They both know it is more than either expected and it scares them, but they are willing to save it…save each other. Please continue.

    6. I haven’t commented yet, but I’ve read this story since the beginning and I find myself checking in just to see if you’ve posted. I really hope you continue with it even beyond this bittersweet hotel scene. It’s funny, but as I was reading this chapter I was listening to “we belong” by Pat Benetar and it just seemed so fitting for the circumstances. I’m a huge tibette shipper so here’s to BnT…may their journey continue as one.

    9. I am sure u won’t just end this great story without these 2 exploring some type of relationship, right? I mean I hope u go further than just a couple more chapters. which means they eventually get out of the hotel room to say….LA!!!!!! maybe?….come on!!!

    10. Their hesitation suggests it’s already too late, it’s not just a fuck. Which is cool. And if Detroit is good enough for the next Real World, Bette Porter could easily dive into the hot underground art community Detroit harbors.

    15. I do believe this fuck will change both of their lives…Tina to L.A. and about 100 more chapters from you Luvr. I just caught up and I can’t get enough. thanks

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