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More Than a Feeling
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"How would you go about that?"
"Let me buy you lunch, if that’s all right?"
"Hmmm…" Tina pretended to seriously contemplate it. "Let me think about it."
"Will you be in the cafeteria?"
Suddenly, the bell rang and Dana grabbed Tina’s arm, beginning to drag her away. Tina turned as she walked away, nodding in Eric’s direction. He just waved.
Once they reached their lockers, Dana released her kung-fu grip on Tina’s arm. "Jesus Dane, what’s wrong with you?" Tina asked, rubbing her arm.
"Eric Montague, Tina? Are you kidding?"
"What? He’s cute."
"Yeah, he’s also a senior and the school’s biggest player, you know that."
"So? I’m not marrying him Dane; he’s just buying me lunch. School lunchstuff that costs like, a dollar."
"Oh, so you’re actually going to let him buy you lunch?" Dana asked, leaning on her locker, the anger evident in her voice.
Tina shrugged. "I’m going to think about it." On the receiving end of Dana’s glare, Tina just scoffed and rolled her eyes. "Come on Dane, it’s not the end of the world. It’s just–"
"Lunch." Dana interrupted, putting her hands on her hips.
"Yeah. So don’t worry so much!" Tina grabbed Dana by the upper arms and shook her, making the brunette chuckle. "All right?"
After some hesitation, Dana finally relented. "Yeah."
"Okay." Tina gave her friend a quick hug. "I gotta get to class. See you later."
"All right." Dana said, opening her locker as Tina dashed down the hallway.
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"Oh God," Alice whined as she and Bette stepped in front of the classroom. "I don’t want to go in there."
"Come on." Bette said, grabbing Alice’s hand.
"No, let’s cut!" Alice exclaimed, grabbing Bette’s wrist and beginning to pull her away from the classroom.
"It’s the second day of school!"
"Never too early."
"Fine, you cut. I’m going in." Bette stated, releasing Alice’s arm and walking inside.
"No…Bette…arrgh!" Alice said, throwing her hands up in the air as stomped into the classroom. Bette was already seated, smiling at her friend. Pouting, Alice took her seat, crossed her arms and sent Bette an icy glare.
"What? You could’ve cut." Bette stated.
"No, I can’t cut by myself. What am I supposed to do alone?" Alice argued. "God, I need more friends."
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poor alice who stuck with a satan’s son LOL…and soon to be poor bette when she finds out about tina and eric…hmmm, i hope it won’t take them too long to get together and fell in love
Great chapter Mandy but I don’t like cliffhangers!!! am I supposed to wait for another chapter to read about the “study date”???? Lol, good job!
The reason Alice is so messed up She has Lenora for a mother and now is stuck with Son Of satan. thanks
this is soo cute…
Manda for President! How is it that you always manage to post when I need it the most? I just watched Sunday’s episode and that shit was draining! In addition to Ilene being responsible for the boom in people entering therapy, she’s also going to be responsible for the staggaring increase in the sale of hard liquor. Now’s the time to buy stock in Jack Daniel’s, people! Manda, please continue to post often. This story kicks ass.
Good chapter. This is good and let see Bette and Tina do a project, Alice is funny. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
Your story is lovely, funny, and very refreshing in this season of B&T hell. Keep the good things coming.
I love your story, yet Tina’s “shiver that traveled up and down her spine” yuck with Eric and ambivalence towards Bette worry me. I don’t know, I think in some fvcked up way I’m still reeling from the horror that was ep 3×09. Damnit, B&T are so terrific together, forever…
Totally F*ck%n love this story, the dialogue Between Bette and Alice is a classic, my sister keeps looking at me cause i keep laughing out loud….Keep the chapters coming…
I finally got to read this chapter after having to wait about 3 hours before I could find the time to do so. LOL SLC boy (loved the letters…reminds me of SLC Punk with Matthew Lillard) reminded me of a black-haired freaky version of Bo Bice from last year’s American Idol. Tina’s got some spunk! If she goes out with ol “Romeo” he better not try to push her into anything. I could see Bette kicking his ass. Actually Dana kicking it would be even better since she’s Tina’s best friend. Please post again soon!
I love how enchanted Bette is with Tina. Tina please be wary of the football players they’re usually trouble.
This is so great, but looks like B&T have a long way ahead off them with Eric in the picture….
Hey, I just discovered your story and I think it’s great. Brings back memories of high school. “Oh yes, the Pieszecki family have always loved aquamarine. Generations upon generations have chosen aquamarine as their favorite color. No Pieszecki has ever chosen differently” Man, that cracked me up so bad! I love your story, keep writing!