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The L Wing – chp 17
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THE L WING – CHAPTER 17
I’m with the woman I love – I am totally fabulous – that was great sex honey “
And for the first time I know Tina Kennard has lied to me.
I look at her, very confused – she is obviously upset but I don’t know how to tackle her about it. Should I tackle her at all ?
I kiss her – pulling her close and rubbing the tears that are running down her face. I have got to get to the bottom of this – I remember
“Tina ? “
“Yes ?”
“Want to talk about it ?”
“About what ?”
“About why you are crying after our lovemaking “
“I’m fine – sex was just very intense that’s all”
“You would tell me if there was a problem ? I’m not complaining – its just that “
“Please don’t go there Bette “
“Tina ?”
“Please Bette – I just don’t want to talk “
“I want to help – in anyway I can – there really is nothing I wouldn’t do for you . I can pull any string you want – nothing is too much trouble for the woman I love “
She moves away from me – I reach out a hand.
“Please Tina “
“I’m going to the toilet ” she says.
I watch as she disappears into the bathroom – I flop back onto the bed and try to control my emotions. I am so afraid that she is closing me out . I know its got something to do with
There are times when I just have pull strings and find out whatever I can about what happened in
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Love this Tina dont want her to hurt Bette tho. There is someone she has loved that has hurt her or was hurt thanks bettyvhall
another great chapter ally… and i’m glad you are posting so often yet I can’t comment all of them in time… like that even being Bette the president, Tina looks more powerful here… thanks
And so are you Ally – bad that is :o))
Good chapter. Tina is cool and strong. Drama coming and let see what’s next, thanks!
i have to say, much as i am enjoying this story, i really can’t stand how bette is so nasty to shane and her other staff, and tina has been nasty to alice and shane as well…not thinking too much of them at the moment… they are both too self-involved and involved with each other to think of being nice people to others
gamn tina tell us what u really wnt
WOW! Wonderful I’m just finish reading of your story great Pls continue post soon Thanks!!
I’m getting bad vibes here. It almost seems like both of them are playing with fire. At any rate I agree with bandtfan in that Tina is awesome in this story. I’m guessing Afghanistan is what made her to be such a strong person.
OMFG!!! I love Tina in this story. She is such a strong woman. Going commando and telling Bette when she did was brilliant. Ally humour–Got to love it.
another great chapter, ally!.. already waiting for the next one later today. tina really knows how to be evasive. and sexy. :D
great chapter! Thankyou…I’ll look forward to more – especially as your comment at the top suggests you will build up to explaining Tina’s afghanistan ghost
I get a feeling that tina is holding back and bette is heading for a heartbreak.. post again soon..
the intrigue, drama….not the only coming is it??? Tks
great chapter ally, you are awesome. i love how strong tina is, and she is not afraid to tell bette what’s on her mind. yeah so what did happen in afghanistan?
Will I find the word 2 describe how amazing you and ur story are???…. nope, god! your story is sooooo ( I still can’t find the word)… looking forward for the next chapter.. 10x
Just caught up on your story, nice! *Should we be worried that Bette’s murdered ex is somehow linked to Tina’s well of sadness?
juz caught up. great chapters!!
I love this Tina as well, she is strong, independent, assertive and agressive when need be. It’s great!! I also love the fact that Bette is not the player in this story. Looking forward to the next chapter!
DAMN!!!!!!! TINA IS PERFECT!!!!!!!! “I’ve gone commando for you.” (what a vision, … slaps my head, leans back in my chair and sighs with a goofy grin on my face) IS THE OTHER CHAPTER UP AS YET…LEMMIE GO CHECK!!!!!
ally, you are just so fucking brilliant. This story just gets better and better. I can just imagine Tina commando and Bette’s face…
Good for Shane, she is just looking sfter her friend after all. I hope Bette will understand that Shane’s intentions are good and grow out of a want to protect her feelings. Tina, what a tease…..commando huh??? Can’t wait to read your next chapter later today.
i guess it was tina who was with bette’sgirlfriend when she was killed.when bette finds out she is going to be so pissed at tina all hell is going to break off in the oval office. but tinaprobably didnt no she dating the president.
hhehhehehehehe
Tina’s gone commando? Whatever can that mean? Camouflage panties and/or restraints? You’re making me nervous again, Ally. Since when did Shane become a Puritan?
funnyone, going commando means wearing no underwear… tina surely knows how to spice things up in this story.
Very funny and clever! I have to admit to using the Urban Dictionary to check out the word “Commando”. I now understand. How naive of me! Fanfic is even educational. LOL.
hmmmmm . bette aka: president … is quite a needy gal – she sure does push hard for a brand new relationship.