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***Latin Business… or something else??*** –Chapter21
“Well, we’ll make sure she always does, right Porter?!”
“Right!” She said. They high5′ed
“I really appreciate it guys. I mean, she might seem all confident and happy most of the time, but it is just a cover you know? She tries to be the ‘tough-heartless-emotionless-guy’ in hard times even when she suffers a lot on the inside, but she does it just to be strong for everyone else. When we first met-”
“Well, here you go” Said Isabel, carrying a tray placing the cups in front of everyone’s places
“Thanks kid, how much is it?”
“My treat, and that goes for you too, Marisol”She said, pointing at Marisol, who was still getting some money our of her pocket
“Bu-”
“No buts”
“Fine, fine” She said, keeping her money -”But next time is my turn, entendido?” She said firmly
“S, seora”She said, before turning into english again “Fine” She cleared, defeated
“Hey, thanks Isabel, It is really nice of you”Said Bette, seeing that there was no point in arguing about paying her coffee
“It’s no big deal” she said “Now what were you talking about?”
“Well, I was about to tell her when we first met”
“Nooooo! It is so embarrassing!” She blushed
“Come on, just say it. Then, we will say how did Bette and I met” offered Alice
“Fine, fine, tell them… or should I?”
“Why don’t you tell them, I’ll just listen and make jokes about it” Marisol replied, getting a look from Isabel
“Ok, here it goes… Once upon a time..”Everyone chuckled “No, seriously guys. I had been recommended to start practicing relaxing activities, like sports, dancing, yoga and all that crap, or joining a reading cl-”
“You had been recommended?” Asked Alice with an arched eyebrow
Isabel was taken back by the question and didn’t say anything for some seconds. There was silence in the table and Marisol looked at Alice eyes wide opened as if saying ‘why did you just say that?!’ and the tension built with every second as Alice regretted being so inquirer about someone else’s life, but…
“It’s fine” Said Isabel, trying to reassure Marisol before continuing “Yes, my psychiatrist advised me to get involved in some … Hey, it’s fine, you don’t have to look so jaw dropped girls”she laughed softly watching Alice and Bette’s surprised faces hearing the P word coming from a 20 years old girl “A while ago I was diagnosed with a maniac depressive disorder, I was taking pills and the whole thing, but the good ol’ doc still recommended to practice sports or something like that, so I ended up signing in for dance lessons where Marisol was the…” She trailed off, seeing the still surprised faces in front of her “OK, fine just say it”
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That was a pretty intense chapter. I won’t ask questions, but it definitely sounded like a story that needed to be told.
You really need to write this story. To many young people needs to read this thanks
Wow that was sad for Isabel and can’t wait to see her telling Marisol about her feeling. OK post soon please, thanks!
Wow hun, Umm wow guess I can’t say much on here, but that was intense… Sorry didn’t comment on the other stories, had a wirlwind of a week and yeah… But yeah.. I’ll talk to ya later on on msn maybe. Take care hun. *hugs you*
Hola Isabel….De verdad que tu historia es muy buena….lei como doce capitulos seguidos…la historia me atrapó..muy intensa. A mi me encanta “Valio la pena”, es una de las canciones que siempre le dedico a mi novia. Soy de República Dominicana, me encanta bailar salsa, asi que ya te puedes imaginar que tanto me gusta tu historia…mi e-mail es andreysi@hotmail.com…Me gustaría conocerte más y asi hacer una nueva amiga..!!! And..Post soon, I’ll be waiting!
Wow that was so intense and so sad….but also so full of life. I really hope that by writing this story you’re healing. Thanks for this beautiful and wonderful chapter, I’m looking forward to more, because it’s addictive :o))
true that was intense.great writing.loved it.can’t wait to see the differente couples.I’m looking forward to the next postage