Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
A Night in the D — Chapter 24
The kiss went on until Tina was sure it couldn’t remain only a kiss. Tina took leave of herself. She did. She had to. Trying to hold on to what was stable and sure was a losing proposition, especially when fear was stable and loss was sure. Why not risk more?
One of the things she’d noticed about kissing was how purely it reflected desire. She remembered thinking about kissing. Thinking about it while doing it. And she remembered not thinking. Her body taking over. Her tongue, her mouth. Her lips tracing an inner rhyme of nonsensical reason. She remembered that happening very few times, and not in a long time, but definitely now. This moment. Bette across from her, a vessel of longing she couldn’t stop filling up and running over. And over. She cupped Bette’s face and shifted it slightly to the right, as if she’d missed a spot with her tongue and could only reach it at the perfect angle. Bette groaned and Tina slid one hand to her throat, to feel the source of that groan. The vibration of Bette’s own unreasonableness, captured in her throat, emitted vocally but still deep inside. Tina wanted inside, to pluck that particular string, to feel it resonate against her fingers, her lips. It was so not about fucking anymore. Not when even that act would not get her far enough inside, to the place she wanted to be, the source of all want. She noted her self-aggrandizing tendencies and pressed further with her tongue, as if to manifest them orally. God, she thought, and breathed out heavily, detaching herself, her cheek against Bette’s and one hand wrapped around her neck, the other at her waist, feeling her there. To be sure.
She closed her eyes as Bette’s lips turned to her cheek, pressed hard, then opened, expelling warm onto her face. Bette breathed through her mouth and against Tina, and it was intoxicating. Tina managed a slight laugh, an unconvincing one. “I can’t take that.”
“No?” Bette’s voice was low. Lower than she’d heard it yet. Her mouth moved slightly, the air still there, the heat. Tina wanted to suck it all out of her. Instead she calmed herself, whispered.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.




GOD LADY YOURE KILLING US HERE!LOLGREAT CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON.(HOT) IMIN NEED OF COLD SHOWER NOW.TEE PLAYING HARD TO GET!LET THEM DO MORE SOOOOON
Good heavens…the anticipation is killing me.
TO QUOTE TINA….”FUCK!!!!!”
I swear to god that you are the queen of the tease…how many chapters have you had us dangling by a thread each time we go away thinking, ok the next that’s it, it’s gonna be the big one, I just know it the next one….Only to have us stalled yet again, but still we wait and come back for more we are as tortured as Tina…pls soon
so close LG….
god damit !!!!!!!!!!!! your killing me!!!!!!!!!!!! make the post longer
Great chapter. Looking forward to more.
One word…brilliant! How do you do create so much energy and tension with 26 letter pallet?
*banging head on desktop really hard*
The writing is so rich,so good. I have to read it many times to enjoy all the lovely complexities. “To be leveled by grace and to feel it as such. ” Just lovely.
Great writing but I can’t hang on much longer.
Such complexity, intensity, and desire…that it’s overflowing. Both, B & T want one another with such raw intensity that it scares them into submission. But these little moments of genuine release will set them free to act on the love that they need and want from one another. Thanks for this lovely chapter, your writing is beautiful. Thanks again.
I swear, every chapter since the first one has been pure, raw foreplay. Now I just wonder how many women are lined up outside to use the restroom. LOL
God, a nod to Joyce? I hadn’t thought of that while I was reading. Great touch!
damn…luvr…you are killing us all right! With this wonderful foreplay and beautiful writing…please post soon
Damn this is driving me crazy and I agee with fergz1 and let see what’s next, thanks!
I think I am as totally intrigued with who you are as by your story. What a mind you have! Your writing is profound and lyrical. Can you tell us anything about yourself? Are you a professional writer? Obviously, you are gifted. What a mind you must have to conceive of this story and toy with us for these many chapters, never boring , always seductive. Who are you luvrgirl?
this is just so intense and captivating…i’m just sitting now with my heart beating fast…wow
Just cannot find the right words to express how much I love your story.. it’s just such an intense and captivating and brilliant story… thank you! I hope you’ll post another chapter soon!
“To be leveled by grace and to feel it as such.” That was a very beautiful line, where did it come from? I think I have seen it before but can not remember where. At any rate beautiful and so apropo. This story is lovely and engaging, I keep eagerly awaiting each chapter and have to read it twice I go through it so fast. You have a way with words. Thanks for the post.
so intense…awesome chapter.
IM actually having trouble reading it it gets so hot …THEN YOU STOP!!! yep YOUR A TEASE! love it tho!
Its hard to type when you can’t think, This has been one big beautiful foreplay. Love it thanks
Whoa, mama. Your teasingly drawn out and poetic prose is making my head swim. I LOVE IT! It’s just…brilliant.
OMG! WHY DID YOU STOP! THIS IS KILLING MEEEEEE!!! PLEEEEEAAAAASE POST AGAIN SOON! LIKE NOW!
wow. just, wow.