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***Latin Business… or something else??*** –Chapter21
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Previously…
“Ok, ladies, since we all have to go to work tomorrow ho-”
“You don’t work Alice”Stated Bette jokingly
“Hey!”
“Fine, fine!” Said Bette, throwing her hands in the air, defeated
“As I was saying, how about we just go for a coffee? You don’t wanna be wasted tomorrow morning”
“Ok, let’s go get that coffee…”Said Marisol , walking out the room with the girls behind
“We know the perfect place”Said Aliec
The 4 girls hopped in the blue SAAB, destination: The Planet…
TBC…
The Planet…
The girls sat at their usual table- the gang’s table- and made themselves comfortable. It didn’t take much, since they all were getting along pretty well
“Ok, ladies, I’ll go get something to drink, May I take your order, please?”Asked I sabel with a smile
“Oh, you don’t have to” protested Bette, getting up
“No, it’s fine, really. I’ve got it”Said Isabel firmly, stopping Bette and making her sit again
“Well, in that case, I’ll just have a latte, please” Said Bette defeated, smiling
“And for you, Alice?”
“Oh, you’re such a doll! I’ll have a cappuccino, please vetry please?” Said Alice with puppy dog eyes
“Got it. And chamomile tea for you, right Marisol?”
“Yep” Said Marisol, smiling
“Be right back” She said, leaving to the counter
“She’s cute, don’t you think?”Asked Alice
“Yeah. Such a nice kid” Agreed Bette
“Yeah, she really is a good girl” Said Marisol “She’s been through a lot but she always has that smile for you, you know?She’s the one who helped me to get the jobs I have here and she’s been amazing with everything: finding a decent place to live in, the transition from spanish to english, she even came with me to every single class of the first week so I wouldn’ get lost. She’s very sweet”
“Really?”Asked Alice arching an eyebrow, unnoticed by Marisol but not by Bette
“(kicking Alice’s leg under the table)Hey, I’m not trying to intrude or be nosey, but, what’s the story with her family? Her face saddened instantly when she mentioned it earlier and-”
“She talked to you about that?!” Blurted out Marisol, cutting Bette off “Uh… sorry… I, I mean… she stills tends to be very shy at first, so it… ahem, it surprises me she had opened up so easily to mention her family” she said, feeling a little sorry abou her friend “I guess she really likes you, guys”she stated with a smile
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That was a pretty intense chapter. I won’t ask questions, but it definitely sounded like a story that needed to be told.
You really need to write this story. To many young people needs to read this thanks
Wow that was sad for Isabel and can’t wait to see her telling Marisol about her feeling. OK post soon please, thanks!
Wow hun, Umm wow guess I can’t say much on here, but that was intense… Sorry didn’t comment on the other stories, had a wirlwind of a week and yeah… But yeah.. I’ll talk to ya later on on msn maybe. Take care hun. *hugs you*
Hola Isabel….De verdad que tu historia es muy buena….lei como doce capitulos seguidos…la historia me atrapó..muy intensa. A mi me encanta “Valio la pena”, es una de las canciones que siempre le dedico a mi novia. Soy de República Dominicana, me encanta bailar salsa, asi que ya te puedes imaginar que tanto me gusta tu historia…mi e-mail es andreysi@hotmail.com…Me gustaría conocerte más y asi hacer una nueva amiga..!!! And..Post soon, I’ll be waiting!
Wow that was so intense and so sad….but also so full of life. I really hope that by writing this story you’re healing. Thanks for this beautiful and wonderful chapter, I’m looking forward to more, because it’s addictive :o))
true that was intense.great writing.loved it.can’t wait to see the differente couples.I’m looking forward to the next postage