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Chapter 17
Bette: (the sun was beginning to rise now so it was still very early in the morning…. and to my surprise and relief Tina was still sleeping on me…. and I couldn’t help releasing a little giggle from the joy I felt when I saw the beautiful expression on her face when she’s asleep…. this caused her to make some noices on her sleep….. and I swear those were the most beautiful noices I’ve ever heard….. I could only compare them with her eyes…. oh no…. now I’m smiling like an idiot….. get a grip Porter)
Tina: mmmm……. and what’s so funny?
Bette: oh… I’m sorry….. I didn’t mean to wake you up….
Tina: (now lifting her head) it’s ok….. it’s nice to be woken up by the sound of your smile
Bette: I could get used to this you know…. (and I kissed her very softly)
Tina: and I could never get tired of telling you how sweet you are…. let’s go inside the house and I’ll make you breakfast……
Bette: actually I think Maria should be taking care of that by now…. (looking ashamed)
Tina: and who the hell is Maria?
Bette: (cofused by her sudden change of mood) Maria is the housekeeper….. (and as I was finishing the phrase she jumped off my lap with a complete new and weird expression on her face….. like if she was scared or…. ashamed….. that’s it, that was the expresssion on her face…. she looked ashamed…… and then she began getting dressed) wait…. what’s wrong? (and I stood up and moved slowly towards her)
Tina: (looking at the house and then at Bette and then at the house, several times) I thought we were alone….. you….. just….
Bette: (feeling more hurted and stupid) ok…. I get it…. but for what it’s worthy she can’t see us from the house….. and besides she has probably arrived like ten minutes ago…. so don’t worry…. I’m sure she hasn’t seen us….. (now looking defeated and releasing a sigh) I’ll tell you what…. let’s go back inside the house and I’ll call Marcos so he can take us back to the cruise…. (and I didn’t even let her anwer, I just turned around and began walking very fast back to the house while Tina remained there a little longer… I just didn’t want her to more ashamed if Maria saw us getting together inside the house)
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Great Chapter. More Soon Please
HOPE U FEEL BETTER SOON!! Make sure and rest up enuff, ’cause if it’s a NC17 coming up, the only way it’ll be any good is if you’re feeling well enuff to write. And u’ve got a lot of fans waiting for that NC17.
Tina: (I was so aroused and wet…… I wanted her so much…. in me…. all over me…. oh my god) and who’s telling you to walk away? Come here…. I believe this calls for an NC-17.
How could you do that to us? Hope you are feeling better and write when you can. Thanks for the chapter
WAS going to say hope your feeling better… and i do hope that….BUT you obviously are cause towards the end there things were getting alittle hot..lol… so i take it were in for a little lovin???maybe even an NC17 …only if your up for it tho!!!lol Keep well!!
Hope you are on the mend and feeling better very soon. Great chapter.
Hope you are feeling better Anne!! We love your story!!! Hot NC17 next???!! ;)
finally, bring it on, B&T in love
evil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Talk about love at first site. I have been hooked from the first chapter. Love your story.
ok …NC-17 CUMING UP… i feel it.. please continue
Damn this is gonna be hot and please post soon, thanks!
Great stuff – I love this….
YES, GO TINA GO, BETTE LET YOURSELF GO THIS TIME, SHE WAS JUST EMBARASSED AT THE BEACH HOUSE, BUT SHE LOVES YOU TOO.
I really really hope that you feel better, excellent chapter, i can understand Tina but she has to give the next step, Please take care-
Awww very sweet. Wishing you good health and a wonderful V-Day.