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the l wing chp 16
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Chapter 16 – The L Wing
The narration of President Bette Porter.
It is a beautiful
She was sleeping soundly when I woke up at
Finally after an hour she rolls onto her back and seems to fall into a deeper sleep. I doze off myself and when I awake she is still on her back but resting her hand on my thigh.
I carefully remove myself from the bed, grab my kimino robe and got into the kitchen. I decide that fresh coffee, orange juice and whole-meal toast with little jars of preserve are the perfect Porter breakfast. Plus it’s a meal that I cannot mess up for once.
When I carry the loaded tray back into the bedroom Tina is awake – well half awake. I place the tray on the floor and sit on the side of the bed looking at her. She is even more beautiful first thing in the morning – without make-up and her blonde hair tied back in a pony tail she looks every part the natural blonde that she is. She smiles at me and I lean forward and kiss her on the mouth.
“Hey babe “
“Hi”
“You hungry ?”
She nods.
“Good – I’ve made breakfast – is this okay ?”
I place the tray in front of her. She sits up and grins.
“The President of America made breakfast for little old me ?”
“Given the orgasms you dished out to the President last night – it is the least she can do. If you name something that you would prefer I will do anything – when’s your birthday ?”
“May 23 “
“You want that to become a National Holiday ? I can find a reason to do that – you want the state capital of
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loving your story, more soon please
Ally, that was one fantastic chapter. I just wonder what is wrong with Tina because I think she was lying to Bette too.
Tina was definitely lying to Bette. She went from being tender to being like a savage after the mention of Afghanistan. It’s like she was afraid she’d never be with Bette again. It seems these 2 are walking around with quite a few demons.
ALLY, WOW!!!! More Soon Please
Hey, I absolutely love this story. Me thinks Tina is seriously traumatised by her time in Afghanistan. Hopefully it won’t have any serious effect on their relationship. I’m hooked, thanks!!
That was pretty wild, Ally. Could it be that peanut butter in all it’s forms is the Devil’s spawn? After all, I’m pretty sure smooth came first. No, wait, Bette came first. Anyway, here’s hoping Tina can come to terms (no more come jokes) with whatever is bugging her and share it with Bette. Because I’m pretty sure Bette will start freaking out about it if she doesn’t.
great chapter – I hope Bette has the good sense to call Tina on whatever is causing her to emotionally hide. I’m guessing war trauma too but Bette should push for honesty from her lover otherwise they are screwed.
That was hot and obviously different for them and because you write this so well it was obvious to us the readers that something wasnt right either, thats not always easy to get across in a short space… but i actually felt it in that part of this chapter…..(the sex scene…lol) great chapter i might add!!!Am i rambling???thought so! MORE SOON …PLEASE
fjghkajsdgha sdkgji love the last line pleeease continue that was amazing yes please continue soon thanx byeness
Bette is to smart for Tina to lie to her, this will come out soon and she will tell Bette. Love these two together. They need more time together. thanks
something is obviously up with Tina, I hope she opens up to Bette, SHE CAN’T START OFF THE RELATIONSHIP WITH LIES…LET HER SEE THIS!!!!!
they have to talk about afganistan sometimes, because it is something that still bothers tina…i hope they can solve it without splitting apart again
I hope that Bette is able to help Tina deal with her demons caused by her stay in Afghanistan, and Tina is able to help Bette deal with her demons of having had an ex murdered. If they are able to do this it will really cement their relationship. Superb job with this cahpter Ally, please continue and soon. — thanks, cpq :o).
Uhoh. . .Tina’s just trying to protect something. . .I hope Bette tries to get it out of her.Love this story, please post again soon. Oh, and I TOTALLY agree with the peanut butter thing . . .
excellent chapter! i’m going to move up my “going piublic” estimate to 3 weeks or less.
Come on Ally – why can it not just be pure bliss in the beginning….they have only been a couple a week or something LOL….God I love this story, the way you write WOW…..I’m looking forward to read about the demons Tina got after Afghanistan and I hope Bette will not keep quiet after the lie, they have to communicate….More please and have a great weekend :o))
I don`t know what happened in Afganistan but it`s such a big thing for Tina, she should talk to Bette in order to get some help. excellent and hot chapter!!!!!!! waoooooooo post soon
*thud* thud* thud*great great great ….
uh oh, what’s Tina hiding from Bette??? Whatever it is Bette is bound to find out, she is the president after all. Post soon.
great chap. and hey what makes people think that when someone has wild sex once ands while, something is terribly wrong, tina may have been really horney from the peanut butter and needed a good orgasm. anyway love the story and looking forward to the next post!
Oh man, I bet Tina and Bette’s post-fight bliss is going to be short lived. I see Tina distancing herself from Bette until she’s ready to talk about Afghanistan, or whatever’s bothering her. Bette isn’t the most patient person so I hope her patience won’t run thin with Tina. As always, excellent chapter and that was a scorching sex scene. Please post soon!
duh duh duuuuuh… whats up with tk…?
Love this story, been away for a month and a bit and just catching up. Cant wait for the next chapter.
Ally, I hope you have Tina open up to Bette soon. That was a fucking great chapter…the intensity was there…thanks.
jeez so hott…why would there b a problem ally??
Damn that was so hot nad wild and I agree with Lamentamini and let see what’s next, thanks!
Thank you for writing, I never quite know where you are going, but I always know I will be fully entertained on the journey. Love the unpredictability and outstanding storytelling.
OK now I’m curious about Afghanistan – what happened to Tina there? & Ok I am a little curious about her lying to Bette….which means – I need MORE!