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After the storm.. the rainbow ch 17
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Tina: and what about Bette?
Joanna: What about her? I want see you and your children, but I don’t want to meet your friend
Tina: She is not just my friend, she is my wife, my partner, the mother of my children, my life and if you can’t accept her, don’t bother calling here again
Tina hung up the phone and sat crying on the couch. Bette heard the whole thing from the bedroom and when she heard Tina’s crying, she went to the living room. She sat down next to her and put her arms around Tina
Tina: don’t touch me (pushing Bette’s arms away and standing up)
Bette: Tina, don’t do this baby
Tina: (crying harder) how could you do this? How could you not warn me? I was not ready. I’m not ready to face her
Bette: I did thinking about you. I can’t stand by to witness you being this sad because you miss your family. I wanted to help you get close to them again.
Tina: (screaming) you had no right to do this to me, this is none of your ***** business
Bette: (standing up) everything about you is my ***** business, I love you and to see you sad makes me sad, when I see you crying, I wanna cry, I’m sorry, I thought I was doing something to make you happy or at least to help you, but I guess I should have discussed it with you first, I’m sorry
Bette turned around to leave and found a crying John looking at them, she took him in her arms and went to the bedroom
Bette: shh don’t cry son
John: are you mad with mommy?
Bette: no honey im not
John: why is mommy crying and screaming?
Bette: it’s nothing baby, she is just sad
John: (sobbing) I don’t like mommy sad
Bette: me either baby lets just wait a little
Tina was alone for a few minutes, crying all her sadness out
Tina: what the ***** did I just do?
Tina went to the bedroom and sees Bette with John on her chest, she was reading Dr. Seuss for him, when John saw Tina, he went to her arms
John: don’t be sad mommy I’m here
Tina: (crying looking at Bette)I’m sorry
Bette just opened her arms inviting Tina, Tina then climbed into bed still with John in her arms and lay down in Bette’s arms, the 3 of them just cuddled together
Tina: I’m so sorry, I was so rude
Bette: its ok, try to sleep a little
Tina: are you going to hold me?
Bette: yes baby, I will. You’re stuck with me (kissing Tina gentle)
Tina: thank you for being here
Bette: try to sleep, tomorrow will be a better day, I love you
Tina: I love you too
John: (almost sleeping) I luv you
TBC…
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I love your story… especially John! I in love with this boy…Looking foward for more…
whew…bad parents…how can we get rid of them? LOL…i hope B&T will work it out…Bette meant well and they have a great family
hey P…it’s me VAKKAV…ha..ha…I have one word…EXCELLANT…that’s your best…I swear…the dialogue was perfect…the drama…I loved it…the Bette attended to her son a time of her Tina arguing I loved it…and the best of all when Tina hung up the phone n her mother…it’s sad…but I feel her completely…and last but not least I loved how Tina was a woman and went and apologized…PERFECT…five stars from me definetly..bye love…
hey babe,i’m with V — your best chapter to date. Bette is trying to help but gee what the hell is up Tina’s mums ass ??
Great chapter. Looking forward to more.
Hey baby… well granny doesn’t know what she’s missing… and i am so glad tina will NEVER—NOT EVER… see her wothout Bette… great chapter… please continue
You go girl. I agree with the others this is your best chapter to date.. I knew you had more wonderful things hidden somewhere.. ;) I say GO TINA for standing up for your family.. And YAAY ME cuz I finally got the chance to read a chapter at the same day it’s posted.. =D LOL
Happy to see Tina stick up for herself and Bette.
tina has a cruel mother and calling bette that women was unforgivable.she needs to meet bette and see how wonderful she is before she passes judgement. tina should’nt snap on bette because her mother is an ass.
hey lady… i will start to complain like tylo… I want be first again… not even vice, I want be first always in everything… lol…. another great chapter… thanks
I’ve been silent until now and had to let you know this was your best chapter. I look forward to more.
Pan…that was EXCELLENT! Tina dealing with her mom was great. Her mom wants what she wants and doesn’t really care what Tina wants…she’s twisted. Glad Tina hung up on her. And poor Bette was only trying to help. Loved how Bette comforted John when he saw how upset Tina was…that was very sweet. Looking forward to what happens next.
That was one hell of a chapter Pandora…I loved it despite it was so sad. Tinas mom makes me so angry….what an ass!!! More please :o))
If loving your children makes you a bad parent I’m bad. So glad that Tina told her Mother, that you take me you get the whole package or nothing. Love John,ideal little boy. thanks
tina mom calls with that bullshit bette needs to kick her ass!!!!!!! i will b 1
There I finally got to read it. Great chapter. I love John too, he’s an amazing kid. Please post soon
Wow that sad to see Tina like that and well Bette and Tina will talk more. John is so cute. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Just read the last four chaps in one go .. all I can say is I want more, more, more… (stolen from disco song). And I always get what I want!!! Alright, I’m asking really nicely….Okay, now I’m begging …FAZ FAVOR !!!!