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More Than a Feeling
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Chapter 4
Tina and Dana met in the schoolyard the next morning, talking as if Dana hadn’t revealed she was a lesbian the night before. It was in the back of both their minds, but Tina wanted to respect Dana’s wishes to keep silent and Dana seemed to be following along.
"I’ve known you for how long now and I still can’t believe you only bring one notebook to school with you." Dana said, pointing to Tina’s lone spiral notebook, that she had under her arm.
Tina just shrugged. "Hey, it has like three subjects in it. I’m not a total loss."
"You have like five classes Tina, not counting gym and lunch."
"Yeah, but I never take notes in English and–" Tina was cut off by a football making a hard connection with her right shoulder blade. She flinched and hissed as it bounced over her shoulder and landed at her feet in the grass. Dana brought her hands up to her mouth, stifling a surprised yelp.
"Oh my God!" Dana muffled through her hands. "Are you all right?"
Rubbing her shoulder, Tina nodded. "Yeah, where the hell did that come from?" Tina bent down, grabbed the ball and stood up, looking for the culprit. Her breath hitched in her throat. A tall, well-built brown-haired boy was running her way.
"Hey, sorry about that. Are you okay?" He asked, his deep, smooth voice penetrating her ear canal, making her brain send signals to her cheeks, which in turn heated up and turned red.
"You almost took her head off." Dana answered angrily, crossing her arms. "Watch where you throw that thing."
He glanced at Dana before looking back at Tina. Smiling, he leaned forward and gently removed the football from Tina’s grasp. "I’m really sorry. My name’s Eric. Eric Montague."
Biting her lip, Tina asked, "Like Romeo?"
Eric nodded, laughing a little. "Kind of. It’s actually pronounced, ‘Mon-tay-gue’ but everyone messes it up."
"How interesting." Dana muttered sarcastically, earning an elbow jab from Tina.
"I’m Tina Kennard. It’s pronounced just like it sounds."
"So, Tina Kennard, are you okay?" Eric asked, ignoring Dana.
Tina nodded. "Yeah, more stunned than anything else."
"I still feel bad though. Let me make it up to you."
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poor alice who stuck with a satan’s son LOL…and soon to be poor bette when she finds out about tina and eric…hmmm, i hope it won’t take them too long to get together and fell in love
Great chapter Mandy but I don’t like cliffhangers!!! am I supposed to wait for another chapter to read about the “study date”???? Lol, good job!
The reason Alice is so messed up She has Lenora for a mother and now is stuck with Son Of satan. thanks
this is soo cute…
Manda for President! How is it that you always manage to post when I need it the most? I just watched Sunday’s episode and that shit was draining! In addition to Ilene being responsible for the boom in people entering therapy, she’s also going to be responsible for the staggaring increase in the sale of hard liquor. Now’s the time to buy stock in Jack Daniel’s, people! Manda, please continue to post often. This story kicks ass.
Good chapter. This is good and let see Bette and Tina do a project, Alice is funny. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
Your story is lovely, funny, and very refreshing in this season of B&T hell. Keep the good things coming.
I love your story, yet Tina’s “shiver that traveled up and down her spine” yuck with Eric and ambivalence towards Bette worry me. I don’t know, I think in some fvcked up way I’m still reeling from the horror that was ep 3×09. Damnit, B&T are so terrific together, forever…
Totally F*ck%n love this story, the dialogue Between Bette and Alice is a classic, my sister keeps looking at me cause i keep laughing out loud….Keep the chapters coming…
I finally got to read this chapter after having to wait about 3 hours before I could find the time to do so. LOL SLC boy (loved the letters…reminds me of SLC Punk with Matthew Lillard) reminded me of a black-haired freaky version of Bo Bice from last year’s American Idol. Tina’s got some spunk! If she goes out with ol “Romeo” he better not try to push her into anything. I could see Bette kicking his ass. Actually Dana kicking it would be even better since she’s Tina’s best friend. Please post again soon!
I love how enchanted Bette is with Tina. Tina please be wary of the football players they’re usually trouble.
This is so great, but looks like B&T have a long way ahead off them with Eric in the picture….
Hey, I just discovered your story and I think it’s great. Brings back memories of high school. “Oh yes, the Pieszecki family have always loved aquamarine. Generations upon generations have chosen aquamarine as their favorite color. No Pieszecki has ever chosen differently” Man, that cracked me up so bad! I love your story, keep writing!