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***Latin Business… or something else??*** –Chapter18
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Previously…
The next day…
Bette parked outside The Planet, straightened her clothes and went inside. It was still early and only Shane was in their usual table having her triple shot. Bette had called the girls and tol them that Tina was joining them today and also warned them not to say a word about the bet.
“Hey Shane, how are you?” She asked taking a seat.
“Hey…” A still sleepy Shane answered. After the coffee did the trick. “So, Ms Tina is joining us today, right?”
“Yep” Said Bette happily
“What’s up with you two, huh?”
“Nothing besides what you already know”
“You better tell her about that little game of yours, man, because when she finds out…”Said young Yoda whistling after saying that.
“She will never find about the bet” Bette froze as she felt a hand on her right shoulder
“What bet?”
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“For Christ Sake, Kit! You scared the crap out of me!”
“Oh, shut up Bette and give your big sister a hug!” said Kit pulling Bette up and in for a hug, which Bette accepted sighing in relief, which was not unnoticed by Kit.
“I’m gonna get some coffee. What can I get you?” Asked Kit with a ‘come with me roght now’ look
“Actually, I think I’m going with you. We’ll be right back Shane”
“OK” replied cool Yoda watching the Porter girls leave the table
“Ok, baby sis. What is all this bet thing that has you all nervous?”
“Me…nervous? Haha.. no Kit-”
“Come on, I know you way better than that”
“Ok, ok” sighed Bette defeated “But you can’t tell anyone,ok?”
“What did you do this time? – two capuccinos and blueberry muffins please”
“OK, remember Tina?”
“Your sleeping beauty?”
“Yes, that one”
“What about her?”
“Well, she was straight” said Bette hoping Kit could get the hint so she wouldn’t have to explain
“OK… and what does tht have to do with you?” asked Kit, confused
“Well, Alice and me-”
“Alice? Oh crap! This can’t be good… ok, shoot”
“We… we have a bet. And it is that, I was supposed to convert Tina” said Bette, now looking for a place to hide.
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as long as tina won’t know about the bet, it can ruin everything
This was a lovely chapter, the way that Bette is with Tina is sweet but i am afraid when arrive the day in that Tina find out the bet. Post soon
I love reading this story, let’s give us some sweet and loving moments before you bring on the ‘Tina-find-out-the-bet’ dramas. Please post soon!
Good chapter. Bette and Tina are so cute and sweet. Glad that’s Kit not Tina. OK post soon please, thanks!
I just finish reading all of the chapters and it’s a great story!!! Can’t wait to see how it all unfolds!! Looking forward to your next post!
Well I have now caught up with everyone and I must admit that my heart sunk when I saw it was the most recent chapter. I am so impatient. Well now…this story is fantastic and I am thoroughly enjoying it. The way you write the characters is both believeable, accurate and very sweet – I love it. I particularly enjoyed Bette struggling not to call Tina “T” for so long and the moments of vulnerability that they both show at times. In some ways I am looking forward to when Tina finds out about the bet as I am interested to see how you choose to handle it and how much effect it has on the story. I think Tina will be upset and shocked but depending on how she finds out it might not be a huge stumbling block in their relationship. I hope not but trust that if you decide to let her find out in a bad way (like you keep teasing us) you will write it well and I will forgive you! Keep on writing when you can, I can’t wait to read more. Thank you so much for writing.
I like this story. The writing is quite good and easy to follow. The only part that I detest is that Bette and Alice are so immature as to bet on something that is very important and a monmental experince in someone’s life. It belittles the entire experience IMHO. Tina is going to be so humiliated when she finds out that everyone knows Bette only showed interest in her because of a stupid, childish bet and that her first life-altering sexual experience came about because of something so petty. I wish Bette would tell Alice to take her bet and go to Hell; and, then, tell Tina the truth… BEFORE she actually becomes intmate with her. I am not liking this particular Bette personality right now.
Bette and Tina are so junior high right now. It’s so fucking cute! And WOOHOO score one for me for guessing it was Kit that snuck up on Bette!
Great update! Bette and Tina are just too cute, too bad we don’t get to see that on the show! Well post soon please!
Hey hun, sorry it took so long for my to post… been a bit busy with school work and such, damn misterm exams are almost here. I loved this one, It’s good to see that Bette is changing for the better now that she has met Tina, It’s funny how she ran across the road to get her the salad that was cute. I love how you have all the girls teasting Bette and most of the time Tina doesn’t even notice half of it, hehe. Awesome work, keep it up love. Oh and Happy Valentine’s day to you too:), I got your message but by then you were gone, sorry that it was a bit late. Anyway take care and talk to you soon.
Awwww so sweet :o))