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Shane Awakes
Shane began making a beeline back to the bar, when she spotted Alice and Dana at a table just ahead. She knew it would be pointless to try and make a connection while the DJ was still spinning. Besides, less is more; she had made first contact, now she just had to wait. The curvy goddess would come to her. She was certain of that. She just had to distract herself in the meantime.
Alice smiled as she saw Shane walking towards them, reasonably sober and looking in a better mood than she had in a long while. “Hey there stud, how are the fish biting tonight?”
Shane rolled her eyes, then favored her friend with a wink, “we’ll have to wait and see.”
Shane took a drink from her beer, she knew it might be a long wait, and she didn’t really feel like wasting her energies on other girls tonight. She was grateful to have Alice and Dana to distract her. Though her disinterest didn’t seem to slow the frequent visits from willing women, offering her a drink or a dance.
Alice’s gears were turning, ever since Cherie, Shane had taken to her old ways. But Alice could see that she was on autopilot. She was colder and more distant, speeding through conquests faster than ever. Alice could tell she was going to hit bottom. But tonight she could see a certain glimmer in Shane’s eye, and stranger still, Shane was turning down every advance. At first she was still turning on the charm, smiling sweetly at each girl, and implying that maybe later she would take them up on their offer. But she seemed to be getting more and more agitated as the night progressed, curtly turning down her admirers with a quick, “sorry, I’m waiting for someone.” Alice was still trying to wrap her head around this latest Shane puzzle when a stunning Latina sidled up next to Shane and said Hi.
Shane was growing impatient, the heat she had felt when she had spotted the DJ was slowly fading. The longer she sat there the more her mind wandered to Cherie, and she could feel herself growing cold again. She really didn’t think she could wait till closing time when the music would stop, and she wasn’t sure she even cared anymore. She was half decided to just go home and get stoned out of her mind when she felt yet another girl approach. The words were out of her mouth almost before she heard the greeting “sorry, I’m waiting for someone” she spouted like a recording.
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(58 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
Teatime – what an absolutely fantastic story – uve captured Shane so well – excellently written – cant wait for more and more chapters – keep it up.Thanks again FAY
This story is awesome. I love alternate beginnings. It was great how you incorporated the “fuck you” line too. This definitely doesn’t seem like your first story. You used some really intelligent dialogue in there. This really brightened me up since Sharmen has a ton of dram on the show right now. I can’t wait for more!
Really great start. Luv how you changed the way they met. May be your first attempt at fanfiction (although it doesn’t appear that way :D ), it can’t be your first attempt at writing, cause this was AWESOME! Post soon.
I really REALLY loved your first meeting between the two, it was awesome. I hope you update soon, because this is definitely a fanfic I see myself becoming addicted to! :)
Keep it coming Teatime… this was a great beginning and I’d like to see how it develops. So… post more soon.
this was a great start. i like how its totally different than what really happened. makes it even more interesting and exciting to read. keep going with this. it’s really good.
Awesome start! Please continue!
great start. i’ll be waiting for the next one. Ü
I can’t belive that this is your first fic, you’re so good!!I loved everything about it, I could really picture all of it, I hope you update really soon!! 5 STARS!
Love it!!!!!!!! Cant wait for the next chap.
please update soon :D that was great :D
Wow…this was great!!! That was pure, simple and just awesome.I really enjoyed reading your story.Keep up the great work!!!