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    A Night in the D — Chapter 23

    Story written on January 16, 2006 by luvrgirl.
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    However you need to do it.

    The bathroom was a single. Large, roomy, clean enough, Bette thought, taking it in at a glance. “After you,” Tina had said, before shutting the door behind them and locking it. Bette turned to see Tina watching her and she smiled sheepishly. Tina laughed.

     

    “You think we’re having sex in the bathroom?”

     

    “I’m not sure.” And she wasn’t. And she wasn’t sure whether she did or didn’t want to.

     

    “You’re presuming again.” Tina frowned at her. “I just need to get myself together. Arguing with you across a table in public is oppressive.”

     

    Bette nodded. “I don’t want to argue.”

     

    “Neither do I.” Tina placed both hands on the bathroom counter and stared searchingly into the mirror. “You know what I want to do?” she asked, looking past her own reflection to that of Bette, standing behind her, looking a tad lost.

     

    “Fuck me?” Bette asked, lightening her tone to imitate Tina’s earlier one, to contrast with the heaviness of the echoing, tiled space.

     

    “I wish,” Tina said, sighing. Her eyes returned to her own face.

     

    She was wearing a pair of Bette’s jeans-too long for her but otherwise well fitting. A t-shirt. Her own shoes. She’d pulled her hair back after the shower and it hung loosely at her neck, a few tendrils framing her face. No makeup. Bette thought she looked beautiful. Fragile but tough. Bette didn’t like arguing with Tina, but she liked being engaged with her, even if it meant a fight. The worst thought she had at the moment was Tina walking away, going home, throwing up her hands and saying forget it. Leaving.

     

    “What do you want to do?” Bette asked finally, as Tina remained unspeaking, seemingly lost in thought..

     

    “Love you.” The words spilled out quietly. Tina smiled awkwardly. The mirror kept them face to face.

     

    The lump in Bette’s throat was immediate. She swallowed hard to force it down, but it wouldn’t go away. She glanced at her own face in the mirror and saw fear. Anxiety. Their eyes met for a moment before the mutual silence got to Tina and she lowered her head, staring down at the glaring whiteness of the sink, the bright silver drain.

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    3. You are killing me with this!!!lol i love it to bits BUT your killing me… slowly i might add!this time i really cant wait for more ….well not too long anyway!

    5. There are a few places I can think of where I wouldn’t expect something sweet and lovely to happen, and restroom in a bar is one of them. But you pulled it off. Bette’s walls seem to have crumbled to the point that she is able to start wearing down Tina’s.

    16. WOW…that was amazing. Bette’s walls are coming down and Tina’s on shaky ground. Both realizing the intensity of it all and still wanting to go on. Please continue.

    18. WOW! Absolutely amazing, powerful, engaging and unbelievably captivating writing! Each line, every turn of phrase evoking a more intense image of each of the characters. Thank-you.

    19. That was just about the most intense scene I’ve ever read or witnessed. It felt as though I was looking at a movie or a highly charged scene playing out right in front of me. Wonderfully written. Can hardly wait until they do get together again and make love because that is what it is now. Lovemaking, not just sex. Those two are really hot for each other in more ways than one. Thanks for the post. Post soon please.

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