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OMG… OMG… OMG… ONE LAST TIME…
Tina wakes up first she slowly moves the covers off of Bette revealing her breasts she leans in and takes her nipple licking all around as it ripens in her mouth Bette moves slightly Tina’s hand goes down to her mound just moving her hand on the outside Bette now moans very slightly
Bette: I love it when you wake me up this way
Tina: I know you do… and I love (kiss) waking you up this way sucking her nipple in
Bette: so glad its Saturday morning
Tina: after what you put me through last night I don’t think I will be able to walk today
Bette: don’t worry… I’ll carry you wherever you want to go
Tina: hmmmmmmm maybe later you just might have too I have been thinking
Bette: really… what about… moaning at what Tina is doing to her nipple
Tina: well we are going to New York on Tuesday and we’ll be there till Monday (Moving to the other nipple sucking it in and biting it) well I want to “Play” in the city
Bette: What do you have in mind (Arching her back)
Tina: well we are staying at the Waldorf and they have a 5 star restaurant there (Biting her nipple again) (Now her finger was circling her clit) you know I love how your clit just moistens at my touch
Bette: just for you baby go on what about hmmmmmmmm next week
Tina: Well at first I was going to say I wanted you to be a Hooker but I have been thinking and I want to play the Hooker you could pick me up on a corner but I’m not an average every day hooker no no no… I’m one of those High Class High Priced Hookers
Bette turns her head and just looks at Tina smiling and just then Tina bites on her nipple moving her hand and parts her center
Tina: so what do you think as she slides 2 fingers really fast and hard into Bette Do you think you’re UP TO IT
Bette lets out a scream her head going from side to side Oh God Yes
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Amanda all will be well. We are keeping you in our thoughts and prayers. So many of us have been touched by your loving and moving stories. I trust all who have enjoyed reading your stories will give back to you now with comments of encouragement and support. Big hugs to you my friend.
Amanda, you will be in my thoughts and prayers. Remember to do what they tell you to do even if you don’t want to!! Take care and be well!! Looking forward to an update on your health status when you are able.
You will be in our thoughts and prayers. Keep positive thoughts. We will be expecting more stories when you get back on the board:)
Amanda, we all wish you a speedy recovery. Please know that you’ll be in the thoughts and prayers of SO many friends. Please send updates, and we’ll be happy to post them for you if you’d like. Take care of yourself, and try not to think of the decades of “I told you so’s” you’re now in for with the hubby. ;-)
Amanda you are an amazing writer & I will be waiting for you to come back with your wonderful stories. Please keep us updated. You are in my thoughts & prayers. God Bless you and your family!
Amanda,my hopes and prayers will be with you and your family on the 28th,I have always loved reading all your stories,and I’m sure you have hundreds more to write so keep a positive attitude and we will look for your next post when you are feeling better….good luck….HUGS
Thanks for the stories! I will be thinking about you on the 28th. I’m sure you will be fine. Take care.
What a way to make it your last 1….god bless and recover quickly
AmandaMG thanks for posting this. I wish you all the best and a smooth and quick healing process. I look forward to hearing good news about your recovery and your return to the storytelling. Take care and God bless.
I will also be sending my thoughts and prayers your way. Take care of yourself…we will all be here when you return. Thank you for all your time and talent you share with us! Oh, and I had to laugh while reading this chapter. Before they got to their room, I kept waiting for the police to bust them for prostitution? LOL
Good Chapter!I hope everything goes well with your surgery and recovery. Good Job.
Amanda, you will be in my thoughts and prayers. Stay positive and all will be well. Thanks for sharing this story. It was great just as everything you’ve written has been. Take care!
AManda, I am completely optimistic that all will go well for you, but will definitely have you in my thoughts that day and others to follow.You are not done writing yet, my friend and we all look forward to your return-just make sure you’ve rested enough and I’m thinking we should too cuz it’ll be one hell of a cumback!
Amanda, I hope all goes well and you recover quickly. Thanks to you for your stories and your husband for keeping you with us. I hope you told him that he can trick you anytime :) Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
You will certainly be in my thoughts. So glad you saw the doctor! Be lookin’ for your next post.
amanda, thanks for this chapter of fun and hotness…you’ll be in my thoughts in prayers as well…and expect more wonderful stories from you
Amanda, my thoughts and prayers are with you. Take care and be well. I’m looking forward to your return. What a way to pacify us until your return!!!
amanda,I am praying for you to get better soon. You were the author that actually got me ‘hooked’ on fanfic, so you have brought me much delight with your stories. Take care of yourself and know that we will all be happy to see you back when you are ready.
Ah, Amanda, you remind me of the old Anita O’Day song were she says “Thank you, thank you, thanks for the boogie ride.” My best regards to all the buddies, east coast and west. And of course, my dear, you will be in all our thoughts come the day. There is power coming to you to help fight this, as I know you have the disposition to do. It’s a winning combination. And regards to that husband of yours, as well.
OMG Seahurst’s comment about getting busted cracked me up so much. LOL This whole chapter was just fucking sexy as hell. 10 orgasms by 4 AM. Geez I’d like to have just 1 before I turn 30 at the hands (no pun intended) of another person. Okay time to get serious. Amanda you take all the time you need. Yeah I’ll miss your stories but you have to be healthy to keep on writing them. I’ll be here when you’re ready to write again. :)
Have courage and faith. Thank you for the gift of your stories. You are in my thoughts and prayers for a swift and complete recovery.
amanda hope everthink goes well for you you be in my thoughts and prayers and be strong
great story and good luck on the 28th.
Hey Amanda. My thoughts and prayers will be with you now thru the 28th and until i hear that you are on a full recovery. Love all your stories. See you on the flip side. Your friend KAS
Amanda- best wishes and please look after yourself. you will be in our thoughts and prayers.
Oh Amanda, what a chapter, you do know how to write them. Love and prayer with you on the 28th and for the weeks to come. STAY POSITIVE, LAUGH A LOT, it helps to make positive things in the body happen when healing. Been there, done that. When ex had hers, I was the comic, she the straight man, we laughed after the surgery and all through treatments, she is still with us, 9 yrs. The merriment works. Thanks to your husband for his care and concern. We will be waiting for you. Be well. LAUGHTER.
I have every faith that everything will be alright. A & I send our best wishes and love to you. Great story. Will keep in touch by email. Good luck, wlll be thinking of you.
My name is Sofia (DUH!!) and i have been a silent reader since now.I really enjoy your stories they help, you know with all the Bullshiat happening this season. I’m really gratefull for people like you who take the time of day to write this stories for us, take this characters and just make up stories, put them in interesting situations. i will be praying for you, and know that you have a fan all the way from Mexico, thinking about you and wishing luck and quick non-painful recoveryLove, hugs and k’sSofi
Keeping my fingers crossed for the 28th my friend!! Just remember, we are all praying for you… Have faith!!
Always wishing you well.
You’re always in my thoughts and prayers. Thanks for sharing your stories with us. And yes, think of all the time you’ll have when recovering to think about your stories. I’ll miss them in the mean time. Now, back to the chapter, this was so hot I’m glad I saved it to read after work. I really get a kick out of their little role play.
Great post. Sadden to hear your news, but extremely happy your husband made the appointment, and you went. You will be missed. My thoughts and prayers are with you!!!
Amanda: You have always lifted my spirits with your fun, loving, tearfull stories….I wish you well my friend..I along with all the others can not wait until you are back to us…For you will have so many chapters written and for us to laugh over…Excellent as always my friend…until next time…
Amanda you will be in all our thoughts and prayers.Remeber to think positive and all will be well :).
Amanda, wishing you well as always on the 28th, your in my thoughts and prayers. Lots of hugs………..
OMG!!!!OMG!!!OMG!!! HOT!!!HOT!!!HOT!!!!OMG!!!!!!!!!!!I loved it. Amanda you’re in my thought and prayer. I love you.
Amanda i will be thinking of you hoping all goes well. all the best . please keep us informed of how you are doing, look foward to seeing your next post when you are well on your way to full health once again.
Wishing you a successful and speedy recovery. Thanks for the wonderful stories.
good luck my friend – many prayers going up for ya – great chap btw
AmandaMG – I’m so sorry to hear this but at the same time glad that your husband made the appointment for you, time is everything. Thank you for this incredible and very sexy chapter and know that you will surely be missed until you’re back again….because you will be back!!!! I wish you and your love ones all the best – take care of yourself.
Yet another silent reader comes out of the woodwork to add to all the good wishes & feelings coming your way. So from the other side of the pond, I wish you a complete recovery & many, many more B&T OMFG moments, the way only you write them!
Amanda..You’ll be back before you know it. You will be in my thoughts and prayers. You are truly special and have given us many special and lovely stories. I for one, thank you for sharing your stories. I’m looking forward to you coming back with even more adventures. Lots of hugs and love, my dear Amanda…
You my friend are an inspiration to us all,your going to be just fine,you seem like such a positive person,Cant say enough about your stories,except that i love, them all of them and will be thinking of you in the weeks ahead,Thankyou so much for shareing your talent and am sooo looking forward to reading lots more from you,Take care.
thanks a lot for this great chapter… will be crossing my fingers for you on feb 28, hope all goes really well and you’ll have nothing to worry about afterwards…take care :)
Amanda..you will certainly be in my thoughts and prayers as feb 28th approaches and a speedy recovery afterward. We will be waiting for your return…looking forward to another steamy chapter when you can!
Farewell Amanda, my prayers go out to you, and I hope for a great recovery.
Remember all your cute fans will be here waiting for your next chapter… so best of luck in ur surgery and get well soon… like real sooooon ;)
my prayers are with you, God speed!!!
i am an avid reader but a lazy commentor, i really enjoy your writing, you have such a talent for bringing us all on the ride with them, i luv it. my thoughts and prayers are with you and your family, you kick ass girl!!!!!!
40 pages i am so happy!!!!!!!!!!! 10 that u posted had me doing a back flip!!!!!!!!!!!!! hot omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hot hot please check your pm messages
hey Amanda…all my hopes and my prayers will be with you on the 28th, I really hope that u’ll feel better. Thank u for sharing ur story, wonderful as always, good luck and get well soon!
Amanda, I will be thinking of you in the next few weeks…I hope that all goes well.
Hey my favorite Lady. My prayers will be with you and your family. Tell your husband Thanks for taking care of you ,not just for your family,but for the Fan Fiction family that cares and love you Betty
All my hopes with you. Do you know that reading your stories is SOOO important for us,”silent readers”…It has such a real inner meaning. Take care of yourself and be back soon.
Amanda, I am so sorry to hear that you are not well. I will be praying for your speedy recovery. Just remember that you have a lot of readers out there who care about you. You have brought so much joy into my life, and I am grateful I got to know you. Please know that you are always in my thoughts, because you have made a difference in my life. So, get well soon, and come back to us with your many beautiful stories.
Thank you so much for all the amazing stories you have shared with us. I know this is not the last by a long shot- but you still deserve a thank you. Good luck with everything! My thoughts are with you!
Amanda, great work as usual:o). You will be in our thoughts and prayers now, on the 28th, and there after. I thank God that your husband found a way to trick you into getting the test. A GOOD man is hard to find, hold on to that one. Listen to your doctors and take it easy. You and your family are in my thoughts and prayers :o)
wowie.. im so short on time that took me two sittings to read! amazing chapter! as for you :( I’m scared, thoughts are with you, just remember to keep positive and let people fuss over you!, youre so clearly a mother hen type person, just you sit back and let people take care of you, ok you deserve it babe, and we’ll be waiting for those chapters ;) :D hehe.. they do say laughter is the best remedy, so if your sat infront of a computer at any point during ur recovery and need a :jester: remember munkies at gmail dot com (via msn) :) always happy to cheer ya up :) :D :jester: keep the chin up and I’ll be speakin to ya soon :) Remember we’re all meetin up for the next convention.. so u aint goin anywhere, i owe ya a drink :D *hugs*
Amanda, hope everything will go well and best wish to you and take care of yourself. This chapter is unfuckingbeleivable and loving it. Thanks! We will missed you!