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After the storm.. the rainbow ch 17
Previously They ate desert and everybody went home. A few hours later John was already sleeping dreaming about his presents Bette was breastfeeding Eve and Tina was in bed with them Tina: babe I will pick up water you want too? Bette: no im fine thanks Tina headed to the kitchen when the phone rang Tina: I get it Bette: (from the bedroom) ok Tina: hello Woman: hello, I would like to speak with Cristina Kennard please Tina: this is she Woman: Cristina is me Tina: (in a low whisper) mom? After the storm.. the rainbow ch 17
Tina: mom is that you?
Woman: yes Christina it’s me, Joanna
Tina: how did you find me?
Joanna: I received the photos
Tina: what photos?
Joanna: of you and 2 children
Tina: I didn’t send you any photos
Joanna: those children are beautiful
Tina: Those children are mine and Bette’s children
Joanna: I see, are you still with that woman?
Tina: that woman’s name is Bette and yes I’m still with her
Joanna: Christina you’re my oldest daughter, how could you do this to yourself and to your family, you’ve embarrassed us, living in that depraved life
Tina: stop, why did you call? To tell me everything I already know you think about me?
Joanna: I miss the innocent child you were, not what you became because of that woman, Christina I had so many plans for you. I dreamed of seeing you marrying a good man like Eric, and I wanted to spoil my grandchildren, but you took that away from me, from us
Tina: I’m married with a wonderful person and we have two amazing children so far, we are a family, why is that so hard for you to accept, that I’m happy and for you to be happy for me?
Joanna: I wanted the best for you I wanted you become a wife and a mother just like me
Tina started to laugh while tears are coming from her eyes
Tina: you’re kidding me right? You think you’re a good mother? You think acting the way you did, makes you a good mother? I am a wife and I am a mother, but I will never be like you. You deceived me, you threw me away when I needed you most. I needed support, I was alone and Bette saved me, she showed me love and respected me and I’m a better person and mother than you, because I will never hurt my children the way you did, I will never let them go through what I went through, I will support them in everything they need, because I’m not just a mother I’m their friend and I care about them
Joanna: don’t talk to me like that, I’m still your mother
Tina: after all those years you lost that right. You lost that right the night you slapped me on the face in front of everybody and sent me away like I was garbage, but the slap didn’t hurt that much, what really hurt, was your hateful words and the way you acted, I didn’t deserve that, I didn’t do anything wrong to anyone, I was just following my heart and my heart belonged to Bette, it always did and always will and I’m sorry if you cant see that
Joanna: do you think we can find a way to forgive ourselves someday?
Tina: (with a sad voice) I don’t know
Joanna: Christina I’m trying to get close to you and those kids. You seem to be happy. The boy didn’t look much like you but he has your smile and the little girl, I remember you when you were born. You were the most beautiful child I’d ever seen
Tina started to cry listening to her mother
Joanna: you gave birth to her too?
Tina: no, Bette did
Joanna: I’m sorry Christina, for everything but it’s still very hard to accept you and that woman
Tina: stop calling her that
Joanna: I’m sorry, I was thinking about calling you more often and see if we can try to get to know each other again and I want to know those children
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(74 votes, average: 4.31 out of 5)
I love your story… especially John! I in love with this boy…Looking foward for more…
whew…bad parents…how can we get rid of them? LOL…i hope B&T will work it out…Bette meant well and they have a great family
hey P…it’s me VAKKAV…ha..ha…I have one word…EXCELLANT…that’s your best…I swear…the dialogue was perfect…the drama…I loved it…the Bette attended to her son a time of her Tina arguing I loved it…and the best of all when Tina hung up the phone n her mother…it’s sad…but I feel her completely…and last but not least I loved how Tina was a woman and went and apologized…PERFECT…five stars from me definetly..bye love…
hey babe,i’m with V — your best chapter to date. Bette is trying to help but gee what the hell is up Tina’s mums ass ??
Great chapter. Looking forward to more.
Hey baby… well granny doesn’t know what she’s missing… and i am so glad tina will NEVER—NOT EVER… see her wothout Bette… great chapter… please continue
You go girl. I agree with the others this is your best chapter to date.. I knew you had more wonderful things hidden somewhere.. ;) I say GO TINA for standing up for your family.. And YAAY ME cuz I finally got the chance to read a chapter at the same day it’s posted.. =D LOL
Happy to see Tina stick up for herself and Bette.
tina has a cruel mother and calling bette that women was unforgivable.she needs to meet bette and see how wonderful she is before she passes judgement. tina should’nt snap on bette because her mother is an ass.
hey lady… i will start to complain like tylo… I want be first again… not even vice, I want be first always in everything… lol…. another great chapter… thanks
I’ve been silent until now and had to let you know this was your best chapter. I look forward to more.
Pan…that was EXCELLENT! Tina dealing with her mom was great. Her mom wants what she wants and doesn’t really care what Tina wants…she’s twisted. Glad Tina hung up on her. And poor Bette was only trying to help. Loved how Bette comforted John when he saw how upset Tina was…that was very sweet. Looking forward to what happens next.
That was one hell of a chapter Pandora…I loved it despite it was so sad. Tinas mom makes me so angry….what an ass!!! More please :o))
If loving your children makes you a bad parent I’m bad. So glad that Tina told her Mother, that you take me you get the whole package or nothing. Love John,ideal little boy. thanks
tina mom calls with that bullshit bette needs to kick her ass!!!!!!! i will b 1
There I finally got to read it. Great chapter. I love John too, he’s an amazing kid. Please post soon
Wow that sad to see Tina like that and well Bette and Tina will talk more. John is so cute. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Just read the last four chaps in one go .. all I can say is I want more, more, more… (stolen from disco song). And I always get what I want!!! Alright, I’m asking really nicely….Okay, now I’m begging …FAZ FAVOR !!!!