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Shane Awakes
She could feel it, unmistakable now, desire, Shane revealed in it. She’d been like a zombie these past few weeks. Since Cherie broke her. And that’s how she’d been feeling, broken, feeling it all the time. The drugs and mindless sex just weren’t distracting her the way they should. But tonight, just now, she felt it. She had started the night the way she always did. Walking straight to the bar for a shot, a beer, and a look around. Hoping that tonight someone would spark her interest. Though lately little did.
But there she was, in the DJ booth of all places, eyes closed for the moment, lost in the song that was just beginning. As the song picked up she opened her eyes and played to the crowd, spurring them on as the beat took hold. Shane finished her beer and quickly ordered two more. She made her way around the dance floor, slowly, she knew all eyes were turning towards her as she passed. And she hoped the crowd’s attention would draw her prey’s attention. It did.
Carmen was having a great time, she hadn’t quite worked her way up to spinning on a Saturday night yet, and it was nice to have this little taste. The crowd was electric, she could feel their energy coursing through her. She looked out over them, her attention drawn to a slim, beautiful, dark-haired woman who was slowly making her way to the DJ booth. Carmen’s heart skipped a beat, the closer the woman got the more she realized how beautiful she was. Carmen drank in the lean form, smoky eyes, and came to rest on an incredibly full mouth that was shaped into an ever so slight smirk.
Shane couldn’t help but smile a little, when the DJ noticed her, she had actually stopped the rhythmic swaying of her hips. Just for a beat. But it was enough to send a tingle up Shane’s spine. Enjoying the slightly dazed, hungry look in the woman’s eyes. She casually leaned against the booth and shouted up “Thirsty?”
Carmen mouthed her thanks, lightly caressing Shane’s slim fingers as she took the bottle and with a playful wink raised it to her lips. Shivering slightly as those smoky eyes shifted focus to watch her mouth as she drank. The smirk was suddenly gone, as Shane unconsciously bit her own lip. Carmen felt a jolt shoot up her spine. She smiled down at the mystery woman, before turning her attention back to the music. She had very nearly let the track run out. Taking a deep breath, she tried to regain her composure while she started the next song. But when she looked back, her distracter had vanished.
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(58 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
Teatime – what an absolutely fantastic story – uve captured Shane so well – excellently written – cant wait for more and more chapters – keep it up.Thanks again FAY
This story is awesome. I love alternate beginnings. It was great how you incorporated the “fuck you” line too. This definitely doesn’t seem like your first story. You used some really intelligent dialogue in there. This really brightened me up since Sharmen has a ton of dram on the show right now. I can’t wait for more!
Really great start. Luv how you changed the way they met. May be your first attempt at fanfiction (although it doesn’t appear that way :D ), it can’t be your first attempt at writing, cause this was AWESOME! Post soon.
I really REALLY loved your first meeting between the two, it was awesome. I hope you update soon, because this is definitely a fanfic I see myself becoming addicted to! :)
Keep it coming Teatime… this was a great beginning and I’d like to see how it develops. So… post more soon.
this was a great start. i like how its totally different than what really happened. makes it even more interesting and exciting to read. keep going with this. it’s really good.
Awesome start! Please continue!
great start. i’ll be waiting for the next one. Ü
I can’t belive that this is your first fic, you’re so good!!I loved everything about it, I could really picture all of it, I hope you update really soon!! 5 STARS!
Love it!!!!!!!! Cant wait for the next chap.
please update soon :D that was great :D
Wow…this was great!!! That was pure, simple and just awesome.I really enjoyed reading your story.Keep up the great work!!!