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A Night in the D — Chapter 19
“You don’t have to,” Bette said, standing, her eyes pleading, though Tina’s back was turned to her. “C’mon, please, you don’t. I don’t want you to leave. It’s too awful.”
“It’s too awful not to leave,” Tina responded flatly, continuing to look around for her clothes.
Bette ached at the sight. Tina’s vulnerability, coupled with her anger, was a powerful force in the room. Compelling and repelling. Leaving Bette undecided whether to insist further or give in. “I hung them in the closet,” she said quietly, still undecided.
Tina turned that way, tripping on one of her shoes. She groaned and grabbed it from the floor, cocking her arm to throw it before her arm was caught, by Bette, who was behind her, pressing against her back, lowering her arm and slipping her hand into Tina’s.
The shoe dropped.
Tina sighed in frustration. “Don’t do that,” she said. Bette’s breath at her throat was choking her.
“Don’t do what?” Bette asked softly. The soft voice was back.
“Don’t be nice to me.”
Encouraged by the lack of resistance, Bette laid a gentle kiss against Tina’s neck, before lowering her chin to Tina’s shoulder, resting it there. “I want to be nice to you,” she said.
“I don’t want you to.” Tina almost quivered at the feel of Bette’s body against her. “It makes it too hard to leave.”
“But I don’t want you to leave.” Angst crept into Bette’s voice. She released Tina’s hand and suddenly slid her own hand lower, to Tina’s panties, touching her there lightly before extending one finger and dragging it, slowly, against the fabric.
Tina jerked, but Bette held her still. “Please,” she said. “Let me.”
Tina shook her head. “I can’t.”
“You can,” Bette offered back. Her voice was gentle but newly firm, bordering on ***** but not crossing over. “You want me to,” she whispered again, as the same hand slid inside Tina’s panties and dipped against her.
Tina winced with arousal. “It doesn’t matter what I want,” she breathed out.
“It’s all that matters,” Bette said, closing her eyes at the wetness against her finger, wanting to bury it there, but still brushing carefully against Tina, whose head had now fallen back onto Bette’s shoulder, her neck exposed. Bette turned, her lips enveloping a spot of skin, and sucked hard, sliding her finger still lower. Deeper.
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(59 votes, average: 3.32 out of 5)
great chapter:but youre killing us here! let it happen all the way,so bette&tina can go back to l.a. youre a teaserlol
they already have a relationship where they understand each other, this is great…when is tina moving to LA? love this
Great chapter. Looking forward to more.
OH MY GOD WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO US!!!lol this is just plain teaseing and good teaseing at that but your killing me,its sexy its erotic and strangly i cant get enough of it…lol so keep it coming…so to speak!!
This is an awesome story. I love how Tina is already in love with Bette.
Uggh lesbians can be so intense. leave it to two women to turn a one night stand into a full blown relationship. lol
Okay, they already have the bantering down, and the knowledge that they can’t resist each other. So when do we become a couple?
B got this one!! Damn you are killing me! I am so addicted I had to get home, turn on the computer, see if you posted, read, and then get my daughter and I to a basketball game. Your writing is amazing and I maybe if I’m lucky there will be another post when I get home tonight. Thanks!
that is torture…..foreplay on any level…and then off to sleep. That is something I’ll never experience,…my motto…”don’t start somethin u can’t finish!!!! My question to you……y oh y didn’t u finish what u started????!!!!! POST SOON!!!!!! U were away WAYYYYYYY TOOOOOOO LONG!!!!!!!
yummy wow! those are my feelings right now toward your story! yummy & wow :9
yeah, I totally agree with nacy, let it happen please.
GREAT JOB…THANKS
Love this post! Bette was soooo sweet!! with all the drama in the real show, and the spoilers ugh!(I am getting sick!) I have forgotten how cute these two can be when they are loving with each other. “But I want to be nice to you”… OMG! how cute is that!! I think you should talk to Ilene Chaiken… she needs your insights on how Bette should act! Love each chapter you post…
OMFG! This is so good! You’re writing is impeccable. More…please!
Oh my god…it’s so…I’m just…why can’t….AUGH! I friggin love this story and every agonizing moment.
Wel, I’ve decided I’m NEVER staying overnight in Detroit if it means forming a sensual and loving yet somewhat disturbed bond with a random hotel employee. I still love this story though, even in its darker moments.
I am so into this story! If there was such a thing as *too good*…this would be it. Absolutely marvelous!
OMG!!! I love your story. U like to tease huh? well, keep doing it, because this is one of the best stories on this site. and please if you should decide to take some time off, PLEASE< PLEASE, PLEASE!!!!wrap up the story first, don't just leave us hanging! thank you for sharing your talent.
Amazing writing. Amazing storytelling.
your king me here make the post longer
I just read the last 7 chapters. I’m so hooked on this. Please post soon. I love the direction these 2 are going. :p
luvr…I just had to read the chapter again because there was not a new chapter. ; ) I am being very selfish..I know.
This is good!
This is just an awesome story. Thanks!