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A Night in the D — Chapter 19
Tina groaned.
“You like that,” Bette whispered.
“I like you,” Tina said, moving her hips gently forward, her eyes closing, all thoughts of her undress abandoned.
“I like you too,” Bette said, fingering Tina softly, barely, wanting only to say I feel you. Wanting only to be felt.
Tina’s breath hitched, and her eyes opened, taking in the room around her, the door before her, Bette’s warmth inside her and at her back. “Too much,” she whispered.
The finger retreated slightly, and concern tinged Bette’s voice. “Too much?” she asked.
“Yeah” Tina exhaled, her hand moving to Bette’s wrist, urging its return. “I like you way too much.”
Bette flattened her hand against Tina and kept it there, not moving, probing, touching any further. “Maybe you like me just exactly as much as you should.” She waited for an answer, noting Tina’s tight grip.
Tina finally spoke, increasing the downward pressure against Bette’s wrist, wanting to feel her again. “No, I don’t think so.” She pushed her hips out and Bette slid back inside of her, further than before. Tina groaned again. “If it were exactly as much as I should,” she said, pausing as Bette’s finger slid back out, teasing, “then I wouldn’t care that you’re going to leave.” She sighed in frustration, but weighed her words carefully. “How do you do it?”
“Do what? This?” Bette asked, slipping her finger back in, grinning. “It’s so easy. You have no idea.”
Tina started to laugh but didn’t have enough breath. She emitted a low moan instead. “No” She tried to slow herself down, though Bette’s torture was ridiculous. “I mean, how do you not care?”
“I don’t not care,” Bette responded, entirely focused on the feel of Tina.
“But you don’t care.”
Tina felt like distinguishing.
Bette felt like ignoring it. “I can’t think about leaving right now.” She pulled out again but stroked up gently, prompting an involuntary moan from Tina. A louder one.
“See, and I can’t not think about it.” Tina could barely get the words out. She was so ***** turned on.
“Well there you go. You like symmetry, remember?” Bette stroked her again.
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(59 votes, average: 3.32 out of 5)
great chapter:but youre killing us here! let it happen all the way,so bette&tina can go back to l.a. youre a teaserlol
they already have a relationship where they understand each other, this is great…when is tina moving to LA? love this
Great chapter. Looking forward to more.
OH MY GOD WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO US!!!lol this is just plain teaseing and good teaseing at that but your killing me,its sexy its erotic and strangly i cant get enough of it…lol so keep it coming…so to speak!!
This is an awesome story. I love how Tina is already in love with Bette.
Uggh lesbians can be so intense. leave it to two women to turn a one night stand into a full blown relationship. lol
Okay, they already have the bantering down, and the knowledge that they can’t resist each other. So when do we become a couple?
B got this one!! Damn you are killing me! I am so addicted I had to get home, turn on the computer, see if you posted, read, and then get my daughter and I to a basketball game. Your writing is amazing and I maybe if I’m lucky there will be another post when I get home tonight. Thanks!
that is torture…..foreplay on any level…and then off to sleep. That is something I’ll never experience,…my motto…”don’t start somethin u can’t finish!!!! My question to you……y oh y didn’t u finish what u started????!!!!! POST SOON!!!!!! U were away WAYYYYYYY TOOOOOOO LONG!!!!!!!
yummy wow! those are my feelings right now toward your story! yummy & wow :9
yeah, I totally agree with nacy, let it happen please.
GREAT JOB…THANKS
Love this post! Bette was soooo sweet!! with all the drama in the real show, and the spoilers ugh!(I am getting sick!) I have forgotten how cute these two can be when they are loving with each other. “But I want to be nice to you”… OMG! how cute is that!! I think you should talk to Ilene Chaiken… she needs your insights on how Bette should act! Love each chapter you post…
OMFG! This is so good! You’re writing is impeccable. More…please!
Oh my god…it’s so…I’m just…why can’t….AUGH! I friggin love this story and every agonizing moment.
Wel, I’ve decided I’m NEVER staying overnight in Detroit if it means forming a sensual and loving yet somewhat disturbed bond with a random hotel employee. I still love this story though, even in its darker moments.
I am so into this story! If there was such a thing as *too good*…this would be it. Absolutely marvelous!
OMG!!! I love your story. U like to tease huh? well, keep doing it, because this is one of the best stories on this site. and please if you should decide to take some time off, PLEASE< PLEASE, PLEASE!!!!wrap up the story first, don't just leave us hanging! thank you for sharing your talent.
Amazing writing. Amazing storytelling.
your king me here make the post longer
I just read the last 7 chapters. I’m so hooked on this. Please post soon. I love the direction these 2 are going. :p
luvr…I just had to read the chapter again because there was not a new chapter. ; ) I am being very selfish..I know.
This is good!
This is just an awesome story. Thanks!